BobDole - Profile

Thanks for the chapter, but we really need some character development - outside of abilities. I feel no connection with any of the characters. It's just 'MC has OP abilities, and he wants women to admire him even though he's not going to do anything to them'. I mean... This chapter was a 3 month time skip. Does he just keep stringing all these girls along? I understand that this is an anime world, and in DM, women won't care about that, but it's still frustrating for someone looking to read an actual story, and not a long description of a status sheet.

Thanks for the chapter. Really wished you'd derail this already. There have been some very minor changes, like Spearow, but this is still just an SI added to canon.

He's a God of Wrath. When he get angry, he should get really angry.

The mom is really a bad character. Punishes her son for flirting? That's just bs.

Finicky and stubborn cats. Always getting people killed.

Loved the chapter. This is probably my most favorite recurring Bleach stories. Thanks for sharing!

Wait until everybody here meets Future Bulma's daughter...

Wonder what would happen if Rao met one of the Superman's that was strong enough to punch planets.

One of my favorite on-going Bleach stories.

The story has slowed down significantly, to the point that it isn't enjoyable anymore. After forcing us to sit through the Gungans, we're still not really going anywhere. You need to get this moving a bit, because too much stagnation is the death of a story - especially one that's supposed to be full of action.

TO Morrow? Ivo? Or someone else? This amount of human-like sophistication, I'd guess Morrow.

Revealing meta knowledge is normally cringe, but your character managed to do it after he's established himself, so it actually works. Great chapter.

Love the chapter. Totally fine with the Rangiku scene.

Place where no sound exists, right? Not super familiar with the myth, but I know Odin put Loki there in Avengers: EMH.

Painful chapter. I have to agree that the entire Yinsen thing was pointless. His death, especially as a result of Tony's actions, would have hit him harder. And the MC really should have been able to prevent it.