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Pripriri: his blood is pretty broken but he keeps giving his blood on other people Haixt That really turns me off .
This is so stupid that makes me want to punch the author face.
Giving his blood makes people immortal for fvk sake can't just the author make it just for them to extend their life span? But with same regeneration than him too -.-[EMERALD]❇️
Nirerin: Author making his plot forced along by decreasing the mc intelligence and the intelligence of his servants...Fate/Heroes · C7
Astral_Ethics: Why look like goku, if he can go for the Vegito/Gogeta look instead?DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C1
Phrenzy: Yeah. At six Killua was already at floor 200 of the heavens arenaEndless Adventure · C6
Reader007: I am honestly criticize you :
1 ) Can you ensure your main character is safe after you throw him some unknown dangerous location? If it is in reality, I am sure you will not even be thinking born in a location near meteor city!!! Only advantage is in that place is you know nen stuff and there is no family. But he is already know nen basic stuff and Did you really think how he can get ID or travel outside world without ID ? YOUR CHOICES ARE ALL BASED ON LUCK AND DISADVANTEGED plus you can make more logical thinking outside of thrown garbage by family !!! Your first plan and all bad planning in second place are like two people randomy writing and do not know match two styles! If I am too harsh sorry but your writing style are like two people stick one and improve!Endless Adventure · C6
Ryuu23: Who in their right mind would choose a bad living condition? First of all, this will affect the parents of the "body". Hmm ...Endless Adventure · C4
Supernatural: Does the MC look like he's in his right mind for you? I mean the first thing he said when he met God is "Santa-Claus"Endless Adventure · C4
lazy22: If he was going to wish for an immortal soul couldn't he still reincarnate as a pillar men. He'd just have to reincarnate as a child pillar men.Endless Adventure · C4
overgodMonarch: You want perfection huh. Perhaps you for got about lord Mayuri sama quote”The 'perfect being',you said? Well.... I have to tell you the honest truth,as I see it. In this world, nothing perfect exists. It may be a cliche,after all... but it's the way things are. That's precisely why ordinary men persue the concept of perfection,it's infatuation....
But ultimately,I have to ask myself: what is the true meaning of being perfect?
And the answer I came up with was: nothing. Not. One. Thing.
The truth of the matter is,I despise perfection. If something is truly perfect,that's it.
The bottom line becomes.
There is no room for imagination. No space for intelligence. Or ability. Or improvement! Do you understand?!
To men of science like us,perfection is a dead end,a condition of hopelessness! Always strive to be better than anything that came before you,but not perfect. Scientists agonize over the attempt to achieve perfection!
That's the kind of creatures we are. We take joy in trying to exceed our grasp and trying to reach for something that,in the end,we have to admit,may in fact be unreachable!
In other words...
You may think that we operate on the same level,but you are wrong. The moment you talked about perfection,you embraced an impossible concept and already lost to me....
that is,of course,if you are indeed a scientist,at all...<Endless Adventure · C3
Azusa_Aikawa: I think it is stupid, because real school need money for building, transportation, there is also a fuking bullies when he have a fuking chip on his bone but did not have a hidden camera on his school cafetaria...Dungeon Core Online · C2
Espectador: Maldito rato fedorento, seja espancado mas não seja um covarde, perca seus dentes mas não seu orgulho!Dungeon Core Online · C1
Zerzuskan: Just wanted to say that the author is deleting every bad review on his story which heavily influences the overall score... just that you knowDungeon Core Online · C1
Kerail: Feels like beginner writers first story. Well I do hope the author develops his writing and gets better. A lot of the game backround feels similar to some popular mmorg books. If you really like game books you may try to read it thow.
Just some points why I droped it:
Real world itself makes no sense.
Mc feels like robot (just motions no feeling).
The bad guys are morons as in arrogant characters with no brains.
The game has been there 100 years and no one has discovered that you should act nice with npc to get quests?MMORPG: The Tales of Souls
Slayer of Babylon · C2
TheScarlet_Raven: Well, sorry I will try to improve myself. Thx for the comment :)Slayer of Babylon
Gutterstomp: Well there’s spelling mistakes in every second sentence and I feel like the author doesn’t understand what the readers are implying when they try to help and the structure of the story is a little inconsistent but hey, atleast he posts a chapter regularly.Slayer of Babylon
Fate/Heroes · C7
Nirvanic_Sun: Years saving up points and he used 0 of them to get stronger because the plot hasn't started? Getting something better than all 4 of his wishes easily because of dragon and wolf symbolism, or is it because of the one above all? (the second one makes no sense, the one above all watched an infinite amound of ragnaroks so that the beyonders could harvest the energy released at the end of the universe without giving a sh!t about it. Why would he care about the speck of less than dust known as winston?) The appraisal ability would be usless to Identify objects since winston was a marvel fanatic and he already knows how strong everyone is. Anyone decently trained in fighting could also easily tell how strong someone is. Your giving excuses, not answers.Marvels Number1 Assassin
TheLittleFatty: Hey guys! I'd like to apologize again for the slow updates of chapters. As some of you might know, I don't have a lot of free time. My driving time to and from work totals over 3 hours daily. Along with overtime, you can see that anytime I write up a chapter means that I'm sacrificing sleep, which is dangerous for someone who drives as much as I do on an almost daily basis. But as I promised before, this novel will be seen through to the end. Unfortunately, I have to work a lot since I have a lot of things I'm behind on in payments. I know this is usually private stuff, but I want you guys to know that it's definitely not because I'm being lazy or anything like that at all. Life just happens. Rest assured, the novel will not be dropped.(I know that's the main concern of a lot of people. The other being more constant updates.) Thank you for understanding! <3 Also, Webnovel now censors the word that starts with P and ends with atreon, so I'll stop posting it from here on out, as I'm afraid they might ban me from the site.The One Luna · C96
Elude: All my reviews are truthful (The way I review originals and translations are different), I'm not going to try and inflate anyone's egos if the book doesn't justify it.
Writing Quality 4/5: The transitions are pretty smooth, nothing much to say here. (There are naturally your occasional grammar mistakes, but I'm not going to nit-pick something so miniscule. These occasional bumps in the writing have no major effect on the actual flow of the writing, which is really good for an ******* writer on WN; where english isn't the first language for many of the readers/writers.) E.g, In this novel you get your occasional use of 'Superfluous Commas', (where the writer uses a comma before because even though it is not necessary.)
Examples of the types of minor errors I'm talking about,
Unlike his demon family who only respected him, because of his power
(Now, your typical extremely minor mistakes.)
Kretos tried to speak, but was unable to. It would seem that his body wasn't develop enough to do such a thing.
- Let's be honest here, we all know that it should be 'developed' and our eyes would auto-correct it pretty quickly anyway.
It was at this point in time, Kretos lifted his arms he finally noticed that his arms were small and dainty.
This was not the arm of the supreme overlord, this was the arms of a baby.
(Alright, it doesn't take a genius to recognize that these two sentences aren't perfect. Yet, we as your average readers can easily understand the general plot and direction the author is heading with.)
Stability of Updates 5/5: The updates appear punctual (good to see)
Story Development: The story is primarily about the MC progressing to become more 'human', he enjoys the warm feeling of love and care from a paternal family which is progress.
Character Design: So far I can say that reading only 10 chapters, the MC has character. I admired the way he greeted his son's betrayal, even though it's not very 'realistic' in human terms I still enjoyed reading it nevertheless. Perhaps I've grown tired of the common trope, 'You, a haughty young master stared at my girl? Prepare for the nine familial exterminations.' Yet, this is also the character's double-edged sword. (You get the feeling that since he can greet death so casually, why won't he just do the same in his next life? — This may just be my own personal agenda against tropes like these, many readers would enjoy this type of MC though, so no massive complaints here.)
The writer is able to give a seperate and unique personality to his main cast, so it doesn't feel like that we the readers are reading 2D cardboard cut-outs.
So here's my conclusion, if you enjoy the magical world of 'elves', 'demons' etc you will probably enjoy this novel. Personally, it's not my cup of tea, the novels I enjoy are less main-stream. (The types of MC I admire also differ to this type of MC portrayed by the writer, but I can't comment on 'Writing Quality' in the review due to my personal preferences.)
Overall Review: 4/5 (For an original it's definitely above average, but would I compare it to the likes of a novel like CCG, or perhaps even the averagely translated Shadow Hack? No fucking way.)
My personal recommendations: Doomed To Be Cannon Fodder, Transmigator Meets Reincarnator, EMHS, Lord Xue Ying
If anyone wants me to do an in-depth review, simply @reply to me in one of my reviews and I'll do a truthful in-depth review if I can actually understand the flow of the writing.
(I write these reviews so that the section for determining whether someone reads a story is actually truthful and not full of deceit.)Demon Lord's Reincarnation
fearlessj2008: It is funny thinking about a cat being able to transform and sleeping with ot the whole time. Well still wonder what happen with the sister since it mention the whole fan of cats and then she disappears.An Elementalist at Hogwarts · C1
a_man_has_no_body: Thanks for the comment
1. I created a new devil fruit because using existing ones, I will have to keep following their existing powers too. And in Marvel, there are beings that could snuff out galaxies in an instant. Those devil fruits would not be able to keep up with them.
2. Angerboda is the mother of Hela in the comics and in Norse myth. Though Odin is not her father, since Thor said to the guardians that Hela is his half-sister, unless Odin is not the father of Thor, I could only change the wife of Odin
3. The choice of the swords is not permanent, and right now, MC had already changed it. He did not use katanas anymore.Asgardian Sword God
Foxo: Honestly a bit disappointing. First off the characters backstory seems completely inconsequential with the mcs personality. He’s supposed to be an experienced killer who was betrayed but you see nothing to support the effect this would have on an actual person. No distrust of others whatsoever, to the point that he completely trusts the first person he meets and tells them EVERYTHING about him. This makes no sense at all. The only reasonable explanation I can find is that he trusts her because she’s a girl. There are some other minor issues but this is the one that made me lose all interest in this character. It’s fine if you want to gradually rehabilitate the mc but do it slower not within the first 2 chapters. It’s almost like the main character described in the synopsis was a completely different character that the author scrapped as soon as they started writing and never went back to change the synopsis of the novel.New Earth- The Dungeon of Madness
Sadarsa: Wait....Harem? *sigh* well crap...Playing with other Supernaturals · C13
Efthee: Yea and this one was good as well. He said no harem in the start as wellPlaying with other Supernaturals · C13
cade2065: Yeah, it was a pretty good read to...smhPlaying with other Supernaturals · C13
LuxVonDeux: Harem really? And here i thought you just want single pairing welp search another story we goPlaying with other Supernaturals · C13
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