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3yr
Commented You are too evil an author, you should limit rapes more and put more character development in your mother, but in spite of everything I like your novel, you are not an ipocritical person who will be the hero and that nonsense the world is cruel and who would not do that . many people arian what you write about the mc only that they do not accept it I like you to be sincere with your thoughts but you would not want to be an enemy if I knew you haha if you write another novel because of criticism if you write another do it as they want evil in quotes and hero since everyone likes to be a hypocrite to say that they are saints so as not to look bad, guide yourself from other novels you will have more success but I will keep reading until you get lucky
ch 65 Don't tease me.
Perverted Demon
Fantasy · Noob69
3yr
Commented Autor cinceramente deberias de quitar eso de bajarle la edad alas mujeres y ponerles 6 eso es enfermo minimo 14 o 13 todavia se ve mal pero a esa edad ya tienen relaciones algunos y no pongas eso del perro eso es de verdad enfermo agradeceria que corrigieras eso o al menos que no lo pongas mas pero te recomendaria corregirlo muchos debieros abandonar cuando leyeron esa parte
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Anime & Comics · User280
Daoist856529
ch 61 Saori (+18)
Manager Store In Unknown World
Fantasy · Seiyon