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The system is something beyond a primordial existence. View More
Rebirth and Second Chances · C3
1 week ago

rynnix: The novel starts off quite interesting. As is typical with the trend of transmigration stories, MC doesn't think twice about being teleported to another world- that's completely ok, actually. His transmigration and his immediate assimilation into the world can be excused, despite the fact that he came from a world of familiar smartphones and not a world with a jumbled mix of advanced "ring" systems, ancient relics, and wacky monsters.

That one point. That is excusable. However, much like credit card debt, you cannot declare bankruptcy the second time.

It would appear as though the author definitively planned out the first 20 or so chapters of the story- it feels pretty realistic, and the MC's wits show through in a manner that engages the reader, despite his crippling handicap. Ever present in the background was his impending death, as his lifespan was essentially crippled to around 3 months.

Then, the warning signs begin to show.

His cheat skill, a sort of system, activates and immediately catapults him to importance by granting him the ability to summon monsters he kills, which the translator terms "Imperial Censure". There is no explanation on how this role fits into society, simply that the role is "exclusive" and represents "high status".

What else does it do? Allow him to copy skills, for one. Instantly, MC is a comprehension genius. The author's lazy writing starts to show through here, around the assessment arc.

MC enters desert. Desert has sand monsters. Fight sand monster, summon sand monster. Mutated?! Joy!

The above is literally how the world building in this novel works. Author throws out a random location, describes it with a line or two, and then focuses back on MC.

This could be remedied if the MC was adequately fleshed out, but that doesn't occur, either. The whole reason the MC is joining the assessment is because his system would've deserted him otherwise, because apparently the transmigration, monster, and OP system tropes weren't enough- the author needs a quest aspect as well.

What else happens? MC meets possibly the most overpowered character in the entire story (literally a surviving half god) and his blood somehow managed to revive her. Then, she instantly heals his crippled lifespan. He subsequently proceeds to learn an Epic skill from watching her brew tea. Afterwards, he returns to the assessment like nothing happened.

Yeah. However, I digress.

Overall, the author attempts to demonstrate the MC's prowess at the expense of world building and other characters. Bai Yan, the main antagonist, was initially portrayed as aloof- he stated he wouldn't kill the MC because the MC was week. Flash forward 2 days and Bai Yan now picks fights whenever MC says anything. In public. What?

MC apparently is the only one with brains as well. With an impending monster horde, there's no way for everyone to escape. What should they do?

MC suggests rather plainly that they could group up and fight- author throws in some random locations to make MC seem smarter, and everyone reacts as if MC is a genius. He's really not. Even his power is borrowed. And what he does have came from plot armor. He's essentially a vessel that is given "personality" by the secret seeds of wish fulfillment within our hearts- nothing more.

If you value world building and character development, don't read this. If you're willing to turn off your brain and become one of the numerous other side characters that fawn over the MC, then I guess you could give it a shot.

*Translation and editing are both really basic. I do not profess to be competely adept at grammar, but as a native, the choppy sentences are quite numerous. Additionally, the word choice is extremely bland and basic.

On the flip side, I guess there's at least a semblance of uniformity across the mundane story, cardboard MC, and uninteresting descriptions. I hope the irony of this praise is not lost to you.

Monster Paradise
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C1339
I don't like the fact that you made the MC forget his mind reading ability that should have gotten stronger after becoming a semi god. I'm on chapter 1514 and he I going up against a overpowered enemy the fact that he can't read her thought to get some information about this organization is bull****. View More
Super Gene
1 month ago

RealmSeeker: Still think he should travel the world Batman style honing his abilities and developing new skills to prepare himself from the ****storm he’s about to face in a few years. Oh yeah can we get a status update and does anybody know what he looks like??

In the DC World with a System · C10
2 months ago

Geneses1: With Tony Stark intelligence I'm not surprised, in I'm surprise that he didn't go overboard with his invention.

In the DC World with a System · C9
2 months ago
With Tony Stark intelligence I'm not surprised, in I'm surprise that he didn't go overboard with his invention. View More
In the DC World with a System · C9
2 months ago

Geneses1: I like it it has everything any person could like interesting plot, future decisions. I just hope that the summoning is about animals not humans or it will get dumb real quick.

In the DC World with a System
2 months ago
Reading Status: C9
I like it it has everything any person could like interesting plot, future decisions. I just hope that the summoning is about animals not humans or it will get dumb real quick. View More
In the DC World with a System
2 months ago
Yo this translation is hot garbage, I want to read this novel but I'm getting close to my limit. View More
Monster Integration · C86
2 months ago

HopeBones5: Probably a translation thing, thanks for your review Ill try to see if i can get through the early chapters!, wish me luck!

Monster Integration
2 months ago
That's what I'm trying to say the mother need and an appearance it's been long enough. View More

Ryuutobi: Huh? The mother hasn't even made an appearance yet.

The Lust System · C61
2 months ago

BadGenuis: The concept is good. The story is not bad. But the pacing is too fast for me, there is not much of a character development.
The OPness of the MC doesn't bring the sense of satisfaction. Even OPness must be logical.
But it's still not that bad so 3 star for me.

Stronghold In The Apocalypse
2 months ago

God_Of_All: I feel like the author could have done a lot better job since the basic plot is very interesting and you can see the author improving with more chapters but after like around chapter 20 or so you just feel like the MC is kinda idiotic, the plot is interesting but I just feel like the author didn't do it justice.

Stronghold In The Apocalypse
2 months ago

Mythlium: I rated this slightly above a 2 previously. Had copious amounts of feedback on the issues, the grammatical errors, the repeating of multiple paragraphs to boost word count, and how it seems you even forgot what you wrote in previous chapters at times; then you deleted my review. Now I rate it lower.

Stronghold In The Apocalypse
2 months ago

DarkEvangeli: 2.6m views but only 130+ reviews. I smell the scent of deleted reviews.

I read over 30 chapters and the mc is insufferable and idiotic. The mc is wary of people's attitude in the apocalypse , if they gave in to their deep desires. But the MC is the one I see that changed since the apocalypse. He turned idiotic and crazy not only that but thinking about making out and having sex with girls he only knows for couple days and already refers to them as his wives. Not mention how he treats them as trophies and doesn't even ask their opinion before treating them as his already.

Stronghold In The Apocalypse
2 months ago

Splooj: This will probably get deleted because the author has a known history of deleting low rated reviews but I'll give it a shot anyway..

Feel like a got trolled reading this story.. mc is a complete idiot and all other chars feel like basic npcs. The idea of the story is pretty good which is why i kept reading for so long but i can only take so much.. this story just feels like a rushed high school project that wasn't thought out at all.

I'll still say you should give it a chance though if you're in to this genre and have time to spare.. obviously some people like this story. I wouldn't pay money for it though. GL author on your writing journey

Stronghold In The Apocalypse
2 months ago

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Stronghold In The Apocalypse
2 months ago

Geneses1: I like the idea of this novel, in the beginning it was enjoyable but currently I'm in chapter 97 and it no longer existing, when he found out the the royal family has more mutant he didn't pursue down to the better lab to get it's data and equipment, when he found out you can make your own skill without wasting zombie money he just ignores it, I especially hate in the beginning were instead of chosing weapons mastery he chooses the plane route I just thought idiot. In conclusion I wish you would up the MC's intelligence by a lot.

Stronghold In The Apocalypse
2 months ago
Reading Status: C1
I like the idea of this novel, in the beginning it was enjoyable but currently I'm in chapter 97 and it no longer existing, when he found out the the royal family has more mutant he didn't pursue down to the better lab to get it's data and equipment, when he found out you can make your own skill without wasting zombie money he just ignores it, I especially hate in the beginning were instead of chosing weapons mastery he chooses the plane route I just thought idiot. In conclusion I wish you would up the MC's intelligence by a lot. View More
Stronghold In The Apocalypse
2 months ago

Geneses1: MC when are going to hunt you mother

The Lust System · C66
2 months ago
MC when are going to hunt you mother View More
The Lust System · C66
2 months ago

Geneses1: When is the MC going to do his mother

The Lust System · C61
3 months ago
When is the MC going to do his mother View More
The Lust System · C61
3 months ago
A corpse sea sect has been born View More
Monster Pet Evolution · C346
4 months ago
He always says he's joking when he threatens them. View More

SmilingReader: I’d be worried to be served on a plate if I ever become one of Gao Pengs familiars. Even his most loyal and trusted Dumby was used to make soup stock 😱

Monster Pet Evolution · C162
4 months ago
Same View More

NihilisticBeauty: I read "Silly, Da Zi, and Dumby"
I was like, Nani?
Silly?

Monster Pet Evolution · C115
4 months ago
Same View More

NihilisticBeauty: I read "Silly, Da Zi, and Dumby"
I was like, Nani?
Silly?

Monster Pet Evolution · C115
4 months ago
Lol View More

xRicex: Hehehe jokes here....



Mom: If a boy touches your boobs say "don't" and if he touches your pussy say "stop"?
Girl: But mom, he touched both so I said "don’t stop"

Monster Pet Evolution · C47
4 months ago

xRicex: Hehehe jokes here....



Mom: If a boy touches your boobs say "don't" and if he touches your pussy say "stop"?
Girl: But mom, he touched both so I said "don’t stop"

Monster Pet Evolution · C47
4 months ago
I don't know about our God but form what the MC does, ours might be doing the same thing. View More

Oviie: Finally he is interacting more with his own world, atleast he is far more active than regular god.

Low Dimensional Game · C111
4 months ago
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