96Ryan

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Her master is her obsession? *Proceeds to stick her tongue down another maids throat as soon as she is affected by her masters charm skill*...? Anyone else confused?

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96Ryan

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Anyone else think the chicken being the closest the Han Jue is absurd? Why would staying in seclusion with him the most equal closest? He said countless times before that as more time passes relationships with those he doesn't interact with get more distant. Yet he barely ever interacts with the chicken now and even in the past when he did often interact with the chicken it was only ever to brainwash it to have agoraphobia because he didn't want it to cause him trouble.

ch 545 Chaotic City, Dijun

Top Tier Providence, Secretly Cultivate for a Thousand Years

Eastern · Let me laugh

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This idea is extreme stupid. Both sides gain nothing and instead suffer. The Mcs disciple is enslaved, Mc controls his life and death, and Mc loses an incarnation...

Su Qi's soul was still in his hand. He had just entered a deep sleep. If Su Qi was reincarnated into the Chaotic Fiendcelestial's body…

Top Tier Providence, Secretly Cultivate for a Thousand Years

Eastern · Let me laugh

96Ryan

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What would the women being able to use the harem seal do? After the MC uses the harem seal ability on his women all the effects apply to both the MC and his women anyway right?

Last but not the least, [Harem Seal], for some reason, his woman can't use this ability even though it is an Active Skill.

96Ryan

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Reverse world still seems only partially reversed. Standard world is women more commonly getting plastic surgery to look more beautiful. So wouldn't reverse world be men are the ones more commonly getting plastic surgery? I would think men would care more about their appearance in a reverse world and women would care less.

In a way, I am thankful that we are poor because if we had the money, I am 100% sure that mom would have removed those beautiful breasts with some surgery.

96Ryan

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What? I get this is a reverse world but this makes no sense. This is like saying normal world logic is men who have big dicks get surgery to make them smaller because women like small dicks. This is a reverse world - gender standards, not a reverse world - what men are attracted to right?

But obviously, this has its problems. Her breasts are a complex for her. In this world, having big breasts is not something well seen. The most common surgeries in this world are not plastic as in mine, but reductive surgeries, removing much of the women's breasts.

Reversal

Fantasy · Eroos

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He was only a mortal with a special healing ability mutation before. Where does his confidence in controlling himself after a goddess, or at least a god like being magically warps his personality come from? His confidence in controlling himself, reads less like confidence and more like arrogance.

He could take it. Greed or not, he always had a knack for stealing. The best thing he ever stole was his superior's wife and made her moan under him, only because the man refused to give him more assignments. He was confident in controlling his desires, so it wasn't a problem.

Marvel: Angel of Death

Movies · Amon_The_Fisherman

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Riel has no affinity other than spirit magic, so is his Mana useless? Also why does his spirit bloodline he inherited from his previous life give him spirit magic affinity but his current life demon bloodlines and inherited angel bloodlines not give him any affinities?

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Fantasy · _oinkchan

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Honestly while i understand the hate for the manipulative sister and jerk half brothers, he should hate the evil spirit even more. Forcibly manipulating his emotions is far worse than what they did.

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Yandere Sect

Fantasy · Ru_ri

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Either way I'm glad you had her understand death law. Ice and Yin are great but overused for female characters so at least having her main focus on something else like death would be nice. Along with the ability to create undead armies with necromancy type abilities it would be fun to see just the two, her and the main character, destroy some enemy sect in the future together.

More than 4 hours passed like this until Liu Mei opened her eyes.

Monarch of Time

Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian

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I'm all for her comprehending the law of death, but isn't this too easy? The first contact with death energy she has and in just a little more than 4 hours she easily grasped it? Compared to how long it took the main character with the constant help of the stone of time, a Cultivation technique made to help in sensing time laws, & the fact the main character is likely the reincarnation of a God of time, it just seems ridiculous.

More than 4 hours passed like this until Liu Mei opened her eyes.

Monarch of Time

Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian

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So the copied skill really is only 3 minutes. Unless it eventually reaches the point he can permanently copy high rank skill. I would have preferred the skill just giving an even higher learning speed bonus and removing the 'the copy an F rank skill for 3 minute once a week' part. As while learning twice as fast as other does make him talented, it definitely doesn't make him a genius. His 'cheat' skill doesn't even feel like an S Rank let alone SS rank skill

[Skills Mastered: Basic Dagger Mastery LV2, Slashing LV2]

Elite Mages' Academy

Sci-fi · The Final Fool

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Novel is enjoyable but the main character is extremely unlikable, and many characters are just unreasonable. The main character personality is horrible, he bullies a person for a pretty girl when the girl was the one being unreasonable. The main character is unintelligent, his bodies age is 13 but his is a transmigrator so why does he easily get manipulated into owning a favor by a 14 year old girl? Another unreasonable character is the Sect Master. personality. After making a breakthrough the main character shabby hut im the outer Sect area is destroyed. The Sect Leader is happy about it but then sees the main character smiling. Some how that makes him arrogant(he can't be happy making a major breakthrough?) and so the sect leader makes bs excuses giving him a huge debt that is countless times higher than what he destroyed. Not only is the annoying but it is also stupid. While would the sect leader seek to punish the greatest talent in his Sect for an obviously bs reason? Isn't he worried about pushing him away leaving to another sect...

Godly Talent System

Fantasy · Get_Diabetes

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This main character really has the worst grandparents. His entire life seems too have already been decided for him which is sad. If I were him I would do my best to find way to escape their control lest he up end up like his father a puppet emperor...

"Good." Yanlu Rou smiled in satisfaction. She wanted the two to get along well, so she needed to push Jin Rou to take care of Syni Su. After all, they would get married in the future and Jin Rou was the very core of this matter, "Then I want you to get me two Blue-saint Flowers on the Ancestral Grounds, you can return anytime you want. It's not like we are in a hurry. So take your time."

The Adventures Of The Young Master

Eastern · Brei

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'One hit kill a mortal beast at one minor stage, or the same stage higher.'

-Middle Stage of Foundation Establishment-

The Way of The Dao

Action · Riixhiie

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If a human with immoral essence can't one hit kill a mortal beast with likely an insignificant bloodline, they must be very weak in the higher realms. Not to mention he has what seems to be sword made with immortal materials which the beast can somehow resist.

-Middle Stage of Foundation Establishment-

The Way of The Dao

Action · Riixhiie

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At first I like his mother she seemed to truly be a great parent but now at this point due to this and the last chapter I honestly just hate her. The chapter before she almost severely injured him because she was angry thinking her son wasn't taking his training seriously, which was bs. However now him taking the spar with his grandfather seriously and not holding back and striking him makes his mother feel her son disrespected his grandfather and she hits him?

ch 13 Strings & Blings

The Legend of Min Hong

Eastern · ORIGIN_ESSENCE

96Ryan

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Really hard to look at his mother and grandfather with respect with such and irrational & petty mindset. She is angry at him because he broke through in his palm technique and not the movement technique? His grandfather is disappointed in him for a single mistake? The speed he is learning is already insanely fast. As for her thinking he is not taking training the technique seriously that a loads of bs considering how hard he is training every day. Her irrational anger over his progress already far greater than her or his grandfather could get close to even just lead to her potentially severely injuring him if he didn't have a breakthrough just now. After that she shamelessly acts like she did it to help him but her reason was because she felt he wasn't paying attention and was already angry so she lashed out. Even afterwards her personality is shown to be even more disgusting that I thought. Although she us satisfied with his double breakthrough she wants to use sparing as an excuse to beat him up because she it still angry...

ch 12 Jade Primal Dragon Body - Phoenix Rebirth Phase

The Legend of Min Hong

Eastern · ORIGIN_ESSENCE

96Ryan

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How do you create smoothie? You grab juice, yogurt, frozen fruit and blend it. You don't just say create smoothie. As for how it would exactly works I don't know. Different novels have different mechanics. Some require chanting to cast spells, some require manipulating fiction types of energy or understanding of laws, how it works is for the author to come up with. That's part of the fun in novel learning about how the world the author created works, and for me at least that would be more enjoyable than a system that just uses abilities for him.

"AI Create a new Skill called Invisibility, it's only for me, no one can see me except the ones i choose to see"

God of Vampires

Fantasy · Sitouo

96Ryan

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Not sure why he wants to control it. I mean would anyone really be ok with another person and a dangerous one at that sharing their body? That dangerous bring already said that its his power right so why wouod he need it to use that power?

This sage is indeed right, I will choose what I will become, I will become the strongest not for vanity but only to protect myself and does dear to me. I vowed to control that thing one day not to let him control me. I'm me, nothing more, nothing less.

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Fantasy · Nickaido

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