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This story is so good, saw in the other comments that you're Nigerian, as a fellow Nigerian I'm proud of this work and I hope you keep going, thank you for this wonderful story.

I won't deny that this is a well written novel even if I don't like the MC's character development or story progression but if the author can see this review can you pls, pls show a clear part of power growth for mc and or training, not just random powerups and awakening of new abilities. Thank you

Please stop writing in future tense man, it annoying, you keep saying the "mc would do something" it should be he did something it just kinda ruins the story.....

Please stop writing in future tense, example "he would do this" that's future tense please stop, it should be 'he did this".... Bruh,........'...... . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .

This story and it's development was quite nice at the beginning but the story slowly began to degrade, I feel like the author kinda ran out of ideas or ways for the story to develope starting around chapter 300. But I really loved the world background and the characters.

The plot doesn't add up, the mc shouldn't be able to trust anyone due to all the things he's been true, he doesn't even want revenge, he just shouts and give up everytime...