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thotieslayer: He should use fire and ice go temper his body to extreme temperatures

Martial Artist in Animeverse · C40
1 month ago
Thanks for the chapters View More
Martial Artist in Animeverse · C40
1 month ago

AwronZizao: I'm actually on the verge of believing you, since it was weird he knew where the Flame Sect was.

He said it himself, he was far too busy with cultivating in the past, right?

Unusual.

What do you mean my cute disciples are Yanderes? · C42
1 month ago

Isaiah10: #1 suspect Master Lin
(*Pushes glasses up while explanning reasoning*)
Motive: They told Master Lin they touched them inappropriatly and he pretty damn yandere himself.
Evidence 1: never been to spirit flame sect but he knew the location and surrounding details a little too well.
Evidence 2: im willing to bet reading and wiping memories is a higher plan technique

What do you mean my cute disciples are Yanderes? · C42
1 month ago

MangaLoverForever: Thanks for the chapters
And author just do whatever the hell you want and don't care about what those haters are saying
As long as the story is still good enough the rest of us will support you as this is one of the greatest martial arts fanfics there is
Besides this is only one world and there is still a lot more to visit so it's okay even if you screw it up (not that I think you did anyway )

Martial Artist in Animeverse · C35
1 month ago
Thanks for the chapters
And author just do whatever the hell you want and don't care about what those haters are saying
As long as the story is still good enough the rest of us will support you as this is one of the greatest martial arts fanfics there is
Besides this is only one world and there is still a lot more to visit so it's okay even if you screw it up (not that I think you did anyway ) View More
Martial Artist in Animeverse · C35
1 month ago
Thanks for the chapters
And author just do whatever the hell you want and don't care about what those haters are saying
As long as the story is still good enough the rest of us will support you as this is one of the greatest martial arts fanfics there is
Besides this is only one world and there is still a lot more to visit so it's okay even if you screw it up (not that I think you did anyway ) View More
Martial Artist in Animeverse · C35
1 month ago

Jasonenrick: I like him.joining the Straw hats ....for all the people who don't want him to join ,just a question ...why?
I also read a lot of FF of One Piece and i only hate it that he joins the Straw hats if there are special circumstances .
For example

1. He has some Goals which doesn't suit well with joing the Straw hats

2. He can only go to the One Piece World ,because then everybody want the MC to be a Pirate captain(me too)

But here he wants to have a fun adventure and doesn't want to be alone( he lost his wive for more 80+ years ) and since then he was more of a loner.
And if we add that he has all enernity just for One Goal and that is to be the Best Martial Arts practiser.

Thank you for the chapters btw ;)

Martial Artist in Animeverse · C35
1 month ago

MangaLoverForever: Finally a new chapter
You're f*cking back
It has been soooo long I almost forgot about this great fanfic
But really author if you do not update more we'll have to take extreme mesures like kidnapping you and locking you up until we have more chapters

Chasing The Assassin | Killua Zoldyck Fanfiction| · C18
1 month ago

amaturewriter: WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED...FUCK IT...I LIKE YOUR SHIT HERE HAVE 5 STARS..AND COOKIE..

suggestion: same as last book...OP MC...one man army..smart..no retarded perverted idiot...some bash [its fun] ..romance and fluff [no wife stealing any whores or man whores....if harem keep it small]..if animagus...maybe a dolphin or a blue whale..seriously?

Harry Potter: Orphans Ascension
1 month ago

Thats_a_sexy_name: The story is worth the read, despite any long updates that may occur. I read the book before the 're-write and I liked it, this opinion hasn't changed. This however may not be "everyone's cup of tea" but it is a good brew in the (re)making. I also like puns.

Harry Potter: Orphans Ascension
1 month ago

shady_elf: I read the original story and I have to say, this is much better. The writing quality improved dramatically, and it was decent to begin with. The story is far more detailed, and I'm looking forward to more.

Harry Potter: Orphans Ascension
1 month ago

OmnipotentDad: Yeah, was trying to make it look like a very old expert, so powerful yet had gone dull, like a samurai's blade that became rusty due to the passage of time. and thanks again.

Unsealing: Omnipotent Father
1 month ago

OmnipotentDad: Understandable, and thanks!
Btw, Volume 1 is just the gist of the story, like a somewhat of an introduction, a boring one, that usually, other novels only take about 3 to 5 chapters to make, yet, It took me 80+ for the introduction before the story's flow started to go on.

(The idea is, to remove my novel from other redundant novels which made the same introductions all over again, my aim is to make it a lot more in the way of; "How did it happen... what happened? uhh, what's that?" All sorts of things like that, yet, It seems that I need to go with the same flow from the other novels, or making a fan fic about another story, just changing the title and the plot with a few tweaks here and there to make it more awesome.)


Well, thanks for the review, although you only had read 20 chaps.

Sincerely appreciate it, not much, but yeah.

The idea of this first 90+ chapters is to make it as mysterious as I can, yet, all of it was ruined due to some of the readers pressuring me a lot of times, soo, I`m kind of reluctant with how the story goes.

I made a revision of this novel, where, I removed more details, to remold it to my own story and will be selling it.

I hope I do not get a review like this then. Thanks!

Unsealing: Omnipotent Father
1 month ago

Elude: I truly do love the originality you tried to implement, don't get me wrong. (I'm just trying to be constructive, these flaws which exist in the MC's knowledge/attitude is a major setback.

Believe me, I have a feeling that if your overall English was great you would be a FANTASTIC writer. (Like, I mean fantastic, some of the characters are only ruined due to the writing quality)

If the writing quality improves over time, feel free to @ me and I will quickly change my review.

Unsealing: Omnipotent Father
1 month ago

Elude: Typing this on my phone. Keep in mind that I was only reviewing it according to the rating system, if there was a rating for originality, dedication and the drive to write: What would I have rated your story? Duh, those sections would have been max stars. Keep writing!

Unsealing: Omnipotent Father
1 month ago
Finally a new chapter
You're f*cking back
It has been soooo long I almost forgot about this great fanfic
But really author if you do not update more we'll have to take extreme mesures like kidnapping you and locking you up until we have more chapters View More
Chasing The Assassin | Killua Zoldyck Fanfiction| · C18
1 month ago

OnlyAsuraNovel: This novel looks awesome!! Please keep going with your work!! It looks interesting and captivating, and It's got a wonderful Mc, not the usual brainwashed idiot.

Eternal Sacred King
1 month ago

Drunk_dragon: Because it’s obvious that the authors intentions is to make MC the most powerful. If the his multiverse system didn’t give it away for you then I don’t know what will. I’m just giving ideas on how to make MC OP while also making the story more interesting, unlike most system novels were they world hop and collect power without any real struggle. It’s not about how powerful the MC gets in the story that makes it interesting, but how he arrived at his power. If he gets power without any cost then there will be no character development, thus making the story very boring.

Strongest multiverse system · C21
1 month ago

xXTheDarkOneXx: Let me give it to you like this.

Hypothetically I got hit by a truck and I got to rencarnate with a system but the only condition is I need to create a harem, I will chose to get my soul erased from existences instead.

Hope that clears your doubts

Strongest multiverse system · C21
1 month ago

Drunk_dragon: Writers block? Interesting. I have many ideas feel free to use them. He could have an ultimate enemy who has powers similar to him and one of them must die to complete their respective systems, making him his natural enemy. This will cause him to pursue power to the limits without any reservations. He could at some point lose his memory due to an injury cause during an intense fight, causing him to land in an unknown world knowing nothing about himself or the world he’s in. This will make him lose his powers, since wouldn’t know how to operate, except his body strength which he could spend time finding ways to make it stronger. He could travel to warlock of the magus world at the end to follow the path of magic and develop his own unique bloodline and since that worlds power levels are crazy he should only go to it at the end, since after he won’t be able to go to any other world because it wouldn’t even be a challenge. He could at some point lose his entire body after a fight causing him to look for another body to inhabit and this time he will train systematically to get the best effect. At some point all his powers and system become sealed becoming a mortal with a mortals lifespan and he gets dropped off in a mortal world like earth except in the medieval era. Before the system gets sealed it could inform him of an item that can unseal it but it’s in the largest and strongest kingdom in that world. This will cause him to use his mind and lots of plots to build his own empire from the ground up and fight against the larger empire. This will bring political intrigue, betrayals, slaughter to the novel causing him to mature and become less trusting of people. These are just a few of my ideas feel free to use them

Strongest multiverse system · C21
1 month ago

Gabrielthehuman: For people who have not understood the ideology of the novel, I explain.
First, the Overlord world was only a means for him to acquire knowledge and skills, he was not going to stay long in overlord, he would not establish relationships with the guards and he will not make friends or fight in that world, it is only a means.
Second, the MC is not Op, there are other worlds that other entities can step on the MC as if it were an ant.
Third, this novel is about Mc's trip to get power, that's all, if he will have one or another friend and that, but that does not focus, he will not focus on his wife or his friends, the novel will not develop . In those areas, it will focus on the development of Mc,

**: I like that the protagonist has spent 400 years strengthening their bases, I would like to know what the next world will be.
You should already leave the world of the supreme lord, be reborn in a new body and begin to develop in the system of force of that world.

Strongest multiverse system · C11
1 month ago
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Gabrielthehuman: For people who have not understood the ideology of the novel, I explain.
First, the Overlord world was only a means for him to acquire knowledge and skills, he was not going to stay long in overlord, he would not establish relationships with the guards and he will not make friends or fight in that world, it is only a means.
Second, the MC is not Op, there are other worlds that other entities can step on the MC as if it were an ant.
Third, this novel is about Mc's trip to get power, that's all, if he will have one or another friend and that, but that does not focus, he will not focus on his wife or his friends, the novel will not develop . In those areas, it will focus on the development of Mc,

**: I like that the protagonist has spent 400 years strengthening their bases, I would like to know what the next world will be.
You should already leave the world of the supreme lord, be reborn in a new body and begin to develop in the system of force of that world.

Strongest multiverse system · C11
1 month ago
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Weirdo: As long as you finish tying up all the knot in your stories and give it a good ending chapter(No need for any epic battle or cliffhanger like there's a far journey and he just began sh1t like 'the wizard world','Gates of God', 'Ancient Godly Monarch'...Just end it normally by giving happily ever after like Desolate Era that reach apex of his own omniverse, he didn't go and conquer others like those cliche mc..)...

A Lazy Man's Adventure · C175
1 month ago

MangaLoverForever: Thanks for the chapter 😙😙

A Lazy Man's Adventure · C175
1 month ago
Thanks for the chapter 😙😙 View More
A Lazy Man's Adventure · C175
1 month ago

FennrrirX: Is it just me that finds it weird that no one asked his name yet?

The Path of a Ninja : Eyes of Death & Body of Life · C15
1 month ago

Dao_Of_Battle: author what take you so long, do i have to wait like this between every chap 😭😰😨

The Path of a Ninja : Eyes of Death & Body of Life · C15
1 month ago

MapleHound: War is caused by the access of abuse to the seven sins of humanity. Anger, Greed, Gluttony, Lust, Sloth, Envy, Pride.

Greed for money and power leads to the Envy and Anger of the poor and powerless. If the poor attack the rich the rich will become angry at the poor for having the audacity to attack them and their Pride.

Once again the abuse of Gluttony leads to the Envy and Anger of the starving. The gluttonous have plenty of food and strength but the starving are dying and weak
As a result if the starving attack the gluttonous their pride will be damaged and be become Angered as a result.

The people who have food and money have all the power and as a result make other people do what ever they want. As a result they will eventually do nothing for themselves thus is the sin of Sloth

For those that abuse their lust on others will ensue the anger of others. Listing over someones family member can lead to the rest of that family to anger. Same woth6lusting over friends of someone already lusts over them as well. This will result in both parties who lust after the same person to clash in anger, the loser having their pride damaged and angered further.

Regardless who wins the war it will only lead to more anger, envy, and prides hurt of the losing party. Thus is the circle of war.

At least that's my take on the matter 0_o.

If you read through that entire thing then you may eat an imaginary cookie that I'm imagining I am handing to you.

The Path of a Ninja : Eyes of Death & Body of Life · C15
1 month ago

MangaLoverForever: I really am loving this story even more with each new chapter
It's really different from the usual Marvel fanfics
Keep going and I will keep supporting you 👍👍👍you're doing a great job
But DON'T YOU DARE drop this
Because then I'll hunt you down and bring you from the lowest pits of hell to lock you up in a basement with a computer so that you can finish this masterpiece

The Goddess of Death · C10
1 month ago
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