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A cliffhanger as the end of the story? You have to be kidding me. At least end it at the end of a random case. But not in the midst of one and more importantly when finally something important regarding MC's past / identity is getting revealed.

A sweet story about two guys from different backgrounds, experiences and dreams and their story. If you are looking for a slice-of-life, light and sweet story that isn't just about love, here you go! Finally a completed comic that is actually completed!

And yet another "completed" story that isn't completed at all... it should be "discontinued" or "dropped" instead (Im not sure what it is here).

There isn't much about the story. A lazy, frivolous former demon king is looking for strong opponents because of a curse and gets involved in various missions because he has no sense for money and to much power. He is accompanied by a somewhat weak, naive, kindhearted hero whose goal is to ... what is her goal again? Paying off her/hid debths? Be strong enough to defeat the demon king(s)? The art is mostly well drawn. The characters are simple, nothing complex.

Why is it marked as completed?! It's not completed at all... I enjoyed the story until now. Beautiful drawings, an uncomplicated, funny, lighthearted story - and it ends just like that? In the midst of a fight?

It's discontinued

As the story is based on TKA, the story development and character design is bound to be great, maybe a bit slow here and there but with this drawing quality, no one should mind. The chapter length is accrptable as well.

The drawing quality is decent. From my point of view not as epic as other works on this site but good. The story gets more and more confusing. This might be because it's an adaption of a novel and many details are left out? I don't know the novel so I'm not sure. But many things are very unclear and suddenly the MC knows something out-of-the-blue that he never learned before and so on. The character design is good, the story refrains from overusing stereotypes.

The quality of the drawing is nice but sometimes the proportions of the characters are a bit off, mainly regarding the child. So far, the character design is very cliche. A misunderstood seemingly cold ML, a boy that acts way out of his supposed age, a mean girl-friend, a family that doesn't like the FL and only use her for their own good, ... The story so far (17ch) is ok, the chapters have some content and possible directions can be seen.

Short chapters and therefore very slow story development. The drawing quality is good for this kind of genre. I'm just not sure what the target audience should be? The characters are kind of flat. Either good or bad. Nothing special.

MC seems to be everything but a nice guy. Makes one wonder what his backstory is like. The art is really good, the story is sometimes a bit slow and sometimes I don't know what I'm reading...

Sadly, the characters are all drawn very... similar? I had problems to distinguish who is who... The art itself looks nice. So far, there was much information and text but barely any action. As I'm a big fan of the novel, I expect it to become less as the story goes on.