FrozenShadow1 - Profile

Author are you still alive??

Nice change of pace, love this book. It would be cool to see a paragraph every two chapters or so that talk about THE GRIND, like what he's actually working towards, maybe pick one subject and grind to get a mastery in that then go to the next subject. Keep up the good work!

Why is in a rush to have a child?

I think that's an absolutely bad take on immortality, Immortality is only a curse when you have nothing to do or work towards. Seeing as he has a literal infinity to explore and experience he could always find something to do. Seeing as people are addicted to seeing numbers go up he could always be trying to get stronger, maybe becoming a higher dimensional being. Seeing as he found his "soul mate" he should never decide, yep that enough, "I still love her but I don't want to live anymore." On earth you can't get stronger by training constantly, but in this story you can, he can't even see the peak of the world and has already decided that he'll just give up after 200-300 years? Stupid. As long as you have something to live for, life will never get to the point that you'll say, "that enough, I'm done." Loving the story otherwise, keep up the good work.

Just sayin, a galleon is like $6 bucks so the 1000 galleon prize is $6000 dollars, pureblood families can most defiantly ignore that, most families can especially if the death toll is so high. Love the book though [img=recommend]

What was the name of that FF that dealt with the after math?

Either I'm blind or it's because I'm not signed in but the only place I see for comments is the Review section on the title page, nothing for individual chapters, or that where you were talking about

I've been reading on your other site and it's working well but what are you going to do about comments? It seems like with your current set pace you'll be a hundred chapters ahead within a month and it would only get larger. I've seen you take some good ideas from comments and constructive criticism. How are you going to do that when your so far ahead. Like the chapter you just released where Indra is afraid Vhan might change things to quickly. I had a good idea on how to deal with the gods affected by poets, and even though you might not like/use my idea it is a good way for you to make your story better by possibly introducing new ideas. Btw my idea was for Vahn to cut the connection between god and poet and throw then in a actualized world for 1000 years that passes in an instant and if they have changed back to being "good" gods they get to live or something like that.

I agree more mature content would flow with the story more but i'm also worried because 90% of the "important" characters you've introduced are harem candidates so once he matures I feel like it would take up a large portion of the book because of the sheer volume of women you've already introduced.

Essentially, Vahn calls himself a Lolicon through Nami.