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Termax: Just so everyone knows there are other reasons besides the popularity of the novel that made me decide to end it.
I did not want to complain about certain things that made me lose interest in continuing it and there are also a couple of personal things going on in real life I do not wish to discuss that played a role in me needing to step away from writing for awhile. I wanted to try and end this on a good note without complaining and make others worry.
Thanks again and I am grateful to everyone for reading my novel!The Sovereignty System · C156
mythloving99: I'll start out by saying that I enjoyed this novel, go on to say that I have not given any power stones to it since around chapter 70. While the story was enjoyable, it was not engrossing. There was a major power imbalance with the MC's system, and while I love to read stories about an overpowered main character, this is only when there is a focus on character development, romance, etc. This story read more like a summary, and while enjoyable it felt like there was much lacking in character development and the interactions between MC and love interests. You had some great ideas, and I loved to see another kingdom building novel being written, however the story was crippled by rushing through character interaction and development, with both of the love interests being gained immediately after they were introduced. I wish you luck in your future writing endeavors and hope to see another story written by you on the power rankings at some point in the future. I would also recommend looking to this example if you wish to examine a story I believe has done a good job on what I felt was lacking in this novel.
https://***.royalroad.com/fiction/12798/shovels-in-spadesThe Sovereignty System · C156
ben538: I like this novel a lot so far. The MC is fairly fun and has a neat outlook on a lot of situations. While a lot of the same old tropes are hit, they are usually met with some unique or interesting twist. As long as the quality doesn't dip I can't complain about this book. Very good read.Lord of the Magical Beasts
Weirdo: We'll,from what I had read in review,this novel is definitely **** since only a reader will know another reader....Haters or not,it's all plain in our eyes....Not that this is bad,no...It's just not our cup of tea...So author guy,although I haven't read and most probably will not,I sincerely wish you good luck....Write everything you want,it's yours after all....Don't mind the critique since what you love may be what people hate.....So,just pour out your idea and chapter,someday you will find a great fans....Since old saying,another man trash is another man treasure...Keep it up,ignore the bad critique unless you are an M...Lord of the Magical Beasts
Dolamone: Do I hear something breaking? Yes I do! It seems like Jia Ming's heart!!! Ha ha ha...Alchemy Emperor of the Divine Dao · C723
soja: Bu Fang awoken another glutton😁 When Nethery, Nether King and Blacky meet, it can be called the Gathering of Shameless Gluttons. And fyi Nether King, it's not that Nethery hasn't been influenced by Blacky, just that she has since acquired a discerning palate since working in Bu Fang's restaurant.Gourmet of Another World · C588
goldensmoke: Zhang xuan: why?
Jian qinsheng: I heard they are giving away free spirit stone.
Zhang xuan suddenly disappeared. Distant echo of his voice rang out "what are you waiting for? Do you want me to carry you there? " 😂😂Library of Heaven's Path · C1416
Rivet: Let's be honest, mc probably didn't actually pass the insane test 😅Great Doctor Ling Ran · C2
TheeUnknownSaint: Odd Zhuo is scaring me lol. Too bad we didn't see Lotus Sun reaction to his impeccable absThe Daily Life of the Immortal King · C554
Thormented: There's quite a bit of research done into the caretaking of the pets imo. I'm pleasantly surprised since I assumed this novel would end up like most other novels involving a game system, most actions being determined and carried out by the system rather than the individual.Pet King · C18
AzureZero: Don't worry level 5 dao of the lonely is almost within reaches tho the bloodthirsty monster Qidian has been sucking our precious resources out of us stealing what precious knowledge we have... HahahahahahahahaMonster Pet Evolution · C1
TrueNoLifeKing: Yea, bro I'm already on Level 3 Spear of Lightning King
and Am working on
Level 4 Dao of patience
This dao is extremely hard to learnMonster Pet Evolution · C1
PDeath: Pitiful author/translator. He doesnt even know gow to throw a fireball or spew lightning. That is like level one spells.Monster Pet Evolution · C1
Gabriyael: stop relating who you are to the MC and expect him to act like you dickweed. if you're so darn smart get started with a story you made with your MC acting and thinking the way you want it too.The world turned into a game after I woke up
GRoy: Can I not agree with you on a few aspects?
The MC before returning, was a poor man, a fire mage who always stayed in the back lines, and was so poor that he had only elemental spells. He had no connections, no friends, no backing.
After returning, he decide to change his life. He goes on warrior path. Of course he stumble, from backup on front lines is a huge step. Even if he spend one year on learning military fight.
The Author has a few screw looses, with the stats and the effect, i agree with you, on speed and power. But INT doesn't make one smarter, it affects only mana manipulation, and capacity.
Try to read again, and pay attention to details.The world turned into a game after I woke up
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