OVERKILL

1mth

Posted

somehow feels boring , can't connect to MC or other characters . or maybe story telling is not good enough , keep up good work, at it wasn't a frustrating . i don't think MC has any cheats , author is not describing his powers clearly in starting chapter , it all about chatting with two random girls one is hayuga and other is uchiha. even sikamaru has more personality than these three combined . u could have described some of his future goals or his training .

OVERKILL

3mth

Posted

good enough for me to search it on Google for free read . and i couldn't find any site that has this novel for free , strange! i found a Chinese web site and using Google translator on it. this platform (web novel ) has lost all hope and I'm not goona spend a single coin on it. i paid many time before when this was a new platform but now paying is not worth it.

Simulation Towards Immortality In A Group Chat

Eastern · Ethereal Like A Dream

OVERKILL

3mth

Replied to Flexing_Moonlight

👍👍

"I will join the Sword Spirit Sect, seeking peace," Wang Ping shared his plan.

Simulation Towards Immortality In A Group Chat

Eastern · Ethereal Like A Dream

OVERKILL

3mth

Replied to Harshit_Singh56

at least some one get it😁 , but it wasn't overkill . let me explain clearly :- ---------------- i wanna tell author that it was great atmosphere going in the story , i feels like it's happening in a different universe . so don't ruin it with A/N and modern joke as your self . instead use his inner monologue or third pov or something else . i don't mind joke but those A/N ruined many novels . A/N can make a novel into fanfiction of low standard

(Sorry Just wanted to do something like this for fun how it is comment me, Please. Now let's go back to the story.)

Reincarnated As Karna With System In Mahabharata

Fantasy · Suryaputra_Karna01

The 12 eyes Within The Cultivation World

Anime & Comics · itachi1010

OVERKILL

4mth

Posted

i was hoping for some cultivation stuff, getting stronger slowly but i didn't see it. first chapter gave me hope for a reincarnation , system , and cultivation. but i have read almost 15 chapters i can't find any of that . what i found is that there are TWO MC, a male and a female . both have a system ( that wasn't mentioned in details , no lvl ups , no quest , just weird reward ) . things shifts around like devil fruit , mobile phone building a gundom , marriage , girls . male MC is some how top tier ruin master ( not explained at all , just author said it you believe it , no progression from start , no build up nothing ) then MC make some kind of nuke. random bullsh¡t is flying every where and you have to make sense out of it . both MC are bickering to each other in every single chapter . and this bickering is the main story i guess . Ward background : -- ZERO CULTIVATION REALM. : - ZERO explaination CHARACTER - two mc with systems , that it .SYSTEM - author didn't care about it , it helps the plot to progress in very rare ocacasions. and pretty much a click Bait .

OVERKILL

4mth

Posted

boring .... . author tried to explain his thoughts more than the story itself . no base for story

OVERKILL

4mth

Posted

boring , i read almost 10 chapters , i thought this will be because it has more than 200 chapters . it took so many words just to start the story . i was patient , but when it starts it becomes boring. [img=sad]

Nostalgic Gamer in a Cultivation World

Video Games · Rapture_Tales

OVERKILL

4mth

Commented

aahh this gobu gobu , i wanna see something interesting

"So it really is a broken up Filipino dialect. I guess I'll have to try to speak like that. So proper nouns don't need the Gak?" Dyne analyzed the language based on his discussion with the Gobu Gobu.

Nostalgic Gamer in a Cultivation World

Video Games · Rapture_Tales

OVERKILL

4mth

Replied to OVERKILL

this author wrote many books but most of them ate dropped and had 10-30 chapters max.

In A Cultivation World With The Highest Talent

Anime & Comics · Itachi101

OVERKILL

4mth

Posted

too boring with no attachment to story , a guy died got system (without any explanation ) , get points by people emotions , buy stuff , more he buys the expensive other things got ( that were cheaper before but proceeds to buy random s*t ) , i don't remember any conversations or monologue. this guys and story doesn't feel right to me . no good characters other than MC . system and his deeds are boring . there was nothing that annoyed me , but i felt bored .

In A Cultivation World With The Highest Talent

Anime & Comics · Itachi101

"No, this isn't what I wanted. This isn't what I need." Luna thought. "Stop! Stop it!" She struggled but couldn't feel her limbs. They had been removed. She was a fuckdoll again. No longer a human in the eyes of men. Just a body to fuck.

Milf Princess

Fantasy · Inkyug

OVERKILL

5mth

Commented

smell it 🤏 lick it 🤌 chew it🫦 , then eat it👄

"Why Am I Wet?" Sora said seeing the spot Xue Fei was sitting was wet, did she pee on him? no, it didn't smell like pee... Sora couldn't put a name to the smile, so he threw it to the back of his head and went on to dry himself off,

In The Cultivation World With An Anime Cultivation System

Anime & Comics · Itachi102

OVERKILL

5mth

Replied to AquaLuminos

i tried to read it 3 times but i couldn't read 5 chapters .

Omega Summoner

Games · XiaoKongxu

OVERKILL

5mth

Commented

why ??![img=Why]

Ch. 4 - Becoming a waiter

Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

Movies · SlimeSage

OVERKILL

5mth

Replied to smut_readee

just saw all the monster scene in that movie from YouTube it was 2 min. video. scary concept though .

"What the? Sharks on sand?" Kenji chuckled while waiting for the shark to strike him first.

Superman in Solo Leveling [Completed]

Anime & Comics · SlimeSage

OVERKILL

5mth

Posted

waste of time......................,......

Marvel: Sex Summon System

Anime & Comics · HentaiGodZ

OVERKILL

5mth

Commented

state didn't go up .

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Custom Made Demon King

Games · Dark Old Demon

OVERKILL

5mth

Replied to Jack_Nades

he has the plot Armor because of him being related to Angels , so MC don't want any risk for single soul but he didn't say he won't kill him.

Van Helsing struggled but found that he was so tightly bound that he could not free himself. But he was not disheartened. "Don't worry. That blonde beauty is a descendant of the Villelis family. Since she knows my identity, she'll know that we are sent by the church to help her. She won't watch us get eaten by wild beasts. She may come to save us after night falls!"

Custom Made Demon King

Games · Dark Old Demon

OVERKILL

5mth

Commented

2 point extra doesn't suit Uzumaki at all.

My vitality and intelligence are probably so high because of being an Uzumaki, as evidenced by the [Uzumaki Bloodline] skill.

In Boruto With a Perverted Customization System

Anime & Comics · Stygrxn

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