Kywon

1yr

Commented

He probably has the power to see the future. not really 'calculating' if you ask me.

This meant that the young man had simply calculated everything.

Kywon

1yr

Commented

Death is also a form of incapacitation

"I didn't want this," Alex said slowly. "I didn't want to kill him. I only wanted to incapacitate him."

Kywon

1yr

Commented

Mr. God here should retire. 'Cause he's going to be doing this for all of eternity.

"And then. And then! And then you always say the same fucking words! You always say 'excuse me'! Can't you say something else for a change?! Can't at least one of you guys say 'hello' or 'good morning' or 'fuck you' or just ANYTHING else?!"

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Fantasy · Warmaisach

Kywon

2yr

Commented

Wow... Interesting 'sword' reference

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Fantasy · QuBe

Kywon

2yr

Commented

'Now that I think about it, I feel like I'm floating. ' If you floating, you are free from gravity, not pressure. (pressure is the amount of force you are applying to a unit area) I think I will stop editing here. You can try Grammerly or hire an editor.

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Eastern · Boredguy

Kywon

2yr

Commented

'I can't* even feel my eyes.' can't means 'unable to' / 'cannot' don't means 'prefer not to'/ 'do not' Example: I can't drive means: I am unable to drive. I don't drive means: I prefer not to drive. I'm not sure what you're trying to say for the second part. Are you trying to say 'How am I seeing'?

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Eastern · Boredguy

Kywon

2yr

Commented

'The darkness is all pitch black' is not a sentence someone would say. Someone would probably say, 'Its too dark', 'Its completely black'. If you want to keep the original meaning, you can say: 'No, it's too dark to be night. There's not even moonlight'

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Eastern · Boredguy

Kywon

2yr

Replied to hat_coll

*quiet Running sentences makes the story harder to read. And it is very easy to correct a running sentence. Just add full stops and commas

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Fantasy · MegaC

Kywon

2yr

Commented

These are questions. Start with a question word. End with a question mark. 'Did I wake up? Why is darkness all I see? Is it still night?'

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Eastern · Boredguy

Kywon

2yr

Commented

bruh... You need an editor.

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Eastern · Boredguy

Kywon

2yr

Commented

Really? You can't tell from the cover?

You can't even imagine how disappointed I was...!

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Fantasy · Sound_Hammer

Kywon

2yr

Commented

Wait. This is a reverse harem game. I wonder what breathtaking scenes are you talking about...

There were many masterfully crafted events with breathtaking illustrations that helped the player stay immersed in the story...

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Fantasy · Sound_Hammer

Kywon

2yr

Commented

I'm just happy that you are safe and sound.

A/N: Due to the anti-vaxination mandate happening where I live, I had to move out, as the situation was getting pretty violent. Now everything is fixed and I will be back to the usual update schedule.

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Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

Kywon

2yr

Replied to AnotherAtlas

He probably meant anti- 'vaccination mandate'. i.e. anti mandate for vaccination

A/N: Due to the anti-vaxination mandate happening where I live, I had to move out, as the situation was getting pretty violent. Now everything is fixed and I will be back to the usual update schedule.

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Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

Kywon

2yr

Replied to Melon_Night

I think he means anti- 'vaccination mandate'

A/N: Due to the anti-vaxination mandate happening where I live, I had to move out, as the situation was getting pretty violent. Now everything is fixed and I will be back to the usual update schedule.

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Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

Kywon

2yr

Commented

Is this dropped?

ch 70 Chapter 70

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Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

Kywon

2yr

Commented

OMG, I feel so bad for Ais. Yang influenced her to be in this situation indirectly. To sacrifice her teammates just to get stronger... Idk man, might be abit out of character.

ch 115 CHAPTER 115(Mother, Queen, Failure)

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Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene

Kywon

2yr

Commented

I bet *you're laughing your ass off. 'you're' means 'you are' For example: you're mean ( means 'you are mean'), you're laughing (means 'you are laughing') when something belongs to you, you say your. For example: Your phone, Your wallet, Your house, Your ass

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Fantasy · MegaC

Kywon

2yr

Replied to Actorat_Cain

Your sentence needs proper punctuations and Grammer. I can't decipher your sentence at all.

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Fantasy · MegaC

Kywon

2yr

Commented

i.e. be careful of running sentences.

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