Webnovel Author: hamarmuky - Fanfic&Novel Collection

It is an interesting idea. But I don't get the point as to why he is the Black Flash. I only read chapter 8 and from what I have read any of the Flashes could have fit in the story. Also, it doesn't make sense how easily he is found by Nick and becomes an Avenger. I am not going to say it is bad in general, but I think some things should be done differently. 1. The Mc should be older and independent. That way he wouldn't have to explain to people when he is away with the Avengers on missions. 2. Give him some time to get used to his powers. Or at least make it so that he has some professionals fight experience. 3. Make it so that he has been avoiding shield for some time before Nick finds him. These are just my opinions.

Too much harem is not good. I got turned off just from the synopsis as they are no guys involved. I'm a big fan of the harem genre but not like this.

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