Vedoril

3mth

Replied to glen

"Some of the extraordinary items we gather and retrieve are just too important and magical. If they fall into the wrong hands, it would cause immense destruction. Therefore, we have to keep it strictly confidential and watch them carefully. Even we can only use it under special circumstances. Besides…" With that said, Dunn paused for a moment before continuing, "Besides, there are some things inside that are very special. They had certain 'living' characteristics which can entice the Keepers. It would influence the surroundings, attempt escape, and cause catastrophic outcomes. They have to be strictly controlled."

Lord of Mysteries

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

Vedoril

4mth

Commented

Maybe edit 'got them off' to 'got them out.'

The eight members of EVE, along with Jay, went back to their dorm, all with indecipherable expressions. They wanted to retaliate when Mr. Ong revealed they were going to represent a cheese ball brand, but Jay quickly got them off before they could.

From Thug to Idol: Transmigrating to a Survival Show

Fantasy · SandKastle

Vedoril

5mth

Commented

I really hope the author tones down the usage of mc's first and last name. I don't need to see them both every time.

ch 0 5 003 Big Harvest

Starting My Treasure Hunting In England

Urban · Viscount's Porcelain

Vedoril

6mth

Replied to Vedoril

I made a mistake. Chapter 41 is when it dropped in quality.

Game Design: Who Rated the Games as Very Easy?

Urban · I Love Hot Pot Base

Vedoril

6mth

Posted

I've read this up until chapter 40. Things were mostly fine with small errors. Repeating chapters once and character names getting mixed up a few times.Right at chapter 40, when the content becomes locked, the quality takes a nose dive. I couldn't read more than a few paragraphs before coming to post this and remove it from my library.

Game Design: Who Rated the Games as Very Easy?

Urban · I Love Hot Pot Base

Vedoril

8mth

Commented

A couple of repeated paragraphs.

This book has been deleted.

Vedoril

9mth

Commented

This is literally a repeat of information given just before this. I've seen this a few times in this novel. I'm not going to make assumptions about why the information is doubled, but it should stop.

On the narrow strip of land connecting the two mini-islands, they constructed a defensive line that stretched for about fifty meters. The Naga Warriors stood in the center, bearing the brunt of the enemy's assault, while the pirates flanked them, providing support.

The Ocean Lord Is Unusually Powerful

Games · Chenyu The Herder

Vedoril

9mth

Commented

Do you want to eat a snowman?

"Am I worse off? The start of the snowy mountain is painfully cold, and the surroundings are filled with Snow Ogres and Snow Wolves. My snowman army is just a snack for them. F*ck!"

The Ocean Lord Is Unusually Powerful

Games · Chenyu The Herder

Vedoril

10mth

Replied to manpapper

No, the way this phrase is used is correct. Other ways of expressing this could be things finally boiled over, things were brought to light, etc.

This caused everything to come to a head. All this time, Hailey was being patient with Lixin, believing that one day he would fall in love with her. However, upon learning that he loathed her, she decided to take what she wanted from him.

I Became an SSS-Ranked Chef in a VR Game

Games · Momocatt

Vedoril

11mth

Replied to Anone

Wasn't there supposed to be two sets of demonic revolvers and an item to combine them into one? Pride and Greed I believe.

This was a good ranked weapon, and frankly speaking, none of what Bob had offered to him was here. Everything was different, and it was weird how he had not noticed the guns, and how just after seeing this, he also noticed the set of a dozen bronze ranked throwing knives that were supposed to go into his jacket. Cole sighed, something was up with this place…. Or in the end it could just be lazy writing. Now for the stats.

Titan Rising Online: World Breaker

Games · Anone

Vedoril

1yr

Replied to Vedoril

This one maybe could've been an authors note.

ch 39 Cheer up.

Valkyrie Smash

Sci-fi · Nomanalive

Vedoril

1yr

Replied to Nomanalive

If it's spaced out and gives something to the story then it's fine. Like the addition of where the injuries are was nice. I'll keep doing this slowly as I read and mark ones that seem kind of un needed. It's a nice little addition but having to work it out word by word and not just copy paste is a bit slow. I'm sure the pace will pick up the more I do.

ch 37 Proton Canon.

Valkyrie Smash

Sci-fi · Nomanalive

Vedoril

1yr

Commented

Instead of her combat suit, zero three usually wears a one piece sports swimsuit under her uniform so she could go to the pool at any time. Another one down. Yay.

ch 39 Cheer up.

Valkyrie Smash

Sci-fi · Nomanalive

Vedoril

1yr

Replied to Nomanalive

I think they're asking for the morse code in the comments section or a paragraph comment to copy and paste. Otherwise I'll just continue doing this myself and slowly posting the messages.

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