Anthony_Ellement

17d

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😂😂 while everyone is immediately recognizing a DBZ character I immediately think of nyarlathotep and their cat form in Cthulhu mythos 😂😂

Allen stiffly turned to see his visitor. With a peculiar appearance, a humanoid purple cat lay lazily on the floor. It yawned sleepily before its eyes fixed on Allen. Allen's entire body felt a cold sweat as he was looked at.

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Anime & Comics · Mr_Aizen

Anthony_Ellement

18d

Commented

terminal cancer in multiple organs and untreatable pain due to it is a situation that I would say that you could help as all that they could do at that point is lay on a hospital bed in ever increasing pain while unable to do anything else so it is literally only preventing days/weeks/months of suffering where they can't even walk

There's a moral dilemma similar to this with assisted suicide; is it right or wrong for a doctor to help a person die?

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Anime & Comics · Mr_Aizen

Anthony_Ellement

20d

Commented

danmachi is a good choice for leveling characters from chunin to kage+ power levels so even if she is too strong (ie. a goddess) she can still use the world to power up her wives/allies. marvel is a good place for strong characters to find strong opponents as it has conceptual beings that govern the existence of the powers gods wield. star wars is a good place for skill refinement and ally recruitment (also alien waifus if you want) and technology/weapon gathering. also the fate multiverse is basically a waifu goldmine that just so happens to have world and galaxy destroying entities that you can use as arc finishers quite cleanly if you wanted. basically I wouldn't mind seeing any of these in this fic but I'll just wait and see what comes later.

Well that's it if you have anything you would like to see in this Fic (including different worlds to visit in future let me know)

Kunoichi Yoruichi

Anime & Comics · Beat_Man

Anthony_Ellement

5mth

Commented

I immediately thought of pufferfish poison and pictured her dive fishing at her closest oceanic locale

'Well, what can I say? There simply were no good poisons around in the human world, and I'm too lazy to look for the proper herbs as well. It's not like I can order poisonous plants over the internet.'

Goddess of Ice: Corrupting Bleach

Anime & Comics · Maerry

Anthony_Ellement

5mth

Commented

the snow buildup and moisture would actually be a problem in an attic (likely made of would) that would need to be fixed to prevent mold and weight problems whereas a basement (likely made of stone/concrete) and built in the ground would be much much easier to store a blizzard so ... yeah it is very logical

"Well, where else was I supposed to put it? In the attic? That's just silly."

Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]

Anime & Comics · Maerry

Anthony_Ellement

5mth

Commented

should have made it a 3-way split to hit the center and both sides 😁

Naruto, meanwhile, could only gnash his teeth in anger. He was actually the one that made the cake split in half since he predicted that Yuna would see through the cake seal as well and would dodge it by leisurely tilting her head to the side. He made the cake hit the places where she could have dodge to, but Yuna had seen through that as well and opted to not move at all, causing the cake to miss her.

Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]

Anime & Comics · Maerry

Anthony_Ellement

5mth

Commented

there were two words in the last chapter that are outta place enough to be even a minor bother so I Would say you are doing great. I also put a paragraph comment on each with a correction and why it was wrong along with other uses to give context so it is easier to understand why in the future (hopefully anyway)

I further want to ask everyone if the grammar has improved or is it still as bad as at the beginning.

King of knights on MCU

Anime & Comics · A_poky1ninja

Anthony_Ellement

5mth

Commented

'went from' instead of 'became from' fixes this as a whole while 'became a share holder from a minority share holder' is how 'became' would work in this

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King of knights on MCU

Anime & Comics · A_poky1ninja

Anthony_Ellement

5mth

Replied to Anthony_Ellement

the 'in some' is another use of 'in' but you already use it in this chapter with 'in some respects' and another is 'in the end/beginning' but these are a rare few cases where my previous statement doesn't apply

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Anime & Comics · A_poky1ninja

Anthony_Ellement

5mth

Commented

'on the face of Happy' instead of 'in the face of Happy' but this is the most common mistake i ever see in any non English speaker. 'on' refers to anything showing or being at the surface of something such as showing shock while 'in' refers to either a shortened inside or into such as in/inside the mouth of blank or ran in/into a wall

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Anime & Comics · A_poky1ninja

Anthony_Ellement

5mth

Commented

I believe they are called speed stingers (the flightless ones with a paralysis toxin in their scorpion like tail stinger) but basically if you combine it with a MN then you can leave a trail of fire as you run around like ghost rider's motorcycle.also with that logic there is speedstinger MN Skrill (bewilderbeast) [scouldren/smothering smoke breaths] = a super fast speedster that leaves a trail of lightning (super chilled air) [steam/smoke] or any other combos you wanteven if they aren't too useful but I can see the lightning being something fun to show off while fire is useful for sabotage and firefighting, cold air would be useful for smaller fires by running around them to steal all their heat, and the steam or smoke is good to trap an enemy group in to blind them for easy pickings.but honestly it's just a case where other dragons or combos would work better but these could be more fun to do or be better in the sense that they are smaller effects so they are easier to prevent collateral damage

And please give me dragon power combos Hela should use in combat in the future.)

THE DRAGON QUEEN

Movies · Hela698

Anthony_Ellement

5mth

Replied to Hela698

thanks for telling us a rough time for a likely return of uploads (mid-late November) as it is a very rare thing for authors to reply to 🙂

"Yes he is I'd say he's Hiccup's age while Troels is ancient," Hela said before getting slapped on the back of the head by Troels's tail, "I meant young and handsome"

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Movies · Hela698

Anthony_Ellement

7mth

Commented

this is actually horrifying if you know what a real tiger tongue would do in this scenario

Tigress's mouth was filled with his cock as her tongue was licking the head inside like some kind of lollipop, making Jin grunt in pleasure.

Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

Movies · SlimeSage

Anthony_Ellement

7mth

Commented

even though they are nothing alike just this sentence itself makes me think of Angel from Buffy the vampire slayer

"That's the Angel I know."

Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

Movies · SlimeSage

Anthony_Ellement

7mth

Commented

in the middle of the chapter you kept having Bryce be referred to as she/her which is a very common problem with mtl's where they switch genders constantly so i just thought I'd let you know

ch 24 Capitulo 24

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TV · Dagon_vcg

Anthony_Ellement

9mth

Commented

thanks for the chapter and I'm happy to see this updated! 😄

ch 23 SECRET ISLAND

THE DRAGON QUEEN

Movies · Hela698

Anthony_Ellement

1yr

Commented

I'm rereading this story for my 3rd or 4th time but after reading this paragraph this time I suddenly got an image of hela looking at the red death and telling it to heel then scolding it like a bad dog after it does lol

"I'm glad you asked because like you said that's a lot of power to get at once if that happened before your body got used to the power you'll blow up so you'll get them gradually like your Dragon form or forms will start off at the size of a monstrous nightmare and it'll increase in size the more your body gets used to the power this also applies to the others as well you will start off with your own flames and the first dragon power you'll get is that of a night fury since it is the first dragon you bonded with. Your communication and control will be weak as well since you won't be able to talk to them at first but feel their emotions and you will be able to control only 5 Dragons with some being able to resist but with time it will be so powerful that no Dragon will be able to resist even an Alpha species" Saphira said.

THE DRAGON QUEEN

Movies · Hela698

Anthony_Ellement

1yr

Commented

when I read the first sentence my first thought was, Dawn (Astrid's sister) is doing what? Then when I realized it meant the time I started to think about a weird omake or short about Dawn breaking something as the sun rises or some other scene that could possibly make that first sentence make sense if the Dawn in it was referring to the character not time and got a few chuckles so thought I'd share and see if anyone else will get a laugh 😄

Dawn cracks peacefully over Berk. Snow covering the land like a sheet of blanket, winter has finally arrived on Berk like it always did. A Monstrous Nightmare flies over the village.

THE DRAGON QUEEN

Movies · Hela698

Anthony_Ellement

1yr

Commented

if he knows haki already then he will recognise armament haki immediately anyways so just start the training montage without any convoluted reasons for how he can't recognise her haki for such and such.

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Anthony_Ellement

1yr

Commented

great to have you back and I'm looking forward to finding out how your stories unfold :)

ch 0 9 CHAPTER 7

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