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This is a extremely horrible cliffhanger

ch 67 Chapter 67: Strange Predicament!

DxD: As a Gamer In Filthy World

Anime & Comics · Orael

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I'm sad to see this get dropped. I genuinely enjoyed this fic.

ch 46 Dropped - Sorry

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Replied to SavageKirin

i had the same thought

2: MC vs Logan is a brawl rather then weapons so no blood left behind

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Should have what's being said in ” to make it easier for people to know when someone is talking. It makes it stand out more in my opinion. example: "Good morning, how are you?"

ROB: Good morning, Abel, as you can see, you may be thinking, I am Rob, an immensely powerful being, I am part of a legion of omnipotent beings, but who are immensely bored.

Ice King (Harry Potter fanfic)

Book&Literature · FanboyDeowerpower

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Started to repeat

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I dont like how this turned out, but its not gonna stop me from reading.

This book has been deleted.

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force user

(Which path do you think Jial will take?)

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Conversations should be the only thing that use "talking" while thoughts should use 'think'. By doing so you make it easier to tell when someone is thinking or talking.

ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Leo's Accidental Magic. ( Rewritten).

Harry potter :Stifen Grindelwald

Movies · Sanjay_K_L

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same chapter twice in one chapter

ch 19 Ch. 19: The Unforgivable Curses.

Cornelius looked at the now-dead body of his supposed friend with a smile still on his face and said ''Sorry buddy, it was nothing personal. but I can't bear to eat another damn apple on this island'' Cornelius then picked up a knife and handled it deftly between his fingers

One Piece : Satan

Anime & Comics · DiaboV

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I don't mind since I think it would make gathering abilities easier at times

ch 10 question!

Marvel: I can Steal Abilities

Anime & Comics · StarGate

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1

-Ororo Munroe

Marvel: King of Winter

Movies · Torhelm

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Feels like a forced nerf since such a thing shouldn't have been possible.

ch 0 9 Chp 6

Overlord: The Dragon King

Anime & Comics · HiTherefic

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Why is everything a conversation?

ch 47 Chapter 47: Immense Power

devouring uchiha shisui at the beginning

Anime & Comics · 5834

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I'm hoping she gets a gible.

ch 258 The mission Pt. 1

Valkyrie Potter: Pokemon Journey

Anime & Comics · Bloodykitsune1997

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Are hybrid dinosaurs included?

I'm out of work in an hour and I plan on writing 3 chapters tonight. 2 things I think I figured out who I want the female lead to be, and what his summon contract will be. to make this fun if you can guess the correct girl I'll write an extra chapter tonight. related unrelated how do you guys feel about dinosaurs?