Webnovel Author: BananaChicken - Novel Collection

The novel I submitted is already on review._.

dude._. I already discussed with you

I'm still on the first five chapters and I can tell that this is a good book. It started off pretty fast and we experienced things the same way the main character does which is a really good thing as it makes an effect on its readers.

This story is very interesting although I must admit that I want confused for a bit but it wasn't that much of a problem as I still enjoyed the story.

thanks for the review!

The story was well written. The first paragraphs are quite confusing due to the dialogues being so close to each other. The next paragraphs all completely well and I suggest that you should the describe the world background more.

The flow of the story every chapter is amazing and I may have left one star missing because I find the dates a little bit confusing but overall the story is great and I also find the idea as a unique one.

can i ask for more details?