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Or maybe just eant read story with just a little chsnge of plot

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I doubt

I tried to read it but it was too bad, plot holes everywhere, unnecessary and boring restrictions, characters with different characters and more. the story seems to be written with a superficial knowledge of the various worlds, mc seems like a secondary character, too many time jumps, plots added just for the story, dragonball powers different from the original, bleach different from the canon both the characters, powers and more. in short, reading it is difficult, too many plot errors, skills forgotten in previous chapters etc..., hidden rewards and missions but so many problems and errors appear randomly that the story is affected. mc is an old man but seems like a hormonal kid, few details in the story seems like reading a comic without images. abilities so much boosted or nerfed that they become meaningless, (mc's abilities also ignore the laws of the world where they come from since the first chapters of bleach where mc can use gengutsu on users without chakra and use hakai on immortal beings)

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