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If you think it is a good thing that people are respectful to other readers, you should not cut yourself too short you are a person after all too.

Sleep well, you need strength to churn out more chapters for me :O Now that you mention it, Blue was used by pretty much everyone, his compensation was to be OP, but not in a healthy sense plot-wise. I hope you didn't misunderstand. I wasn't knocking your description of the smexy times themselves. In one chapter you used v***** 4 times in a row, and while certainly descriptive, c***, p****, t***, and q*** are as brash and keep the flow going :D Oh god, what have I become...

This is what Blue Core lacked or should have been. Great pace, witty plot twists, smexy scenes, and great world-building. Two critiques from my side. I don't think it is beneficial to reveal the MC's background that "easily" the mystery is often that carries the story, to hunger for more knowledge. The other point is to read up on synonyms for reproductive parts :D