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I Have enjoyed this book so far, I'm on Ch.98/100 something (currently out), and would say I recommend at least giving it a read, because I like this author's world building, the only thing I want different in this series is less author comments made inside the book such as "he would find out he didn't have to worry about that" made me feel like it was a spoiler put into the book that kinda removed the thrill of not knowing.

This hasn't been updated in a year, but I hope the author continues it, because it is very unique in the way everything works in this series, it's very different from others I've read on this app.

Best story on here, in my opinion.The only improvement that can be made, (also in my opinion) is I felt like the main character, could have played around, as other creatures a bit more.

Really good story, doesn't feel like it runs on forever, and in fact i would like to read more of it if the side stories come out.

Has some grammatical errors but doesn't feel like it's been put through Google translate 20 times so a lot better then some books on here. The only other criticism I really have is that it feels like it rushes to its plot points too fast early on but if that changes I will change the review, If you put those two things aside tho the author does feel like they know where they want to go with the stories and it seems like it will be good just needs to rush the plot less.

it seems like a good story but I can't read it because it feels like it was written by Google translate and that causes me pain but if you don't mind that the I recommend.

This story is really good especially at the beginning but it has slowed down too much for me in the recent chapters. So I will have to come back to it later and because of this I highly recommend this book in the beginning and if you can handle having the slow progression of the later chapters other wise I think you should wait and once the story picks up again pick it up again.