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can you please make edward in the end sing by linking parks?

so far the fanfiction is very good, the only problem, in my opinion is that there is little evolution in the mc's personality in the sense, yes he was raised like this but almost 100 chapters have passed and he literally treats all the side characters in the same way of chapter 10 i.e. too slow in terms of development, this risks either causing Mc to remain like this until the end of the fic or that some event forces a change but I don't know in chapter 100 in my opinion you could have made him open up a little more at least towards momo and jiro

I can't find the problem of this novel but after 150 cap I have find it, the problem in this novel is the waste of time for all the little details... But finally it's a great novel

The true question is 8 wish and only can beat a Gillan......

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Author can I ask how many chapters I have to skip in this narrative arc to be able to return to the present where he resumed law because otherwise I will drop it I'm sorry I really liked I read 188 chapters in 2 days but I can't bear to read all these chapters of nerf, in a book for me the protagonist must always improve he can lose but losing his powers makes no sense I am 99% on the verge of dropping it I swear I feel really angry and frustrated I liked this Novel a bang.

Omg ahahahaha ahahahah that was fun ahahahahah

Wow that's intro was crazy [img=update]

Personally, in the audience I would like there to be the most important teams in the canon but above all the seirin because I would really like Shun to go to that school because in the others there are already the other members of the gom, also going to an unknown school would lead to many new characters and to introduce them all it would take too much so I would opt for seirin also because I don't think anyone wants to see Shun trample the seirin, having said that for the finals I expect a Shun show where he devastates everything and everyone haha.

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