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There are a lot of ways you can actually end it, migrating to the new world because of the frenzy virus epidemic, or fatalis shows up and goes crazy.

Personally, it would be interesting to have a Monster Hunter Stories route, the female friend of his, certainly the encounter with the duo that left her quite shellshocked should have a major impact.

she views the monster as more than monster, meeting between the female friend and lucius mom would also further change her view towards monster, a good wiggle room and reasonable excuse to go Monster Hunter Stories route and definitely more interesting.

Both side have to learn, and you can add cute and funny scene between the hunter and their monster, a yian garuga swoops in the dining hall and steals everyone meal, a tigrex goes lazy because food is provided so that tigrex is a lazy bastard, or a tsundere rathalos kinda funny, refuse to be fed but chomps down the whole food when no one is looking.

but i'll stop there, since you plan on stopping around 40 chapter tops, you can go frenzy virus or fatalis, or both, it attracts fatalis due the outbreak, and the hunter had to scout for new potential land, and thats where the everstream would come to play both as a power boost and a way to end the novel. View More
Monster Hunter: Nargacuga Life · C14
2 weeks ago
it came out daunting, and am really sorry if it really hampers you, i enjoy your work, dont want you to get on silly trouble because the platform you are using.
its not that bad once you write a couple more fanfic, or after you write more chapters, im just concerned since its a contract, and the nature of contract is binding and more often than not, badly created contract will hit you to the next reincarnation cycle.

reading your reaction, i kinda make it sound super horror stuff xD
all in all, you are doing fine with the route you are taking, and patreo-n is a solid choice tbh, you can be more "my schedule" instead being forced to the bone because a silly contract

im just concerned honestly, is what im really trying to tell you. View More

Xumit: Thanks for the tips. I really don't want to sign any contract anymore now. 😅

Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse · C52
1 month ago

Xumit: Thanks for the tips. I really don't want to sign any contract anymore now. 😅

Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse · C52
1 month ago

Banana_Bomb: big P.S : its info dump but, you should take your time reading it since it is very helpful, a beta reader in fanfiction.net, and active reader in AO3 and Royal Road, a few years of experience under my belt, so I hope you take the time to read it.

if, and its a god damn big if, you accept the contract, the crazy amount of time you have to pour into the novel is the least of your worry.

you have to butcher, divide, break everything apart from the canon material and rebuild it into an original spin off for your fanfic to be in the "okay zone" for a contract or selling it on kindle, using the character sparsely etc (insert limiting the use of source material as much as possible here ____ ), and the whole rebuilding part is also the least of your worry, you have to at least create an OC, and its easier said than done, since badly thought out OC can kill your novel instantly. Self insert is super hard to write it in a good way, you have to constantly "what if I meet hidan and he cut off my arm, what is my reaction IRL?"
tons of simulation of yourself basically if you want a remotely good Self Insert.
Thats how you can be "fine" with the contract and not land yourself a lawsuit.

lastly, as @Blasphemer said, webnovel own jackshit, signing it, can lead to tons of trouble, heck they SHOULD NOT BE ABLE TO offer a contract since they dont own fairy tail, and that very reason is why Royal Road does not support fanfic author with their built in patreon thingy anymore.

honestly, here its very lax, and not that demanding with rules, you dont have to write disclaimer in every chapter, you dont have to bother with rebuilding at least 50% of the world of your fanfic from the canon material.

so dont, even if in the future, the contract is really good for you, dont.
above are just "FEW REASON" you have to really watch your back.

in short, stick with this current formula, dont shoot yourself in the head, not even the foot level is how bad signing the contract is. (not fearmongering or trying to scare the living **** out of you, dont believe me, google fanfiction writing guideline, fanfiction writing tips, things to avoid when writing fanfic, etc, heck googling fanfiction lawsuit will pop up on google.)

Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse · C52
1 month ago
big P.S : its info dump but, you should take your time reading it since it is very helpful, a beta reader in fanfiction.net, and active reader in AO3 and Royal Road, a few years of experience under my belt, so I hope you take the time to read it.

if, and its a god damn big if, you accept the contract, the crazy amount of time you have to pour into the novel is the least of your worry.

you have to butcher, divide, break everything apart from the canon material and rebuild it into an original spin off for your fanfic to be in the "okay zone" for a contract or selling it on kindle, using the character sparsely etc (insert limiting the use of source material as much as possible here ____ ), and the whole rebuilding part is also the least of your worry, you have to at least create an OC, and its easier said than done, since badly thought out OC can kill your novel instantly. Self insert is super hard to write it in a good way, you have to constantly "what if I meet hidan and he cut off my arm, what is my reaction IRL?"
tons of simulation of yourself basically if you want a remotely good Self Insert.
Thats how you can be "fine" with the contract and not land yourself a lawsuit.

lastly, as @Blasphemer said, webnovel own jackshit, signing it, can lead to tons of trouble, heck they SHOULD NOT BE ABLE TO offer a contract since they dont own fairy tail, and that very reason is why Royal Road does not support fanfic author with their built in patreon thingy anymore.

honestly, here its very lax, and not that demanding with rules, you dont have to write disclaimer in every chapter, you dont have to bother with rebuilding at least 50% of the world of your fanfic from the canon material.

so dont, even if in the future, the contract is really good for you, dont.
above are just "FEW REASON" you have to really watch your back.

in short, stick with this current formula, dont shoot yourself in the head, not even the foot level is how bad signing the contract is. (not fearmongering or trying to scare the living **** out of you, dont believe me, google fanfiction writing guideline, fanfiction writing tips, things to avoid when writing fanfic, etc, heck googling fanfiction lawsuit will pop up on google.) View More
Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse · C52
1 month ago
oooh, BIGGRA strikes again, it never gets old, I mean, humping the ground intimately is just, wrong? lol. View More
The Strongest Omni Traveler · C187
1 month ago
good. its daaaaamn good, its so accurate, fucking yian garuga are a pain in the bloody ass, the first 20 tries I smashed like 8 controller.
i was questioning like lucius, why cant i win lol.
man they are brutal for no reason View More
Monster Hunter: Nargacuga Life · C13
1 month ago
have you tried archive of our own? AO3 in short, its also a good choice, a lot of well known author from fanfiction move there or double post there. View More

Xumit: Yeah. I wanted to keep a backup there in case webnovel decided to fu*k me here.

Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse · C38
1 month ago
its good habit to have trust me, idea dont come easy, I have book of ideas, anything that suddenly pop on my head I write it down, and it saved me more than once.

and there is just something about pen and paper that beats writing digitally. View More
Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse · C38
1 month ago

Banana_Bomb: this is enough, not too slow not too fast, go any slower you'll be the one who got bored first and starts feel like a chore instead of enjoying the process, go any faster and you hit writer block which can cripple you for days even weeks and it will slowly start affecting your mood to write.

this pace is just right.
plus it wont be too troublesome too keep up with this pace if you suddenly flooded IRL with some stuff to do.

Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse · C36
1 month ago
this is enough, not too slow not too fast, go any slower you'll be the one who got bored first and starts feel like a chore instead of enjoying the process, go any faster and you hit writer block which can cripple you for days even weeks and it will slowly start affecting your mood to write.

this pace is just right.
plus it wont be too troublesome too keep up with this pace if you suddenly flooded IRL with some stuff to do. View More
Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse · C36
1 month ago
oh yes, the ending was god damn awful, like uber god cringe, if it was not the end already I would already punch the damn monitor. View More
Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse · C35
1 month ago
can't wait for the update.
really looking forward to see how you spin the interaction between invaders like balzel, rajang, and ofcourse deviljho.

cant wait how you will structure the hierarchy between apex predators like rathalos, diablos, monoblos, lagiacrus and the other gang.

also really cant wait to see the fight with seregios and astalos, pretty brutal and aggressive duo that will just smack anything they see, like yian garuga who smacks jho down in iceborn.

just an idea, it would be good to throw a tigrex as his biggest adversary, tigrex rely both on speed and brute strength but less finesse nargacuga has, one is unbridled fury vs the cunning shadow. physically near identical and equal but with tigrex having greater bite force and front limb strength as he can stop a spinning raddooban, with nargacuga having more hind leg strength and tail muscle due to their dexterous nature. i think its interesting.

you just got an old veteran player as your fan.
p.s : if you ever going to write a chapter about plesioith, you know the meme for that bastard lol. View More
Monster Hunter: Nargacuga Life · C12
1 month ago

Banana_Bomb: Kinda unfitting both lore wise in MCU and comic, mythological wise, even calling it a far cry is a big understatement, you could pick a nordic name for time, hell a randomly generated name for norwegian will be more fitting.

Chronos has always been part of olympian pantheon.
Calling an asgardian which is loosely based on nordic gods chronos is flat out weird as hell.

Bjorn stone fist
Sigurd one eyed
Ingvyld brave heart
Skjorn ironside
Wulfurth ashmane
Eythir storm hammer
Fyorl bear mantle

Real normal name then title if they are a god, name then nickname if they are mortal.
You are using olympian naming sense tbh by naming him chronos.

Those kind of name are fitting for asgardian
But hey, you are the one writing, just trying to help out, get s norway/norwegian name from a name generator if ya have to.

Im flat out turned off the moment i read chronos, does not scream "Asgardian" at all.

Strongest multiverse system · C56
2 months ago
Kinda unfitting both lore wise in MCU and comic, mythological wise, even calling it a far cry is a big understatement, you could pick a nordic name for time, hell a randomly generated name for norwegian will be more fitting.

Chronos has always been part of olympian pantheon.
Calling an asgardian which is loosely based on nordic gods chronos is flat out weird as hell.

Bjorn stone fist
Sigurd one eyed
Ingvyld brave heart
Skjorn ironside
Wulfurth ashmane
Eythir storm hammer
Fyorl bear mantle

Real normal name then title if they are a god, name then nickname if they are mortal.
You are using olympian naming sense tbh by naming him chronos.

Those kind of name are fitting for asgardian
But hey, you are the one writing, just trying to help out, get s norway/norwegian name from a name generator if ya have to.

Im flat out turned off the moment i read chronos, does not scream "Asgardian" at all. View More
Strongest multiverse system · C56
2 months ago
make it even better, make Odin brag in front of Dormamu, in the comic they have a rivalry, but Dormamu thinks very little of Odin.

Now Odin has something Dormamu will never have, with dormamu character he will be fuming lel. View More

racecarsthegodcar: Odin has to say next chapter that’s my boy only a couple hours old and has his first kill please thanks for chapter

Strongest multiverse system · C55
2 months ago
Ragnar Odinson, God of Time and Space.
or
Sigurd Odinson, God of TIme and Space View More
Strongest multiverse system · C53
2 months ago
its bearable, and after so long reading machine translated stuff, which are way worse grammar wise, like spears become > window.

try installing grammar assistance for ms word, then copy pasta it. View More
Business-Man Naruto · C31
2 months ago
it really is a refreshing take on overlord, less psycho killing madlad going around in a mad killing spree. View More
Overlord and the Seraphim · C42
2 months ago

Cangkun: Yeah, it's not good for your health..
Give some rest to your body Author-san.
And thanks for the chapter

Overlord and the Seraphim · C13
3 months ago

ZGearCecil: I just write as the idea comes to my head cx Thanks for your concern. It means a lot to me as the writer.

Overlord and the Seraphim · C13
3 months ago
If you want to pump early, I suggest at stop 15 chapter or stretching it a bit, till 20.
then slow down to 1 chap a day.
last thing you want is burned out+writer block.

if you enjoy writing it, naturally people will in someway find it enjoyable too.

im a bit nagging here I will admit that, because so far, its promising and has potential. View More
Overlord and the Seraphim · C13
3 months ago
thats one fancy way to give gift lol.

dude, you ok? you have been pumping chapter, just dont burn yourself because of it, being fast does not mean rushing, its always welcomed there are new chapter.
but, my concern you will less enjoy it.
it becomes a grind even worse a chore, you are doing great, slowing down a bit is okay. I am confident that people wont mind, a reasonable update speed but decent in quality, even if it becomes 1/day.

just being concerned. View More
Overlord and the Seraphim · C13
3 months ago
what a cruel cliffhanger you made there. View More
Business-Man Naruto · C27
3 months ago
if that ever happen, going around the world, listening to daft punk- around the world is a heavens match while reading the chapter. View More

Heavenly_Devil: Trip around the world... next chapter could be this!

DROPPED: Marvels Strongest Father · C57
3 months ago
thanks for the notice, lets get that right out of the bat first.

ha, nice one on calling the stupidest assumption ever, "author dead?"

if you are interested for writing material, watch a few youtube video if you have the time, some major event are the forefront theme for youtube content.

alternatively, read some comic book, there is a website that let you read for free, not supporting it tho, but not condemning freebies either, if you are tight financially or dont want to waste money on tertiary items, there is a good website for it, google it just like you would google "watch xxxxxxx movie free"

or go watch avenger earth mightiest hero, a very decent avenger animated run. View More
DROPPED: Marvels Strongest Father · C57
3 months ago

Banana_Bomb: he is a legend, he will always be missed. it was his words on many of his interview that I got hooked up in reading fanfic, seeing people grow as they write is something. Actually seeing improvement day by day is amazing let me tell you at least that.
at first, eh fanfic, probably 99% are twilight or **** pokemon that are humanized quality.
but boy, glad I was dead wrong, read many amazing fanfic and found out that there is a huge community even.

looking forward to your journey.

Overlord and the Seraphim · C7
3 months ago
he is a legend, he will always be missed. it was his words on many of his interview that I got hooked up in reading fanfic, seeing people grow as they write is something. Actually seeing improvement day by day is amazing let me tell you at least that.
at first, eh fanfic, probably 99% are twilight or **** pokemon that are humanized quality.
but boy, glad I was dead wrong, read many amazing fanfic and found out that there is a huge community even.

looking forward to your journey. View More

ZGearCecil: Stan Lee (TT⌓TT)

Overlord and the Seraphim · C7
3 months ago

ZGearCecil: Stan Lee (TT⌓TT)

Overlord and the Seraphim · C7
3 months ago
I guess when you enjoy the process it will show on the result.

you cant directly see the difference from the previous one, but as you read to the end it starts to show.

I think my guess is not too far fetched, just glad you enjoy writing.

stan lee once said " I write things I enjoy in hope people will find joy in it as I do" View More
Overlord and the Seraphim · C7
3 months ago
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