Reistlan - Profile

English not my language - i read and write with autotransplantation. Writing Quality 4 - coz i cant say wrong or write. Updating Stability 3- this book only 3 day in my library and cant mark it better Story Development 1 - start and idea of ff - great. But so many holes on the plot... Sory i can't mark ZERO. Character Design - mc is bs. He chnge his mind from nothing. world background - too many holes. Bruce banner - knew about speedforce, but dont about stones. Stark and oscorp make particle accelerators ... Noone from them - can't do this coz' oscorp - biopharmaceutical, and stark not in this branch of science. If it make otto octavius would be better. Author give mc speedforce and give it nerf already after few chapter. (Yeah i can't say about rpg) When mc go for help - stark make costume with VIBRANIUM.... When they stop tesserakt - create blackhole.... After loki kill all family just take his hand.... Go to 616.... Just drop. Too many bs for me.

I can stay arrogant for 99% of bs mtl. But this..... I dropped on travel to 616. So many shit on one book - rare for me.

Yeah, but ino isn't born yet, so who know maybe she will be third?))))