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marjzach2012: An honest review. It feels like I'm reading a diary more than a novel.The sequence of the events, although specific dates and time were stated, seemed to be messed up and not really that connected. It's a fast pace and yet when it's flashbacks/time earlier, it doesn't seemed connected to the present one. Not all readers will go back to the specific dates and time written above after reading many paragraphs and conversations.I suggest, before ending the flashbacks/time earlier, you connect it to the present time. It's too confusing for the readers when it's not connected and not sequenced properly. The grammar is good. You just have to sequence the events properly and connect it from present to past and from past back to present, if you know what I mean.The plot story is good. So I gave you 3 stars.

The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect
3 days ago
Thanks :) View More

LiNa_author: This story is wonderful!!
First I thought maybe it was like the rest of the novels.

Loving this novel so far. It's not your typical novel that immediately gives you all the answers and the background. Bit by bit, you get to find out what happens and tie it to previous chapters and realize that there's a lot more to the plot.

The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect
3 days ago

LiNa_author: This story is wonderful!!
First I thought maybe it was like the rest of the novels.

Loving this novel so far. It's not your typical novel that immediately gives you all the answers and the background. Bit by bit, you get to find out what happens and tie it to previous chapters and realize that there's a lot more to the plot.

The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect
3 days ago
Reading Status: C17
Very early to give a genuine review but I did enjoy reading this one. Good plot with great potential. The chemistry between the main characters is adorable. Great work author. View More
The CEO's Wife has a Secret
3 days ago
Reading Status: C17
Great book! Love the characters and the story. The chapters are short and it really took me one hour to finish, Great story overall and it's a good choice for romance lovers. Great work author, keep the updates! :D View More
The CEO's Rented Wife
4 days ago
Reading Status: C25
A good romance book, the development of the plot is kinda fast for me but not in a bad way. The romance between characters is lovely and in a good pace. The writing quality needs a little work but not a big issue. Highly recommend for romance lovers. Good work author. View More
Can True Love be Found from Online Dating?
4 days ago

may1st: An interesting write up, its still early to say much about this book, but its obvious how its gonna be interesting in the future, grammar is done well.

I wish the author good luck in this story.

The Wine House
4 days ago
Thanks :) View More

Xenovraise: Found this by coincidence while author recommended reading my story.

GREAT WRITING STYLE, grammar lapses nearly none and word construction is excellent.

As a reader/writer of female MCs, I vote for this book for everyone.

Cool that author has already planned a couple of chaps. Looking forward to this. Keeping this to my library. :)

The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect
5 days ago

Xenovraise: Found this by coincidence while author recommended reading my story.

GREAT WRITING STYLE, grammar lapses nearly none and word construction is excellent.

As a reader/writer of female MCs, I vote for this book for everyone.

Cool that author has already planned a couple of chaps. Looking forward to this. Keeping this to my library. :)

The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect
5 days ago

Xenovraise: What a veracious review! Thank you for pointing that out NEidarous. Hopefully everyone who likes it just as you will add this story to their library as I continue to build up the story background and climax.

Once again, thank you! :)

I tamed the Most Evil Emperor
5 days ago
Reading Status: C8
Not the type of books I would usually enjoy but to be fair this one is good. The characters development are in good speed, the world background is good as well. The idea of female lead taming the male lead might be cliche but it's not in this story. Highly recommend. Great job author. View More
I tamed the Most Evil Emperor
5 days ago

ShinSungmi: The book had an well-written plot, and there are some correction needed when it comes to the grammar. Other than that, the novel is quite interesting.

The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect
5 days ago
Reading Status: C14
This one have a great potential, I was a little confused by the similarities of the names or who is who but the more I read the more it got easier. The development of the characters and story are interesting. The plot itself is very good. Great job author. View More
Reborn: The Unexpected Twist
6 days ago
Reading Status: C28
What a story! love it! Love the main characters, funny and charming. Good plot and development. Amazing updates stability! overall, I totally recommend this story for romance lovers. Great job author. View More
Handsome CEO'S Bewitching wife
6 days ago
Reading Status: C11
Well, I like this book so far and I'm surly waiting for more updates, Great premise and interesting plot. The story development is on point, good characters, writing style is also good with few mistakes that can be easily fixed but overall highly recommended story! good job author :) View More
The ugly Diana
6 days ago

Vrindaa: The concept and idea of this story are very interesting. Thirty days and they are to find their true love. I like the way in which you have narrated the story, it's very clear. There are some mirror grammar problems so I will recommend you to use grammarly which is a savior of authors like us.

Keep good work and I am sure your book will receive the needed attention.

The Wine House
1 week ago

yumeiji: The synopsis of this story has me hooked! I believe that this story has a lot of potential. The plot of the story of having to find their soulmate in 30 days has intrigued me. I’ll definitely add this to my library and wait for further updates!

Writing Quality: I don’t think i’ve noticed any mistakes. Overall, I liked the way the author wrote the story.

Stability of Updates: I’m not sure how frequent the author updates

Story Development: It’s early to say anything about the development but from what i’ve read so far the plot is promising! I’m sure current and future readers won’t be disappointed when they read this story :)

The Wine House
1 week ago
yes. View More

DeJeL: Did you recently restart this novel or something?

The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect · C2
1 week ago
Reading Status: C1
Hello Everyone!

It took me a long time to re-write this book and fix everything to create a better version of the Bennu Effect.

I hope everyone who read the old version to read the new one... :) View More
The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect
2 weeks ago

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Wine House
2 months ago

Rxel: Pretty interesting. The way tyat youve changed the stories and given them their own twist is such a contrast with the original stories!

Looking forward to seeing more! There are so many things that can be done to fairytales. Love what you've done!

Short Stories Collection
3 months ago

Rxel: Interesting. I think the part that I enjoy the most is the human interaction. They feel very life like when they communicate, and it makes me feel like I'm part of the conversation as well.

The scenes are descriptive and gives the readers a sense of the world building that is currently happening. Though it is slightly confusing at times, it does not detract from the enjoyment of reading the story.

All in all, looking forward to see where this is going! Keep up the good work! (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ

The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect
3 months ago

Nzoputa: I had a great laugh as I read this esp the part of little mermaids. In the beginning you would think that it was your typical fairy tales, but the way it ends is extremely hilarious.

I love the authors sick and demented twist of fairy tales.

Lol.

Short Stories Collection
4 months ago

Nzoputa: This was a great read.

Although it needs alot of editing.

But overall, I loved it, The length of the capters were alright, and there was alot of dialogue in it, which must books frankly don't have.

The Infinite Duo: Bennu Effect
4 months ago

Nzoputa: Being a K-pop fan, I absolutely love this.

The story is told in first person format, and I have to say the author nailed it.

Not many people do, some people make their boring and uninteresting, but this one was far from that. Good job author.

The Infinite Duo: Perfect Strangers
4 months ago
Reading Status: C6
I like the book so far. Slow and steady story development. Need some work on writing quality but overall okay. Good characters and have great potential. View More
My brother's friend
4 months ago

Hawkeye_119: Thank you so much for reading my story! I am still trying to fix the grammar as well as make the story less confusing.

Lonely at the Top
4 months ago

DragonTreasures: Hey, I like your short stories, but wonder what they'd look like if they were a little bit longer and perhaps full of more endearing phrases? What I mean is I want to see you paint with words, use more adjectives, adverbs, and broaden the imagery in your work with more heart wrenching details. Other than that, I find the endings of these short analogies rather stunning and awe invoking, but hope that your persistence in writing these pieces makes them better.

Short Stories Collection
4 months ago

Ellendria: Thanks. I'll keep it going. 😁

I'm a Vampire God?!
5 months ago

Lorime: Wow! Thank you so much!❤️😭 I can't breathe😭❤️

Falling In Love With A Yakuza
5 months ago
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