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The synopsis is very similar to that of another Fate fanfic whose name I don't remember...

this is bad... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh ... congratulations, you are special.

Before reading this novel and wasting your time, simply read the first chapters of the second volume (chap 54) and decide for yourself if this novel it's worth it... I have no tolerance with the NTR or anything like that so I leave this.

you're right but it was very rushed, so much drama, things got complicated very fast, It should have been done in a softer and less forceful way so that readers can digest and follow the rhythm of the novel ... Most of the readers read to relax or to escape from the cruel reality so it is not ideal to read a novel that in the first three chapters already gives you headaches. (It does not necessarily have to be a happy and relaxed novel, the important thing is that it is done in such a way that the reader can keep up, immerse themselves and endure important and unexpected changes)

Correction: [Thousands of years of training and study results in a weak and ignorant mc, ignorance that caused the disaster in chapter 3] Sorry for the mistakes, this was written with google translator

the 1st chapter was very good but everything was ruined in the 3rd chapter. - The MC indirectly helps the bad guys because of their devil bias and causes Asia's death. - Much drama and misunderstandings - You can see the hatred directed at Rias and her nobility which is irrational because despite their personality problems they are not bad people. - Thousands of years of training and results in a mcdevil and ignorant, ignorance that caused the disaster in chapter 3 ... Just because he sensed the existence of demons he automatically thought they were bad. After those thousands of years of being on the throne of heroes, the MC should already know that the church and gods can be worse than demons.

This is what I needed to read.

5 chapters and I'm sure this is one of the best naruto fanficts I've ever read. ........................................................................................................................................................

This novel has a lot of misunderstandings and unnecessary drama. - The MC abandoned his wife and daughter to go to the army and become a man worthy of his wife and do not humiliate him anymore, but when he meets his wife and daughter, he does not show that he has improved . So what use were all those years of effort? - The MC is the worst, it has no dignity and pride because it is easily humiliated and insulted by anyone and it does not defend itself or retaliate. - The MC is an important figure in the army, owner of a large company and claims to be capable but when the time comes to prove that he is worthy, he acts like a fool and decides to hide his identity ... - All the characters lack intelligence and personality. (In conclusion, this novel is mediocre and lacks originality) Note: this review was written using the google translator.