MrNightmare

10mth

Commented

wdymn, doesn't make sense to me. drops his own blood then drinks it, is flowing ing his veins ???? doesn't make immune to it why does he need to drink it

Zheng Fugui rushed down with the Flood Dragon Guards, including these soldiers. He took a sip first to prevent himself from being infected by the plague.

Hide And Cultivate In The East Palace, Only To Find The Prince Is A Girl

Eastern · Mechanical Claw

MrNightmare

11mth

Replied to Yazukoto

out of 100 how much u rate it? and Is worth reading , clich scenarios ???? is original or copy pasted (similar to mtl clich ) 🤣

Overlord - Power of the Dragon

Fantasy · JimSuarez011323

MrNightmare

1yr

Commented

what the f author, he not she or her change it

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My second life as the successor to the Duke of Thorny Flowers

Fantasy · BlueHanma

MrNightmare

1yr

Commented

it's technically copy paste but different names and etc, only background is different, I hope to see it goes to different direction , since you said your inspired by ..... but you can't copy paste all the time, I could understand the beginning etc.

ch 0 8 Gentleman guardian

My second life as the successor to the Duke of Thorny Flowers

Fantasy · BlueHanma

MrNightmare

1yr

Posted

author, your writing confusing as f, I can't understand your writing at all, well you could understand after wrecking your brain too much but ain't worth it. especially fighting scene and conversation as previous comments the concept it very good

MrNightmare

1yr

Replied to bumabamba

I disagree with you, cultivation level keeps changing

MrNightmare

1yr

Commented

I hate relationships between mc and his wife and family etc

ch 41 Training Days 3

MrNightmare

1yr

Commented

can someone explain? I would appreciate it

[Title: Decimator: For having decimated about fifty monsters without taking any damage, you will get all 5 levels 10,000HP and 10,000MP from level 10. Statistics earned by levels are also tripled]

MrNightmare

1yr

Commented

mc flesh 😁 probably

"This is really a golden batch, huh? What a pity… You could have been perfect without 'that' inside of you." The 'demon' sighed upon reading his book.

Assassination Through the Netherworld

Fantasy · Photosphere

MrNightmare

2yr

Commented

there is Improvement , good job author 👏

ch 42 Too Ignorant

MrNightmare

2yr

Commented

she .

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MrNightmare

2yr

Commented

. he not she

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MrNightmare

2yr

Commented

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MrNightmare

2yr

Commented

from now on I will just help you edit or put ( . ) to indicate sentence doesn't make sense

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MrNightmare

2yr

Commented

can say no

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author, I am seriously getting annoyed, atleast you use the of name characters and mc correctly, I could ignore, she or he and grammars but changing name or misplacing them is major turn off for me. I know i am being unreasonable maybe , I could say you are better than me when writing story etc but I could differenate between he or she. maybe you have tired or something. I hope you can do minor editing. and thank for your hardwork.