Grax

3mth

Posted

I'm a One Piece-Fan and a Pokemon-Fan and I like the story more or less. Sadly the MC is an arrogant piece of sh*t. The writing is quite OK, there are worse.

Grax

6mth

Posted

I'm not a fan of bringing in characters from other Manga or Anime. I also don't like him killing the "good" important characters.

Grax

11mth

Posted

I love One Piece, so even though the story and writing quality is far from good, it still gets an OK.

Grax

1yr

Posted

In the beginning I thought it was a not so bad novel. Of course, as I love Pokémon I'm not really objective. And the further the story develops, the more I like this novel. It has the right amount of slice of life elements, as well as adventure, together with a little action. It is a little difficult to read it in one go, but as there are stable updates one can read a new chapter nearly every day.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

Grax

1yr

Posted

Writing Quality: Translation is absolute trash. Can't even get most names right. Some sentences make no sense. Stability of Updates: No Problem, there are many chapters. Story Development: Have a Chinese person One Piece with some Naruto abilities, packaged in a system. That's it. Character Design: No real design. World Background: It's One Piece!!!

Reborn in one piece with godly system

Anime & Comics · Murtadha_Ahmed

Grax

1yr

Posted

I liked the start. And then from 15th chapter I just thought ' What the hell are you smoking author?'. I thought it might become another good one, but now I'm going to drop it. Just sad.

And after class was over, we went to our common room, where I played a few games, which I always won, if it wasn't for luck, much to Terry and Anthony's annoyance and Phillips' trauma, which showed up in some time for a rematch. And I also talked again with Reese and Clarke, or as they asked me to call them, Victoria and Alysson, and we talked about a lot of things, from the muggle world and Hogwarts, to the kind of conditioner Snape uses.

Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Book&Literature · Se7en

Grax

1yr

Posted

Sometimes ridiculously dumb MC. And a rich trash and a psycho as love-interests. I want to have fun while reading. I don't want to get bored, or even to hate reading. Whoever likes this might have to go to a psychologist. Biggest part of the stars comes from the Translation Quality and the Stability of Updates.

A Star Reborn: The Queen's Return

Urban · Xia Wanying

Grax

2yr

Posted

The background is a rather cool fantasy setting. That were the good things. She: mistreated her whole life. Stuttering, everytime fearful when speaking to someone even the maids. He: Always misunderstanding his wife. Thinks she is like her abusive trash father. Still loving her. Nothing for me.

Under the Oak Tree

Fantasy · Suji Kim

Grax

2yr

Commented

Just asking, but you know Maximilian is generally a boys name in Germany. Maxi would be more or less neutral.

Maximilian Calypse paced around the drawing room.

Under the Oak Tree

Fantasy · Suji Kim

Grax

2yr

Commented

Sad. Although the name is not bad, I really wanted "Igneel". Reason: . . . . well it's a fire dragon.

"Kanlaon" Adrian said.

Omega Summoner

Games · XiaoKongxu

Grax

2yr

Commented

Please get one in Kalos. It's one of my favorite Pokèmon.

Brian sends out his last pokemon, an Aegislash, a pokemon that can change its attack and defense powers during the battle.

Journey Towards Greatness

Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH

Grax

2yr

Replied to TheForgottenKing

Which form of Hoopa?

There might be others but have never been discovered.

Journey Towards Greatness

Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH

Grax

2yr

Replied to CurseOneII

No. All three have the same head color in Shiny form as originally, but a pale yellow body, instead of the original pale blue one.

Julian "I think its closely related to Mew as to how similar it looks, the only difference is that it has two tail, white fur, and a red crystal on its head"

Journey Towards Greatness

Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH

Grax

2yr

Commented

mewthree ???

Julian "A Mew should have a pink or a very light pink color skin, a shiny will be blue in color, but this little guy here is pure white and it has two tails while Mew only has one, and it has a red crystal on its forehead as well"

Journey Towards Greatness

Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH

Grax

2yr

Replied to 69PAIN69

They are genderless, so ..... mother? Don't know.

Bond - 50%

Journey Towards Greatness

Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH

Grax

2yr

Commented

Fuchsia City, please.

Julian woke up pretty early as today he was boarding the ship to go to the Mainland, He got ready and boarded the ship after traveling for two days he finally reached a port near Fuschia city leaving the ship he took out his bike from his space pouch and rode it towards the city to refill his stock when he reached there he saw someone he didn't want to, it was Ash and it looked liked he has defeated Koga recently, Julian didn't want to get into trouble by meeting Ash as where ever he goes trouble follows him.