ATHiker - Profile

I am not arguing with you, but even using your numbers, you are overcharging by quite a bit. Lets say 1000 words per chapter, and 100 are repeated If you remove the repeated words, and consolidate down, you would see a repeated pattern of 1000 new words, 800 new words and then again at 1000 new words but you charge for all 3 at 1000 words. If you look at chapters 113 and 114, i didnt count the words, but you can see that more than an entire page, about 15 conversation paragraphs are repeated. Is that a third? No. Is it, in my opinion, a lazy way to up your word count? Yes. Did i think that your story had enough promise that I paid stones to keep reading it, even though (using your numbers) I paid for 10 chapters but only read enough new work for 9? Yes. Until I realized that my hope that you would over come your weakness and would make the work worth what you were chargIng for it was dashed. If you wrote without a page of repeated work at the start of every chapter I would still be reading, and still paying. You have chosen to offer a work and write it the way that you do. I have chosen to give my feelings on it. Had you said “Thank you for your feedback, I will take your feedback and see if I can use it to make a stronger and more appealing work” vs the vitriol you said, I would have likely picked the story back up in 6 months or so. Due to your attitude in your reply, i now will not. But keep writing. I paid for your writing due to you having promise as a writer and you created a good story. And perhaps the rest of your followers will appreciate getting the Full Value of their money for your quality work. No one likes buying a bag of cookies and finding put it isn’t full. The same is true with books.