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I think the owner of the body set everything up for the FL knowing what was going to happen.Maybe it is her future self? View More
Circumventing Fate · C47
1 day ago
Why is it always, "I want to be famous". Can't people int hese type of novels have motivations that are different. IT is such a shallow reason. OTher motivations could be: recieve recognition, help others, never be vulnerable again, to become strong, etc... View More
Handsome CEO's Darling Wife · C722
4 days ago
I thought they were getting along, what happened? View More

Frencheska_B: Come on feifei show us what that little sister of yours the real piano prodigy

Mr. Tycoon's Daring Wife · C406
5 days ago
You know, its actually perfectly normal for every women to have around 2-3 miscarriages during their life. My Mom had 5, Sister 1 had 2, Sister 2 had 1, Sister-in-law had 2.Sometimes the fetuses form wrong and such.It also doesn't worsen your chance of having another child. View More
Mr. Tycoon's Daring Wife · C406
5 days ago
I would add why he can't recognize her. Say something like, "She couldn't be my Yve. YVe was sophisticated and wore the latest brands. While this women looked presentable, but plain. And the dark circles around her eyes said she was very stressed. My Yve would never allow herself to get to that level." It helps the reader understand whats going through their heads. Also, I would give 3rd person a try. 1st person, with switching viewpoints, its not always the best. View More
This Time You Are Mine · C2
6 days ago
Keep it coming! View More
Beneficial Union: Chasing A Rogue Wife · C481
1 week ago

ianz: Its a good start. But what really hooked me is the synopsis. I just hope this story will be updated regularly and most importantly will have an END. FINISHED AND COMPLETED. Thank you so much for this story. Great start Author!

Beneficial Union: Chasing A Rogue Wife
1 week ago

ticup: This is a gem. An undiscovered gem. It needs polishing but still a genuine gem.

The story is good and the flow is not awkward. The dialogue and humor is so much to my liking. The humor not forced and is natural with the story. I really like the couple’s banter.

My eyes were twinkling with the male lead’s “I am chasing my rogue wife”. AWESOME, this is how the title should be used excitingly.

YAYYY! keep up the good work! Polish your writing and you will be an amazing author!

Beneficial Union: Chasing A Rogue Wife
1 week ago
I like that she is not ignorant to her sons true nature and he has to take care of her. Its refreshing. View More
Priceless Baby: 101 Bedside Stories · C25
1 week ago

Hontoni: Me too. Gosh. I was thinking that I might be like the Lord Ye Ling. Crazy!!

Priceless Baby: 101 Bedside Stories · C24
1 week ago

Okedra: OR her child was killed to give the heart to the other child cus ya know, Doctor is more important.

Priceless Baby: 101 Bedside Stories · C22
1 week ago

Rakshademon: I’m willing to bet 10 buckets of popcorn that Tong Hua is her biological son and she was lied to by the other couple. Anyone else wanna join the bet?

*pops a handful of popcorn into mouth*

Priceless Baby: 101 Bedside Stories · C22
1 week ago
Reading Status: C21
Another rape turned into love story....I hate these stories they are unrealistic and unhealthy. ALMOST ALL RAPE VICTIMS DO NOT WANT TO EVEN BE NEAR THEIR RAPE VICTIMS, LET ALONE FORGIVE THEM BECAUSE THEY ARE "TURNED ON". Its disgusting and I wish Webnovel would stop allowing stories like this to be published. The only saving grace is that the FL is a little different. But, that doesn't make-up for her seemingly being unaffected by her rape...disgusting... View More
Priceless Baby: 101 Bedside Stories
1 week ago

maryam_fa: I need a mass release huhu

Beneficial Union: Chasing A Rogue Wife · C480
1 week ago

BridaMagus: There is no sunny side here. RAPE is dark. Rape is denser than cheating. Cheating can be tolerated but RAPE cannot..

Priceless Baby: 101 Bedside Stories · C5
1 week ago

TheGentleMan: Also, girl. When you are all alone with a clearly unstable individual, even one you've gotten to know, and have been warned about being around after dark - please listen!
I feel like the classic watcher of a horror flick, except here she's not outright murdered, but attacked and preyed upon.
Poor girl.

Priceless Baby: 101 Bedside Stories · C5
1 week ago
Author-san, please take pity on this lowly patron and either write longer chapters or publish more. I love your story and don't know how I can handle waiting so long to discover the MC's origin and how she is related to all of this... View More
Beneficial Union: Chasing A Rogue Wife · C477
1 week ago
Author, please continue to write this story regularly. Out of all the CN I have read in regards to this genre, this one is the best. It would be a shame if you didn't finish it or had large gaps. Because then it will end up being forgotten. And need to know the MC's origin and the ML's past, and how it all connects into the greater scheme! View More
Beneficial Union: Chasing A Rogue Wife · C471
3 weeks ago
Or...she is the daughter between a God and a Fallen View More
Beneficial Union: Chasing A Rogue Wife · C468
3 weeks ago
My guess is that the MC is a fallen. However, she was never evil, just misunderstood. View More
Beneficial Union: Chasing A Rogue Wife · C467
3 weeks ago
Please do not have the dying women's admirer fall in love with the MC. It would make the love he had for the dying women seem so shallow. That he couldn't tell the difference in the women he loved when the souls were swapped... And if he finds out about the swap he should be resentful at first because of the deceit and the decision of the dying women...thats just more realistic. View More
I am reincarnated as the Female Leader, but I want to marry the villain! · C1
4 weeks ago
1. That little girl is at fault. Although it was a mistake the first thing the MC should have done was have her apologize. 2. I'm annoyed with the MC. Just because she is the host of the ball doesn't mean it is going to fix the dress. Just because the company is named after her daughter isn't going to fix the dress. It very snooty of her to think of saying that to the attendant as a means of resolving the situation. They have a right to be frustrated. View More
Codename:Phoenix · C112
4 weeks ago
Sweet! My casual email is catdieasal@gmail.com, email me and I'll send you my story! View More

LoudHermit: Sure I would love to read your story

Transmigration System: Arrogant Boss on the Move!
1 month ago

MayaCotton: Not really a review just a complaint from a random reader. I would just like to say wish there was more in the description box about the story. Cause only way I start reading a book and from the picture and the description. But since there are some good reviews I'll give it a read and post a real review then.

Beneath the Embroidered Brocade
1 month ago
LoudHermit. I liked your review. Would you be willing to read a story I'm working on and tell me your thoughts? View More

LoudHermit: I really like this story but I have some suggestions. Not that you have to follow them as I still will read happily 😁.
First, background on the main character. How does she come off, what type of posture, stance, and walk does she have, and what does her resting face look like? Does she show her true emotions on her face? Does she wear a mask of emotions? Does she have any specific mannerisms like crossing her arms or brushing he fingers through hair? These physical ques show something about the character and give more depth. The fact that she can kill without any remorse, that she seems to be dense to attraction from the opposite sex, or how her personality seems to change constantly should be explained and relevant. Also you should leave some room for development. Not that she has to start off as weak, indecisive, naive or anything of the like, but just that in some way her character will evolve as she interacts with the things around her whether that be in a positive, negative, or neutral. Does she have any interesting ir odd things about her character?
Secondly, there's not much info about the world she's currently in(first arc). I'm picturing Ancient China from context but it would be nice to have some more vivid descriptions of her surrounding. Is she in a realistic world? A mix of modern and ancient? A mystical world? how does she interact with her surroundings, even on an immediate level? Like how she feels about not having proper toilet paper or how her bed is hard. Or maybe because of her past she actually appreciates her current environment more. How does she go about the daily duties that she is most likely unused to? And how much does she really differ from the original host? She seems to be in nature up to chapter 6 as a part of the army, so how does she feel about the climate, terrain, plants, and animals around her? How does her past affect her view on war and violence? Does she have any survival medical or culinary, strategic knowledge? And if she does, why? All of these apply to life in the military in addition to fighting prowess. Then looking forward, what is her understanding of etiquette and interpersonal interaction in this world as she integrates back into society after war is over?
Thirdly, how does she feel when she interacts with the other characters in this world? Does she have a hard time connecting with them because of cultural differences and make little slip ups in her actions and words? Does she have some previous experiences or skills that allow her to assimilate more effortlessly?How does she modify her actions when one character in respect to another or does she not do that at all. Is she good with social interaction in general, or is she socially inept for some reason?
Next it would be nice to have a better understanding of the side characters. What do they look like, and what eccentricities or habits do they have? How does the mc view or percieve them and what are her feelings about each character? What are the other characters opinions of the mc and how do they change once she inhabits the body if they do at all?
Finally, how does she percieve her current situation and what is her main purpose or goal in all of this? What is the main motivator in her actions? How does being in a new body feel to her. She seems to be pretty calm about the whole situation so is there a reason for this? If not try to incorporate more relatable/realistic reactions to the idea of her having a system. An average person wouldn't be calm and collected after dying and being told all of these crazy things. Does she think she's dreaming? Does she go into shock? Does she ignore her feelings and act calm but then later on is affected by the realization of her predicament? Is she scared or even terrified? Or maybe she truly is calm and why would she feel one of these ways?

Anyway thanks for writing and reading my comment if you author. Take my words with a grain of salt👍😋

Transmigration System: Arrogant Boss on the Move!
1 month ago
And if you really care, try to change the future... View More
Secret Wardrobe Of The Duchess · C84
1 month ago
As long as people volunteer for the job, then I think it's okay. It's the same as someone being a mercenary, cop, bountyhunter, fireman, etc View More
Secret Wardrobe Of The Duchess · C84
1 month ago

Yayan_tan: It's hard to find a great story like this. And a well written at that.

Secret Wardrobe Of The Duchess · C33
1 month ago

DaoDxD: Yes. But Webnovel only advertises the trashy ones while burying good ones like this.

Secret Wardrobe Of The Duchess · C33
1 month ago

daoist617: Thank you for the amazing story! I really like the FL! Spunky yet kind and one who stands up for herself. Looking forward to reading more and more of this story!

Secret Wardrobe Of The Duchess · C33
1 month ago
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