Belthezzor

4d

Commented

Kelex: "it hold the knowledge to become the best soldier" AKA know how to plan, fight and survive in battle, etc. MC: "no, I don't need that" is he a moron? I can understand he has plans, but disregarding knowing how to fight? Dude is dumb AF. He is in DC, and as much as he might be one of those behind the scenes types, there will come time where he will have to know how to defend himself without pulling a Superman, just relying on brute force.

ch 10 Year Five

I am James Kent (New)

Anime & Comics · 5imply_lucid

Belthezzor

5d

Commented

Did the Author forget about the Mind Stone? It also could be the energy the MC needs to cultivate, and neither the Ancient on or Odin did anything when it was taken by Shield, then Hydra.

ch 0 5 4. Introductions

Transmigrated: Patrick's Marvel Adventure

Movies · Story_Teller_229

Belthezzor

1mth

Replied to SYAWALTDL

I agree. Plus the MC liked the hood for his original outfit.

[Insert pictures of Black Spider-Suits here] (A/N: Most likes will be what his suit looks like now.)

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

Movies · AlienWarlord

Belthezzor

4mth

Posted

So much wasted potential. The story started out good, but then the author just dropped another character in with no thought, and then basically mentally killed the MC.

Stargate: Harry Potter and Merlin's Legacy

Book&Literature · Ashmodai

Belthezzor

4mth

Replied to Belthezzor

Also, if he has all the knowledge of Moros/Merlin, wouldn't he know about the communication stones and their connection to the Ori galaxy?

ch 0 7 Chapter 7: The Status of Earth

Stargate: Harry Potter and Merlin's Legacy

Book&Literature · Ashmodai

Belthezzor

4mth

Commented

So he knows that there are pieces of tech left by Merlin/Moros, and a vault full of gold (which he needs; as he does need money according to the scene in Gringotts) and knowledge of the Sangral, but chooses to leave it alone?

ch 0 7 Chapter 7: The Status of Earth

Stargate: Harry Potter and Merlin's Legacy

Book&Literature · Ashmodai

Belthezzor

4mth

Posted

I tried to keep going, but the MC just gets worse as the story goes on. He basically turns into a busybody "Karen" with no self development. The plot of the story...what plot? It's just the MC and his harem and other hanger ons going to other world, looting, starting fights that begin because of mostly the MC and his brattish behavior. It became a chore to read at this point, and that is after forcing myself to continue in the hopes of some improvement. Now i'm sure a bunch of the fanboys and girl will be attacking this review, but, meh.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne

Belthezzor

4mth

Replied to Belthezzor

Barely 20 (with the two years in the Land of Shadows).

ch 91 Chapter 86

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne

Belthezzor

4mth

Commented

What is it with the MC calling other teenagers, kid? He is barely 18 himself. Even if he has some of Zelretch's memories, he is more of a proper reincarnation, like DXD Hercules, Can Can, etc. than what is done in isekai stories. It's kind of jarring.

ch 91 Chapter 86

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne

Belthezzor

4mth

Commented

What relationship? He just met Rin, and he isn't Zelretch. There is being friendly and getting to know someone, then there is this forced relationship that comes off as, "because the author likes Rin, duh!"

ch 40 Chapter 39

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne

Belthezzor

6mth

Commented

That oath seems to have had him sworn loyalty to her, not the other way around.

ch 0 3 Oath

The 12 eyes Within The Cultivation World

Anime & Comics · itachi1010

Belthezzor

6mth

Commented

Is the "Father" a catholic priest type? and are they calling Nonou "Sister" like in asian countries, or like a nun? Because if it the catholic type, it makes no sense being in Naruto.

ch 0 6 CH. 6 NONOU YAKUSHI ( Rewrite )

multiverse: gamer system

Anime & Comics · ShadowPanda_538

Belthezzor

6mth

Commented

I on't understand why he needs investors, when it was stated that he had all the capital needed to start his company, and had revenue streams supplying more. Investors are only needed when you need startup funds.

ch 18 Going Down The Rabbit Hole

Finding Purpose In The Multiverse: Meta Essence Quest Mode

Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1

Belthezzor

6mth

Commented

What about the skills the MC was supposed to get as rewards for quests and lvl 10 (I think). There was least 3 of them, but he hasn't gotten any new ones in his status, or inventory.

ch 117 Chapter 116 - The Eight of Escalation

All-Powerful : Summoning System

Anime & Comics · I_S_Rift

Belthezzor

7mth

Commented

Great chapter. I especially love the manipulation on words to get Overhaul to agree to the deal, costing him his soul.

ch 24 Proverbs 20:17

Lucifer Quirk

Anime & Comics · Prognastat

Belthezzor

7mth

Commented

Is the MC Tsundere? That last sentence is cliche Tsun Tsun material, lol.

ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Olivia

This isn't High School DxD, damn it!

Anime & Comics · The_POZ

Belthezzor

7mth

Commented

For shame!! That Porsche over and Aston Martin DBS Superleggera?! The blasphemy!

ch 32 Chapter Thirty-One

The barber:Dc

Others · John_Len_2493

Belthezzor

8mth

Replied to LordPhenex026

Translation: It is forced to create drama. And yes, definitely will be taking my exit, as this story is getting worse as it goes on. Good luck

ch 82 Chapter 82: 19 and 20

I'm Gohan!

Anime & Comics · LordPhenex026

Belthezzor

8mth

Commented

I believe the fastest 10K in the world is around 26 minutes. Agent 47 should be able to finish in a much more reduced time.

ch 0 1 Starting over & Agent 47

fghhhfffffffffff

Movies · LM_loreweaver

Belthezzor

10mth

Commented

14 feet tall (4.5 meters), and bulky? that literally twice the size of Shaquille O'Neal. how does that even work, especially in the bedroom where almost all the women would be five and a half feet tall (1.6 meters) or if you maximize around six feet (1.8)?

ch 0 -3 Imperium Basic info (Not a chapter) (WIP)

The God-Emperor in Multiverse(R-18 Version)

Book&Literature · LordDrogon123

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I am James Kent (New)

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Stargate: Harry Potter and Merlin's Legacy

Stargate: Harry Potter and Merlin's Legacy

Stargate: Harry Potter and Merlin's Legacy

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

The 12 eyes Within The Cultivation World

multiverse: gamer system

Finding Purpose In The Multiverse: Meta Essence Quest Mode

All-Powerful : Summoning System

Lucifer Quirk

This isn't High School DxD, damn it!

The barber:Dc

I'm Gohan!

fghhhfffffffffff

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