AshenShugar

2mth

Commented

"I see," Lucian replied, his hand in his chin, his gaze briefly clouding over for a second as he contemplated various thoughts before asking.

AshenShugar

4mth

Commented

glad to know you're alright & that you are back to writing this great story. Looking forward to updates, thank you.

ch 46 Updates

FrostBitten (Percy Jackson Fanfic)

Book&Literature · CarlosDr3vna

AshenShugar

7mth

Commented

Thank you, loving reading this

ch 59 The Hunt Complete

AshenShugar

7mth

Commented

that was bloody epic, thank you for the chapter

ch 34 Chapter 34: Outgrown You.

Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.

Movies · Saintbarbido

AshenShugar

7mth

Commented

That kicked ass, great chapter thanks

A/N: Hope you enjoyed the chapter, I thought it was nice while writing it. Leave a review, leave a comment!!! Let me know what you liked...Sorry for the delays, was busy.

AshenShugar

8mth

Commented

Just want to say thank you for such a great story, I've not read anything with this sort of twist on the HP story & am loving this, thank you.

ch 227 Detention(2)

AshenShugar

8mth

Commented

Cortana & I*

"Master me and Cortana will get to work on synthesizing a cure right away, but considering the amount of work we have to do and tests this could take longer than we originally thought" Said TB

AshenShugar

11mth

Commented

I think it was in the Howard Stern movie it was said, "the average person who likes Howard Stern listens to him for an hour a day, the average person who hates Howard Stern listens to him for two hours a day" when questioned as to why they listen to him both haters & fans answered with, "I want to know what he will do next" I'm loving your story, thank you & don't let the haters get to you

ch 57 Bonding

AshenShugar

1yr

Commented

I agree with you, let's everyone picture the hero they want rather than being pigeon holed into a likeness you may not care for. Your imagination at the end of the day is the most powerful tool.

I've received alot of questions about this so I'll put it here. I generally like to leave my character descriptions blank or very vague so the reader can picture themselves or whoever they want in the MCs shoes. To me this is far more immersive experience and allows for a better story to implement myself into when I read a similar book.

Reincarnated into Eragon

Book&Literature · FallenEnt

AshenShugar

1yr

Commented

Such a great quote from an amazing poet Dylan Thomas

"Today will mark the start of our war against the horde of Behemoths! Evilus planned for us to wallow in despair, we will not go gentle into the good night… we will fight back with everything we have. We will rage against the dying light"

Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers

Anime & Comics · Feniurme

AshenShugar

1yr

Replied to Sica_rio

I think maybe author meant 2 days

He had been training in this space for so long, After reaching level 10 each level he gained gave him 5 stat points, and Austin was currently level 14.

Marvel: I am The Gamer

Anime & Comics · ShadowDeity

AshenShugar

1yr

Commented

should he feel pain with gamers body?

"Fuck" Austin cursed before standing up while ignoring the pain he was feeling, he could now feel the presence of some monsters approaching him.

Marvel: I am The Gamer

Anime & Comics · ShadowDeity

AshenShugar

1yr

Commented

🇿🇦

So here's the question, what's your country? You can answer directly, or you can use a cryptic answer for other readers and me to guess.)

Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Book&Literature · Se7en

AshenShugar

1yr

Replied to Akisu

100% agreed, I love the way you write your relationships so a slower pace is not an issue for me, you write however you want, there will always be fans who enjoy it

[A/N: I feel like I should write a little warning here to let you know that this story is very slow-paced and the main focus for the beginning is his relationship with Jean and generallly the development of Elijah's mentality. There will be plenty of action in the future but I will build up to that slowly, as Elijah will not needlessly enter any big conflict if it doesn't directly affect him.

The Wanderer - A X-Men Crossover Fan-Fiction

Others · GodOfFreedom

AshenShugar

1yr

Replied to MinerFrags

Agreed, as someone with a heart condition that causes it to beat faster than normal it is not a good thing, over exertion causes you to feel like you are dying due to an even higher heart rate

Next, I checked my organs, my lunges capability to intake air had doubled, and my heart was beating much faster than before, but there was no sign of being incoming heart attack I guess this is now my normal heartbeat.

Survival of a Loner MARVEL

Anime & Comics · daoistofeverything

AshenShugar

1yr

Posted

Great story, awesome MC, not a one dimensional MC, can't wait to see where the author will take us, take a chance & read something great.[img=recommend]

Aden Strong: Avatar In DC

TV · Saintbarbido

AshenShugar

1yr

Replied to RockyMasters

or simply *wanted to make him embarrassed

"Then keep enjoying them but a bit more discreetly." He simply replied, making the amazon who wanted to his him embarrassed, even if just a little bit, quite disappointed.