jordon

1yr

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Honestly the most glaring problem with this story is the pacing, not gonna lie it has horrible pacing. Over a hundred chapters spent in a dream, 10s of chapters on pointless small talk that doesn’t drive the story forward at all… yeah that’s an issue.

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Fantasy · Vongrak

jordon

2yr

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I honestly hope she doesn’t die, she’s by far the most interesting character and my favorite.

ch 262 High Stakes

jordon

2yr

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Masterpiece Chapter

ch 50 Share the Pain

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Games · Akkre_Kojuuin

jordon

2yr

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Even if the next chapter say oh she enjoyed it, it’s part of her fetish. It doesn’t change the fact that she was unwilling and shouted stop numerous times.

ch 36 The Start of a Continued Journey

jordon

3yr

Commented

Tayuya or Anko, maybe Tsunade. These or some interesting choices for you to think about. They are all connected to Snake-Boi too, so you'd have some good plotlines and conflicting views between lovers.

ch 33 Chapter 33

That wouldn't make sense honestly, it was stated that her body changed not her mind. if she didn't like dick before why would she now? That inconsistency would honestly destroy the worldbuilding and character you have written so far.

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Futa farm

Fantasy · TriangulatedCake

jordon

3yr

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ch 113 The Mansion

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Fantasy · Oscillating_Sine

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ch 126 University Life Awaits!

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3yr

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ch 125 Going To The Store To Get Milk

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ch 124 No Emotion

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jordon

3yr

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ch 123 The Hunters Become The Hunted

The Spider Queen

Sci-fi · HopelesslyRomantic

jordon

3yr

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You don't have to inconvenience yourself, you're already giving us this amazing story to enjoy.

ch 11 Tanuki's Claw

Reincarnated as a Hero- and the Wrong Gender?!

Fantasy · Rebuilt_Kitsunii

jordon

3yr

Commented

I honestly would love to see your writing process, from the idea stages to the fleshed plot, world-building and characters.

ch 11 Tanuki's Claw

Reincarnated as a Hero- and the Wrong Gender?!

Fantasy · Rebuilt_Kitsunii

jordon

3yr

Commented

The idea in the author's note had me rolling, but yeh I agree that would have been a lot to deal with atm.

ch 83 Punishment

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Fantasy · Akkre_Kojuuin

jordon

3yr

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ch 104 Switch Flipped

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Fantasy · Oscillating_Sine

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3yr

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ch 101 Measurements

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Fantasy · Oscillating_Sine

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ch 77 Arriving in Lofinium

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Fantasy · Akkre_Kojuuin

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3yr

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ch 99 President Principal

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Fantasy · Oscillating_Sine

jordon

3yr

Commented

A KonoSuba fanfic, I can't wait to read more.

ch 0 1 Transmigration

KonoSuba: Asera's Blessing on This Wonderful World

Anime & Comics · Khiione

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ch 104 Graduation Ceremony

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