Niche267

2yr

Commented

This was a trick he learned in the army. If your gun wasn't equipped with a silencer, you can use the Silent Feet potion to temporarily muffle the sound. He headed directly toward the Goblin's Village.

My Faᵵe System

Fantasy · MellowGuy

Niche267

2yr

Replied to Krisnan

Yeahhhh.

ch 118 Creature (Part 2)

A Bored Lich

Fantasy · Random_writer

Niche267

2yr

Posted

This is... Good? Like, actually? It's a supremely strange concept, but I've really enjoyed reading it. I honestly can't think of any flaws this has in particular. I hope for more.

A Tale of the Eternal Hunters

Anime & Comics · DaoistofBoredom

Niche267

2yr

Posted

The first sentence has a blatant error. Of the sort that's constantly repeated. The author doesn't bother to check what they wrote. If you're okay with that, then you can try it. Personally, I can't stand such a low standard of effort.

Tera Online [Deleted]

Fantasy · Masquerade1010

Niche267

2yr

Commented

You're. You should at-least try with these things.

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Tera Online [Deleted]

Fantasy · Masquerade1010

Niche267

2yr

Commented

You have some serious problems with were's, we'res, and wheres.

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Tera Online [Deleted]

Fantasy · Masquerade1010

Niche267

2yr

Commented

Wow. An error on the literal first sentence. That's impressive.

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Tera Online [Deleted]

Fantasy · Masquerade1010

Niche267

2yr

Posted

Honestly. I really like this. It's written really well, all things considered. It's got many issues in it's writing, but it feels good, and in all ways that matter, that's the most important thing. However. The story. Honestly, it feels like random things just... Happen. There's absolutely no sense of causation. Things just... Happen as the Author wills it. The further into this you get, the worse it gets. Honestly, it's unbearable. Don't read this. The characters are great. The writing quality is a diamond in the rough. But the story is awful.

Godhome

Fantasy · GoneSoSoon

Niche267

2yr

Commented

cheese. I like cheese pizza. And I don't hate pineapple on pizza, but it's not really pizza at that point.

(A/N: What's your favorite pizza toppings? Also, what's your view on pineapple on Pizza? I need to know.)

Time Stops When I'm with Her. (MHA)

Anime & Comics · Hyberions

Niche267

2yr

Replied to Ragnova

He absorbed Surya, remember?

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Karna: The Hero of Charity

Anime & Comics · OmniverseDivine

Niche267

2yr

Posted

I have enjoyed this massively, and I hope it continues. Honestly, it's just a lot of fun. The author has a lot of talent, and I really enjoy how the characters are written. Of course, this is a power fantasy to end all power fantasies, but that notwithstanding, it's really good.

Time Stops When I'm with Her. (MHA)

Anime & Comics · Hyberions

Niche267

2yr

Replied to Stire

My interpretation is this. If they won't spend the time to tell me what they're selling, why would I spend the time to look myself? It's lazy and disgustingly arrogant. If something evokes literal anger in such a manner that isn't a literary tool, then that's deserving of a negative review.

Death... and me

Fantasy · Suiyan

Niche267

2yr

Commented

ngl I'm sick of these "zones" that nullify the her power. it's the same thing over and over and over.

"Main Mind, this Zone is no simple thing! It completely negates your magic! It's incredibly hard to crack! I can't even understand these spells used to make it, such ancient magic!"

Epic of Caterpillar

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

Niche267

2yr

Commented

i would have chosen giant caterpillar. seeing as how it's an upgrade in the same stage, he'd have much more potential.

[Undine Butterfly has been selected]

Epic of Caterpillar

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

Niche267

2yr

Posted

Garbage. These characters aren't a single bit human. the author doesn't even try. Like, protagonist tries to save a girl, gets punted and nearly murdered by the girl he tried to save, and then again! he tries to save her, and she tries to kill him. this is a failure in writing on one of the basest levels imaginable.

Blood Type: Dragon

Fantasy · iamnaz7

Niche267

2yr

Commented

What's with isekai/vrmmo protagonists and having "basic" characters? it's so boring.

"Basic."

Closed Beta That Only I Played

Fantasy · basso77

Niche267

2yr

Posted

I eat tomatoes worst work. And he agreed. He dropped this novel. He never finished it. Protagonist becomes a side character in one of his other novels, though. Anyway, don't read this if you want something that actually gets an ending. Anyway, it's his most boring work. Go read one of his other ones.

Swallowed Star

Eastern · I Eat Tomatoes

Niche267

2yr

Replied to Krizantem

Maybe not, but atleast proofread. So many authors on here don't even bother. Even on this response, you didn't put a space after write.

Supreme Lord Shapeshifter

Fantasy · Krizantem

Niche267

2yr

Commented

Luck is basically always the most valuable stat in web novels like this, but most authors have their protagonists completely ignore that. I hope that's not the case here.

Luck: 5

Dominatrix System

Fantasy · Madjic

Niche267

2yr

Commented

this... Isn't a good sign. between the oddly innacurate synopsis, and now typing "lol" in... Huh.

It's really convenient when your dad owns the biggest motorcycle company in the country lol. I put my matching helmet on, special boots, knee pads, and head off.

Infinity: Rising of the Soul Weavers

Fantasy · DioisBAd4dM

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