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Replied to RighteousFilth

Author I have a question, do you think the story is going too fast now? The mc is already at a point where he seems too arrogant and op. He is openly opposing someone at high position like Gilbert who should be stronger than him in every aspect as he has more experience and knowledge. Yeah Gilbert needs the knowledge but too much opposition in reality should lead to immediate punishment. And if the MC is already close in strength to Gilbert than who can he be weak to? Really makes you think there are very few places tge story can go. I wont lie the story was way to slow early on but now the story seems way too accelerated.

TwinkieXO

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You will hate the first 30 chapters, but it gets better exponentially after that. I was really close to giving up around chapter 27 but I persevered and I appreciate my endurance. The story and system gets more flushed out chapter 30 and there are some hidden gem chapters which make you love this book. The system finally gets flushed out and also the mc does not have hero complex. Also if you are thinking of quitting the book just skip to chapter 31, you will get a better grasp of the book. If I was the author I would really recommend rewriting(/editing for more stream lined story )the first 30 chapter , as most hate comes from these chapters.

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Malign:causing or intending to cause harm or evil

For he harbored too many insidious fears snaking through his consciousness even as his lifeblood seeped away: the fear of experiencing death itself at the claws of this malign goliath.

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Espousing: to become involved with or support an activity or opinion:

Each path espousing a core tenet of rejecting the futility of hope in favor of unyielding self-actualization.

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I agree, just kill him

'I can't...continue this any longer. Death is...preferable...'

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Pall: a dark cloud of smoke, dust, etc

At first merely a bitter coping fantasy to blunt his suffering, this yearning calcified into solemn vow the first time Northern glimpsed the beast's aura flicker with outright murderous intent - a vampiric pall confirming his keeper ranked among the apex predators, on par with the dreaded Night terror itself, if not mightier.

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Fantasy · RighteousFilth

TwinkieXO

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Privation-a state in which food and other essentials for well-being are lacking

More insidiously, Northern's very sense of identity...of personhood...gradually began unraveling amid the numbing rhythm of privation, terror and unremitting exertion.

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Fantasy · RighteousFilth

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I am cogitating about opening a Thesaurus while I read this book. No need to use words that have not been used in the last decade

The more Northern cogitated on the writhing auras suffusing his grim yield, the more it consumed what tattered composure he retained.

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Fantasy · RighteousFilth

TwinkieXO

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So many monologues. Just kill the mc and end the book. The mc is not suffering, the reader is. Also change the name of the book cause at this point name of the book should be “ I got reincarnated and I got a cloning talent with no system attached”

ch 26 The Miner

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Fantasy · RighteousFilth

TwinkieXO

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Replied to Marshall0lee

Yikes author didn’t even respond to the legitimate questions that every reader has. I got frustrated and came to the reviews to see if I was not alone and it seems many share the same problem.

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Fantasy · RighteousFilth

TwinkieXO

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Mf you don’t even know what it does

'So expensive…?'

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Fantasy · RighteousFilth

TwinkieXO

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Man respect please

"Oh shit! Shin! Are you okay? You're bleeding so much?"

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Fantasy · RighteousFilth

TwinkieXO

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Its ok he’s the mc

Despite his father's optimism, Northern remained pragmatic, mindful of the uncertainty surrounding talent manifestation.

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Fantasy · RighteousFilth

TwinkieXO

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Why always this dumb trope

Immediately they did, a sprinkle of liquid shot into the face of the husband, persisting for a while and then going down low. The baby giggled and jerked his leg as he saw how he had besmirched the young man's face with his pee.

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Fantasy · RighteousFilth

TwinkieXO

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Little skeleton

Typical cannon fodder soldier type—small skeletons.

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Urban · Bimo Zhijian

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Jinxed it

"Rather than pursuing something as unreliable and rare as a game spot, it's better to find ways to make money. Making money is the most important thing."

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Urban · Bimo Zhijian

TwinkieXO

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I liked the story in the beginning as there was mystery but the narrative jumps around too much, I want to know what happens with the undead not story’s from other peoples perspective constantly. There was a good idea but sadly the author was over ambitious with the writing. Start with the mc and develope around him, i don’t want to read 2-3 chapters where the mc is not even mentioned.

Pestilence: Rise Of The Pure Undead

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TwinkieXO

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This first person view seems so different , after so much third person story telling

I shuddered and as one of the reflections died, withering away from old age.

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This is complex thinking, never call goblins unintelligent

Turning a bad event into a good one was the strongest suit of any leader, or so Gobstroz believed.

Pestilence: Rise Of The Pure Undead

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TwinkieXO

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Well are they really dumb, they seem much smarter than savages.

With Stolgob and Pokzgob by his sides, there was no need for a motivational speech, this trio alone was a paramount to strength in this tribe, they may be uneducated, primitive and objectively stupid monsters all things considered, but around this lake, in this miniature world cut off from the rest of the world, they were actually the mightiest tribe.

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