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The Divine Wolf... or? · C37
1 month ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
The Divine Wolf... or? · C33
1 month ago
Option 4: taijutsu specialist ( stronger than might guy) View More
Naruto: The Night Watcher · C0
3 months ago
Agree View More

wolven: Author should have dropped this novel if he got so bored of it that he had to add xianxia elements into it to try and make it interesting because it has ruined it for me

Reborn in the Narutoverse · C58
4 months ago

wolven: Author should have dropped this novel if he got so bored of it that he had to add xianxia elements into it to try and make it interesting because it has ruined it for me

Reborn in the Narutoverse · C58
4 months ago

Randompasserby: So this is what a narutoverse hijacked by xianxia looks like 😅
Ah well at least it's new to me and interesting enough for now, but take care not to dilute the charms of the original settings too much Author. If I want to read xianxia I can read otger stories,, thise has a boatloads of it and to be honest the original Fourth war endgame was already too much xianxia for me....

Reborn in the Narutoverse · C38
4 months ago
Seems you have lost the idea starting from chapter 73(jinchuriki)... To many change in the main storyline, maybe u should rewrite from that chapter and focus more on shiki developtment while still in touch with other characters without making to many change in the main storyline, most of the naruto fanfic drop because its author lost the idea after making to many changes... Overall, your fanfic is GOOD, PLEASE DONT DROP THIS View More
Cursed with Mystic Eyes in Naruto · C76
4 months ago
Thanks for the chapter..
And dont listen to those negative coment about naruto win with plot armor or etc.
Its your novel View More
Cursed with Mystic Eyes in Naruto · C70
4 months ago

NobleKei: Okay, I have to tell u something. You need to Improve your Writing. Although it isnt unreadable like machine translation, its still not good enough. Although I am not a Writer, I am an Avid Reader. So, Here are some Tips:

1) Try to break down all the Big Paragraphs into smaller ones. No paragraph should be Longer than 5~6 lines. Big Blocks of Text are harder to read. (Although you can make some of them as big as 10~12 lines, Try not to make Huge Blocks of Text)

2) Try to use a 'Comma' (this thing -> , ) in between long sentences. This Thing Helps a LOT and your Writing will go up a Level if u use this. For example, Before you say 'as...' ( Example: "He went out to eat food, as he was very Hungry.") You can also use it in different places/sentences to make reading more easier. Also, Try not to use it more than 2 or 3 times in a Paragraph (since a paragraph should be around 4~6 lines)

3) And Lastly, Try to use something other than "As" (Example: "As he was......."). Try to use other types of words in between sentences, like: Because, For, Since, etc. (Example: "He didnt reply because he knew these were things he shouldn't know" OR "He did not reply, since he knew that he was not supposed to know these things" INSTEAD OF "He didnt reply, as he knew these were things he wasnt supposed to know")

If you Really have read all of that and really apply this to your Writing, then i will be very thankful.
I'm not trying to be a Critic or anything, just trying help improve the novel's quality.
Also, dont think im a Smartass or anything, I also how i learned to speak/write english because of other's help. English Is not My first Language either.

Thanks for the Chapters~

Reborn as Naruto's Twin Brother · C10
4 months ago
💪💪💪💪 View More
The Ogre · C8
4 months ago

Mgun1: Dont read
Write your own fanfic you motherf*cker

Cursed with Mystic Eyes in Naruto · C56
4 months ago
Superb plot progressing.. Different from other naru-fanfic, keep writing author.. Just ignore negative comment 👍👍💪 View More
Cursed with Mystic Eyes in Naruto · C56
4 months ago
Great chapter.. But the incident with itachi's eye is a little sad, but still great development.. 👍👍👍 View More
Cursed with Mystic Eyes in Naruto · C45
4 months ago
Thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍 View More
True Shinobi · C16
4 months ago
Its good to see mc got little mutant brother with hulk power 😀😀😀 View More
No longer a novel. · C0
4 months ago

helio: hey guys if he wants them to get together let him the novel isnt focused on them anyway its about nick and its will still be a good novel besides milfs need love too and everyone knows hulk loves to smash

No longer a novel. · C0
4 months ago

RokuX: I want to know if aunt may is pregnant with Nick's baby

No longer a novel. · C0
4 months ago

Alastair: Make him learn the 8 gates and I’m sure with his training he can probably already withstand all of the gates.

The Ogre · C7
5 months ago

Kilaske: Make him bring taijustu to the top. Make him learn Hachimon.

The Ogre · C7
5 months ago
Dont take the bijuu like other novels, instead make him overpower them using raw strength, taijutsu first View More
The Ogre · C7
5 months ago
If you to transmigrate the mc, please pick fairy tail if u familiar with the series View More
Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon · C0
6 months ago

7H30V3R533R: Plainly Reviewing my Novel.

I thank you all who read my Novel. I never would have thought my Fan-Fic would make this far.
I made a slothful ninja that doesn't take things seriously, but take things seriously if it needs to be taken seriously, I thank that all have taken time to read my Novel.
It made me become more resolute, that I need to take my Novel Prototype seriously, starting from chapter 11, I will try my best and Hayabusa as his usual self — I believe that a lazy ninja that becomes cool also serious when he sees the situation is dire, is the best start of an MC since that's his character. As to all, please widen my views with yours.

Thanks to everyone again.

Sincerely, The Author.

True Shinobi
6 months ago
Reading Status: C12
Great storyline so far, different from other naruto fanfic.. Please keep writing 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 View More
True Shinobi
6 months ago
No.. No.. No.. Dont start the wuxia **** View More
Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon · C43
6 months ago

NightmareDemon: Totally agreed

Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon · C43
6 months ago
Yeah!!!! View More
Broken Worlds: A Naruto Fanfic · C31
7 months ago
Seharusnya prabowo atau jokowi, namun lebih enak jika nama wak joko erdi jaya salam digunakan
"aku ini orang indonesia, kalo nga penuh ilmu di dada, nga sampe ke terusan suez 😎 View More
Lord Shadow · C45
7 months ago
Ooo.. Orang paya besar View More
Lord Shadow · C25
7 months ago
Ooo.. Orang mentakab View More
Lord Shadow · C3
7 months ago
Dont kill rou.. Make kei overwhelm him 100% View More
Re:Monster - Soul Eater · C22
7 months ago
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