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dan0206: can you let grey retrieve the pelt just when batman is about to study itFate/Heroes · C50
BigToFu: You must be confused because he not only turned down Frost but he also was thought about the bigger picture even with the moment with Felicia, yes Salt said something but if you haven’t noticed Ben puts his plans before sating his desires for example he put Jean and Gwen’s before plowing into raven back in Russia.The Fastest Man Alive - Marvel · C33
Blackie_black: You’re lucky I already gave you today’s power stonesThe Chronicles of Elijah · C48
The Chronicles of Elijah · C48
Chaosreigns: Ugh it's disgusting seeing him with Gilgamesh appearance while being a beta.Slayer of Babylon · C7
Peace12345: Oh so he is a Beta MC who just does whatever she tells him and she gives him the cold shoulder after he is gone for a month yet he does not care a t all? I thought he had a kings mentality?Slayer of Babylon · C7
The Chronicles of Elijah · C40
Kishura: I don't care about the new story. Just make it clear if this is dropped or not.Reborn as Kenichi in the world of History's Strongest Disciple · C37
F1nal: Who cares about the new story. Drop this, continue or start a new novel. Mske it clear...Reborn as Kenichi in the world of History's Strongest Disciple · C37
FBI_B1TCH: "Momma told me lyin is bad so I'm gonna spill alllllll of my sekwets to evewybody!"
-NarutoDemon Dragon Uzumaki · C1
REMOK: Here we go again, spilling all his secrets easily and then helping the entire village who tortured him for 12 years straight. Do you seriously believe that the 3rf hokage is someone to trust. This old dude sacrificed the legacy of his successor. Your a hokage for god's sake, renown for being the god of shinobi and you can't protect naruto?Demon Dragon Uzumaki · C1
Quidanstealsnovels: Dude its a review system, everyone is entitled to their opinion and it's not like he just gave 1 star and said 'its bad'. He stated his reasons why in a rather long and detailed paragraph.Gohan in Narutoverse: Sage Style
daolife: And also maybe he just doesn’t like how the story is written therefore he wrote out this critic yes it is a fanfic and he doesn’t like the way they are being portrayed and written therefore he gave it a bad reviewGohan in Narutoverse: Sage Style
daolife: Stop hate it when people use the oh you don’t do something so you don’t have the right to critic it for all you know he might be great at writing stories you just don’t like the comment he made so stop making it about him being a worse “writer”.Gohan in Narutoverse: Sage Style
curry101: Okay now, I have so many problems with this story and the main one is being not accurate.
In the story, Danzo with his left arm gone is able to beat the MC with a power level of 1000+.
How the **** did the author scaled them.
With a power level of 1000+ the characters are way faster than lightning and are close to light speed but the mc still gets ***** slapped by Danzo who probably had a power level lower than DB Goku in his training clothes form.
Oozaru form is not 5 times it 10 times.
3rd mistake: even in dragon ball z gods were nothing, Supreme Kai is way weaker than future Gohan and in this story, some random goddess is able to do things that weren't even possible by supreme kai’s (the strongest Kai is at ssj2 level)
Basically, In this story, if you put ultra instinct post T.O.P he will be still below Kaguya.
I'm not even bothered to read this story anymore, from so much inaccuracy.
+ something extra
Why the f does the mc needs to learn chakra control when he already has ki, do you know how op is Ki compared to chakra.
It's like comparing the moon to a firefly, like for real to fly with chairs you have to be Madara and Kaguya level but if you use ki you just have to master practice it for a year and you are able to fly.
Now let's go to techniques.
Like for real find, the strongest attack created by chakra and just put it against a random attack from ki, like let's say the meteorite thing that Madara does, against a normal kid blast from the DB master Roshi using a Kamehameha, he will literally annihilation the whole attack.
Now lets to the thing that made me drop this whole ****,
Somewhere in the beginning chapters, the author said,
That anyone from Naruto world can repel a spirit bomb created by Goku, agh, this is the pinnacle of how much you can wank of a character, oh wait it's not a character he was talking about anyone from the Naruto world.
I remember something else, why the flop did you end the hell out of Saiyan bloodline?
From what I have read from the story, it seems like every character at kage level is probably at super Saiyan blue level.
I'm done rantingGohan in Narutoverse: Sage Style
Harsimran_Singh_5205: Ima dropping it’s getting too forced as of now. A normal man would keep his life a first priority and keep secret man Haki is unique to him and if he need help to protect his own life his conquerering haki should be locked away he ain’t no king at this point just a kid with great strength but not that great wisdom thanks :)Asgardian Sword God · C32
Diablo099: This is it he say normal in the intelligence department but what we see is he very stupid just teach haki that unique and can make someone stronger to other this what you call normal in intelligence department?????????what a load of bull****Asgardian Sword God · C32
Soiichiro: I don't get the point of teaching them (maybe vitra since he seems nice), he looses training time for himself and give potential betrayers some advantages. Anyway that's only my thought and it's not possible to please everybody.Asgardian Sword God · C32
Shahenshah: Why is he training a person he doesn't even know? What if he is the one who has tried to kill him? MC can't be that stupidAsgardian Sword God · C32
AstralJuggernaught: I don't understand why everyone is whining about him being so weak, it clearly says he is just scr ewing around until canon starts.
I mean cmon, he brawls with the big green for practice ( and samples), and your whining because he is not doing stupid, over the top attacks on normal thugs!?
Your fly swatter wouldn't happen to be a 20lb sledgehammer, would it?Adventurer In The Multiverse · C24
Blasphemer: Please just be a peaceful story with love and wish fulfillment,we dont need over the top traumas in the mc's life,he is a multi level being that exist in multiple timeline at once he should be messed with any other way.Adventurer In The Multiverse · C17
light_and_night: I like the of him haveing normal human intelligence I just think for someone who has been training to fight in the war he would have learn more about it I mean he I knew he was going to war, just my opinion ignore if you wish,😛 still love this fanfic will definitely keep reading it.😀
✌✌Asgardian Sword God · C30
Aedan: Don't mind them. Your fanfic novel is fantastic. Continue writing. Dont be influenced by the criticismThe Chronicles of Elijah · C26
Roh594: I was to focused on story i did not notice any grammar mistakesThe Chronicles of Elijah · C26
Rammar1: I honestly haven’t noticed the bad grammar Im just absorbed in the story so good job don’t know what everyone else is talking aboutThe Chronicles of Elijah · C26
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