VexedReaping

6mth

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Concept is good, grammar is decent, space bar is a tad wonky

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VexedReaping

7mth

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copy and paste work, look up the title name on fan.fict.ion. No credit or disclaimer.

Marvel Universe: Transmigration

Movies · Story_Teller_229

Marvel Universe: Transmigration

Movies · Story_Teller_229

Marvel Universe: Transmigration

Movies · Story_Teller_229

VexedReaping

1yr

Posted

Grammar is horrid, would suggest an editor or an app to help. Character introduction isn't very creative or original. There's alot of "he did this and then he did that and then he got this". Break it out and go into it. Restart the character introduction by developing his personality traits and try to make sense of why he would do certain actions, instead of "He got really successful by himself really fast because he did this and this and this, then he met his dad and got angry with his mum and kicked his dad". Why would a lonely guy who reincarnates into a fictional world and got the ability to learn at an accelerated rate and became a self made millionaire have issues with his current absent parents?

VexedReaping

1yr

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Evac from end of reach to assassinate..... reasoning to experience live combat with Emile and learn self sacrifice from Jorge.Evac for being the youngest on reach then to meet the master in halo 3. would be interesting to see how he deals working with the crew with the flood

ch 0 9 Author's Checkpoint (1)

VexedReaping

1yr

Posted

Stolen content from fanfiction. Title is called "will of fire still burns"

VexedReaping

1yr

Commented

Trained personnel don't say clip, they say magazine or mag.

"Empty your clip" the radio voice said.

VexedReaping

1yr

Commented

next song from Edan project?

ch 33 Chapter 33: Album Recording.

Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)

TV · Alittlepiggy33

VexedReaping

1yr

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imagine suffocating on your own blood, trying to close the wound, and then seeing some random kid, holding a blade and is vomitting on you..

Wasting no time I came up to him and shut his throat assassin's Creed style. As I watched him fall gurgling blood and holding his throat I stared him down and wanted to say something but...what came out wasn't words but all the food I had eaten earlier. Okay it was my first time killing someone I had killed animals on my wilderness survival but this was different, after a few minutes I got a grip and just in time too cause the agent were rushing to the office with guns, I didn't know how they found out so quickly but I wasn't going to stick around and ask them.

Batman in MCU

TV · flowing_lightning

VexedReaping

1yr

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High chaos, could seen as a potential recruit for Loki or Thanos if the storyline leans in that direction. Or possible recruit to join Hydra... If Hydra is involved with killing his family, possible battle with the winter soldier leading into the civil war storyline. Excuse could be weakening potential shield recruits idk

ch 17 CHAPTER 17

Marvel: Dishonored

Movies · Dark_Vader98

VexedReaping

2yr

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Finally a author reps my city AUSSIE AUSSIE AUSSIE

ch 132 131 Identity Revealed (1)

Naruto: The Template System

Anime & Comics · Navy_King

VexedReaping

2yr

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What's the upload schedule if there is one?

ch 0 6 Chapter 5: Back on the Road

Trials and Tribulations of the Oathkeeper

Book&Literature · DeadlyMaelstrom711

VexedReaping

2yr

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Am I the only one who wants to know the percentage of the budget that goes towards the cakes?

ch 127 Preparing for the Gathering

Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]

Anime & Comics · Maerry

VexedReaping

3yr

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Hey mate, you back yet?

ch 31 Announcement #2

Pokemon: Advent Of Infinity

Anime & Comics · Dark_Xyno

VexedReaping

3yr

Posted

Pretty bloody good, I would recommend this to anyone who has an unhealthy relationship with MCU. Great character development and a stable timeline going on.

My Marvel Reincarnation.

Movies · ScottyTheD

VexedReaping

3yr

Commented

Wait, hold up, schizophrenic hero or would it be a schizophrenic villain in the end? If you're going to go the villain route, please please please go for a paranoid schizophrenic. If you need a reference of what that could be like, watch legend with Tom Hardy who plays as Reggie Cray's brother, Ronnie Cray

ch 25 Chapter 25

My Hero Academia: Reborn as Denki Kaminari (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

VexedReaping

3yr

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Noooooo, not only was the book deleted but on the cliff hanger. Bruh MFS ruined it. Sorry to hear that author-san

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Movies · I_am_potato_lord

VexedReaping

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Not sure if you're one of us Aussies or one of the poms from that.... Hopefully representing??? Ignore the cunts and just keep doing you, if your one of us then the pandemic situations is alot less ****ed up as the rest of the world.

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