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KHRIKY
LV 10I'm a mom of two kids hoping to make my hobby into a career. ✌️
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Commented See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
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Fantasy · KHRIKY
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Commented See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
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Fantasy · KHRIKY
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Commented See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
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Fantasy · KHRIKY
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Commented See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
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Fantasy · KHRIKY
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Commented Just imagine flowers in the background behind him because he's handsome lol
And the moment their eyes met… Evie's heart momentarily stopped.
SPELLBOUND
Fantasy · KazzenlX
2yr
Commented I think for here you should change it to this because the 'and' in unnecessary.
As she lurches forward, she suddenly kneels on soft grass?'
Like that. The' and' makes the sentence a bit confusing so I would cut that out, if you want to, just my advice. :)
As Skye begins to go over what she agreed to, she is filled with immense pain and discomfort, like her soul was being stretched and mangled by an unknown force. As she lurches forward and suddenly kneels on the soft grass?...
To reborn is to live
Fantasy · _Lunar_
2yr
Commented OK, the way I imagined that was coolll
[System installation commencing in 1....2.....3]
To reborn is to live
Fantasy · _Lunar_
2yr
Commented Already has detail *chef's kiss*
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Urban · keulijeu
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