Webnovel Author: JoshS - Novel&Fanfic Collection

Great writing quality. The author understands how to write characters and world settings. The story is interesting and can entertain its audience. However, there is one flaw that will stop me from reading this story. Well, I say a flaw but to others it might not be. I think the story is progressing way too slow. I've read up to the locked chapters and feel like there has been little to almost no progress. I think what's been written in the 80+ something chapters could have been written in 40. Nonetheless, it's still a great story and hope the author continues to do what they enjoy.

How do people resd this shit? I'm 240 chapters in and the retarded Mc is still hiding his identity. He's reached the 3rd grade and still doesn't want to reveal his identity. Not only that, the people at his level can already tell he's using a skin mask. At this point the author STILL refuses to reveal his identity and gives him another ability to hide his fucking identity. Like I sincerely doubt he will jot show his identity until the end of the series. Dropped.

I originally wanted to write this without a system too. However, systems within novel heavily reduce the burden for authors. It also helps remove some plot holes. I also wanted to add elements from other animes so system makes it easier to introduce.

Biased review kekw. Except I won't lie about my terrible updating consistency. d dnxnxjfmfmfmfmfmfmfmfmfmfkckfkrkrnrndmdmrmrmrmrmrmrmrm

I've already gotten idea for what I want to do. Besides, the idea of going to Orochimaru goes against Mc's nature per what I've written.

so it fixes at about maybe 70-80

literally*

Its pretty good. However, at around chapter 50 the author broke his space bar? laterally every other word islikethis or something likethisanditmakes it unbearable to read. See my point?