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Over_Lord_9904: I agree plus next chapter you should probably focus on how he is going the money to pay for the infrastructures he is building

Super Emperor System · C34
1 day ago

1stSlug: You're rushing Author. Rome wasn't built in a day after all!

Super Emperor System · C34
1 day ago

F_Riley: You should probably start with infrastructure before you start building skyscrapers. Roads. Electicity. Water. Sewage. And any futuristic tech he might be planning to install.

Super Emperor System · C34
1 day ago
Really liked this story but seriously? This part is just dumb. He was fine, he only had an injury. She could spend more than 2 seconds to store the level 6 queen AND look over the surroundings for the tool that he obviously would have needed to kill her after swing her wound. Just makes no sense to me. After seeing he's just unconscious surely she would calm down and check her surroundings right? Anyway, story isn't for me. Moments like these make it a real pain to read because if feels like forced idiocy just for the sake of future plot where now they will have his gun and spoils creating future conflict. Thanks for the good read before this and wish you the best but this is where I shall stop. View More
The Geared Immortal · C18
1 day ago

Reili: no chap today, was too tired yesterday and needed a break sorry

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C164
1 day ago
Thanks for the chapter! Really enjoy this novel. I will say I find the "milady" part super cringe. I just keep expecting the next line to be "*tips fedora*" lol View More
The Most OP'est Titan (AOT fanfic) · C27
2 days ago

DarkRay: This is to explain some things as I don't want to make synopsis too long.
First - this novel is not a system novel that you will find everywhere now. This will never be a system novel and so if you think it is then you can stop reading. It's not.

Second - The story starts slow and there is a reason to that. I want to describe as much as I can in this novel so although there will be some time skips (especially when there are repeated tasks) I don't want to write the same thing all the time too.

Third - This story is not about revenge. The title says what it is about. There will be revenge parts in this story as well as love, hate, betrayal, greed and so on. why? you may ask. Because it is part of human nature and limits are part of human existence. This is a novel about human life not about saints and gods. There will be struggle because every human has a struggle in their life.

So if you don't like these points, you may straight ahead drop it because you will not like it. There will be action, fights, plots etc but at a slower pace compared to OP characters where they get everything by luck or out of thin air. Humans have to work hard for their achievements and if you agree, then you will like this novel.


By the way I didn't give myself 5 stars because there is always room for improvement with my novel. Thanks for reading and I hope some of you will enjoy my novel.

Limits
3 days ago
I love this story and share the same views as you do with the original story. Unfortunately lots of tv shows and especially movies have a lot of holes in them or at least parts which don't make sense unless there's a protagonist with great luck/ plot armour etc. Seeing authors change that during fan fictions is amazing. If something doesn't make sense in the original then go for it and change it as much as you want. At the end of the day it's a fan fiction. The writer can write what he wants however he wants it.

Love the novel so far! Keep it up and I look forward to reading more :) View More
Born With The Evolution System · C6
4 days ago
Hey author, that fancy text doesn't show up on my android tablet either on the app or the website. Not sure if it's the same for others but it's just replaced each character with the placeholder box instead View More
Long Live Ye Clan Second Young Master · C25
1 week ago

JamesAnthony1999: I love the way this is going. I can see why some people are annoyed with the relationship part but I think that's because he isn't trying to get with her but he's also not staying just friends, but sometimes that's just how it happens. The whole neutral thing is cool, thinking things through. Let's it just play put until the neutral party needs to settle it and prevent escalation. Can't wait for more! Thanks for the good read author!

Born With The Evolution System · C4
1 week ago

Niks: I don't really like the harem route in stories .
Kind of spoils the progression often .
Also the indecisiveness of the MC is for him to find his own identity as to what he wants to do.
So far it was because he was trying to juggle his friends, his supernatural identity and his mysterious father's legacy
But now he has found an anchor and a goal in d form of Allison

Born With The Evolution System · C4
1 week ago
I love the way this is going. I can see why some people are annoyed with the relationship part but I think that's because he isn't trying to get with her but he's also not staying just friends, but sometimes that's just how it happens. The whole neutral thing is cool, thinking things through. Let's it just play put until the neutral party needs to settle it and prevent escalation. Can't wait for more! Thanks for the good read author! View More
Born With The Evolution System · C4
1 week ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Aatrox, A God King in a Modern World. · C53
1 week ago
As long as it's not dropped I don't care. I prefer having a random release rate than a burnt out author who ends up dropping the novel. View More

53t: Now the release rate has dropped to 3/week. Bravo

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C59
1 week ago
The only time a review should be deleted is if it's 1 person spamming reviews. Positive or negative. I also think if I post a novel on here any review that is just emojis or someone spamming something to hit the word count with 0 actual feedback will be deleted by me, positive or negative. As long as 1 sentence says what the reader liked or disliked about the novel then it's a valid review in my opinion and should be kept.

Also I personally enjoy reading the novel but it was interesting to see you point out such aspects. I can see where you are coming from and even agree with the world building aspect where it feels very lacking in that area. I personally would rate the novel quite high, maybe a 4 star, but it was good to read your views and see how this story, when broken down, is quite linear. View More

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King of Sports
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King of Sports
1 week ago

Reflex: After taking a break from writing and reading novels for nearly a year, I suddenly felt like writing once more.

My previous work, Destiny Forged, was my first ever novel and it gave me a wonderful experience, both writing and reading it.

And now, I'm back with a new novel! Although this one isn't as self-fulfilling as its predecessor, it will definitely exceed it!

I'll use what I've learned from writing Destiny Forged and reading other works and deliver something even better.

So yea, I'm back!

VRMMO: Basic Attack
1 week ago
Thanks for the chapter View More
Adventuring Other-Worlds with the Adapting System · C56
1 week ago
Thanks for the chapters! These ones made me smile lol View More
New Life : A Second Chance · C453
1 week ago
Nic here being all like "let me listen to what's upsetting you and try and comfort you"
2 seconds later
"How is it my fault? I just came home and tried to help you? 😭"
Lol love this View More
New Life : A Second Chance · C451
2 weeks ago
Hello author! Would it be possible to have an update on how the rewrite is going, this novel and also how you are doing? Thanks View More
I am in Harry Potter! · C35
2 weeks ago
Love these chapters! View More
New Life : A Second Chance · C439
2 weeks ago

Live_A_Legend: ...why didn’t I think of this... you’re a genius

Golden Fox with System · C149
3 weeks ago

JamesAnthony1999: Just... Devour the lightning Theo... Just nom on it!

Golden Fox with System · C149
3 weeks ago
Just... Devour the lightning Theo... Just nom on it! View More
Golden Fox with System · C149
3 weeks ago
Why is it boring? Just curious as the review tells me nothing other than you think it's boring and a waste of time, would like to know why you think so so I can tell if there's anything good/bad about the novel before reading it View More

Pripriri: Don't waste your time on this boring fanfic. Don't waste your time on this boring fanfic. Don't waste your time on this boring fanfic. Don't waste your time on this boring fanfic. Don't waste your time on this boring fanfic. Don't waste your time on this boring fanfic.

The Dragon And His Priestresses
3 weeks ago
I just had to write a review and once I started I couldn't stop! I only realised how much I had written when I hit the character limit for reviews and had to shorten my conclusion xD View More

JamesAnthony1999: This is a story I HAD to review. It was like part of me (a very big part) decided it was happening and when the lazy me started considering just putting it off until I eventually forgetting to write one (happens a lot) the first part pulled a figurative gun out and held the lazy part of my at figurative gunpoint to actually write a proper review.

So let me first mention how I binge read this novel hard. I literally put all other novels on hold for 2 days and even had to force myself just go get my daily free SS from webnovel check in etc.

The author does an amazing job describing scenes and stories. This honestly felt like I was drawn into on of my favourite tv shows or anime with how I just imagined everything in my head more than I felt I was actually reading, everything flows so well together it's as smooth as a dream would be.

The storyline is so well thought out, the world building is thorough but not too much and the author doesn't dump info on you, it's like every couple chapters there's a line or a few where it feels like setting the scene for just that part of the story but each time it's like a puzzle piece building up the world gradually until you suddenly realise how much worldbuilding has been going on without you thinking about it. It sounds like there's a lot of world guiding going on but actually there's not much. Enough to tell you what you need and want to know, nothing more or less. Exactly what you need without giving you too much to think about or not enough to understand the world.

Character development is so incredibly realistic and full of just pure raw emotions and some illogical moments that just make sense when thinking from the heart while others fit perfectly when thinking logically. The author just knows exactly how to mix the two perfectly and blend them together. At time focusing on one, then the other and sometimes switching between them quickly in relatable and amazingly way where it just flows and fits and makes so much sense for it to do so while drawing you into the story and the feelings and perspectives of the characters.

I have almost 0 issues with the writing quality. I think maybe a rare mistake here or there but I was too drawn into the story and focused my mind just corrected anything wrong subconsciously so I could keep reading without pause just to keep enjoying the amazing read that this novel provides.

When it comes so some worries some people (probably heterosexual guys like me) about possible male on male action then I can say as long as you aren't homophobic then you have nothing to worry about. It's not off putting in the least and worse case the author puts ample warning that allows you to skip anything you might be sensitive on.

A couple things to say to the author! Firstly the parts of some "Creators thoughts" at the end of a few chapters where you apologised for possible filler. I CAN'T SEE ANY FILLER! To me a filler is anything that does not progress the story and just increases word count. This novel however is done so beautifully where everything has a purpose. Either giving information or an opinion/perspective a character that heels progress the plot or explains emotions and why characters act the way they do, it's done perfectly and to even consider these chapters being given that label of "Filler" is not giving the novel (and especially the author) nearly enough credit.
Something an author once told me when I asked for writing tips was to reduce wasted words. If it doesn't need to be there and doesn't progress the story then delete it. I have yet to find a single wasted word in this novel and I doubt I ever will see a wasted word from this author as long as they continue to have the same passion for writing as they have now.

Lastly I would like to say that this has got be one of my favourite novels yet and I cant wait for more chapters. Even if you aren't sure I ask you just sit down and read this novel for an hour. You won't regret it.

New Life : A Second Chance
3 weeks ago

Eliza_Belle_Gray: May your hands be blessed for the typing you got there so much effort you put through..well I'm just a lazy potato who want to write like this but I can't...You did a commemoration of this novel its like giving a speech Lol...I STAN YOU and Salute you XD

New Life : A Second Chance
3 weeks ago
Thanks for the chapter and great way to satisfy both sides View More
New Life : A Second Chance · C431
3 weeks ago

Cocain: Why did anybody ever make this Website Its just so sad to See this page growing and annihilating a free online Reader community at least Give These novels as a whole a price and change your absolutely nonsensical pay per chapter system

The City of Terror
3 weeks ago
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