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Yokubo: Neji summoning contract with chameleon or wolf i don't know its just a suggestion these animals are passively silent ones and powerful tooo.. but you don't want to trigger them like Hyuga nature silent serious people and can be deadly sometime...Reborn as Neji Hyuga with a system · C13
GrandpaWrath2: I want Shen Yue to have a gang of homies that are loyal to him. He wants to train others so that he could use them when he needs them. Shen Yue was normal person like you and I. He lives in a dangerous world and needs to be smart, cunning and calculative. Using others as your tools to survive is the current Shen Yue, he only cares about himself right now.Shen Yue Reborn · C10
Reborn As Harry Osborn - Marvel · C0
Ultimate Naruto System in a Different World · C20
GSHURA: Well, I do not know if you'll feel offended of my review or not or if you'll take my opinion into concederation or not but I want to give some point toward your story.
First of all, I can say that the idea of the story is quiet nice, the only thing that I disliked about it is making the enemy of the MC is the god.
Look I am not question your decision but I believe that it was to be best if you made his enemy quiet logical and reasonable not some overpowered being that the MC can never dream of beat up, I do not Know maybe some servant to the shinigami that ended taking the MC soul before his time.
In the place of apologizing or something he destroyed the MC book of fate to stop him from reincarnated, all of that to protect himself from the wrath of the shinigami.
Because of this in the place of reincarnated or going to heaven, the MC end up in hell were being tortured for something that he did not do.
With some kind of luck he was able to escape taking with him aizen legacy.
Do you see? I am not telling you what to do but you must give a proper reason to the MC transformation from someone normal to someone obsessed of becoming a God.
From what I see, you made the MC a copy of aizen sosuke with God complex.
He should learn from aizen mistakes.
Aizen was intelligent, talented but in the end he failed, because he did not have any friends, any people to support him or guide him and show him the right bath when he become lost.
You need to build his character.
Kyoga suigetsu can help in that by making him realize the importance of friendship and all of that especially as the MC thinking reassemble aizen's.
Well, maybe I am saying all of this because I hate evil character and enjoy reading about heroes and all of that but I hope that take my opinion into consideration.
And good luck.God's Path
OnePun: Hiruzen: Naruto, your strength increased a lot. How about I recommend you to the Jonin examination? 👮
Naruto: No way, old man I don't want to become a Jonin cause I will become Genin to Hokage in one go. 😏
Hiruzen: To become Hokage you have to defeat me.😎
Naruto: Sexy Jutsu. 💨👙💨
Hiruzen: RIP. 👻Naruto is Reincarnated · C17
Conquering the Multiverse With My Summoned Harems · C34
Morvian: be faster on copying it man, then we want to know if you will continue from what the author left on or not??~Tales of Demons and Gods- I am Shen Yue · C16
Morvian: this is the first time I felt respect for protagonist!~A Warrior's Path · C1
Azathothgrim: Well why not get get venom simbiot and then fullfill the wish of saying
"Eyes, lungs, pancreas ... so many snacks, so little time."
"We will eat both your arms, and then both of your legs, and then we will eat your face right off your head. You will be this armless, legless, faceless thing, won’t you? Rolling down the street, like a turd in the wind."
"We are VENOM"Fantasy System · C172
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