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would there be any difference if he hadnt fought dumbledore. I mean this fight had no consequences. there was no meaning in it. he didn't injure dumbeldore, he didn't take or break the elder wand, didn't do anything. why did he fight in the first place?

harry has a bad childhood manipulated by dumbledore. just agune, if skylark grows his friendship, helps him see, then harry joining skylark leaving dumbledore.....its just i am feeling bad for harry, his whole life is worse than an elf, atleast they know their masters

we sure remember damien very differently. he is the worst among all bat clan members. i think damien is someone else's son with bruce's apperance

so there is still damian?

so, he doesn't like heroine because she matured and got sensible? free of heart? maybe I dont get it...well let's see what the author does.

lone hero was the perfect one. partner was a necessity for the original batman not this one. let others be a dumpster. gotham only needs batman. i just cant picture a situation where she is absolutely needed. just give her a normal and safe life in gotham protected by ONLY Batman because as he said gotham is his territory. waiting for constantine's retribution.

bruce wayne is batman? how did she get there? let them appear together and then her grain brain will turn into popcorn

cheated of lifesavings and inheritance? poisoned? and still reform? then why did you write about being an anti hero. i request you to understanding its meaning first

I hope line zhi goes to jail

dear author, is it that necessary to keep hiding that he has lost his memories -maybe he could just say that some of his memories are missing, no need for details. a lot of misunderstanding could be solved.

excellent story.......just few things.........1>let ace live for himself, trying to survive because it could bring pain to his loved ones is not that appealing...2>the image training part is a very big cheat, could have just given the power to practice in different space with maybe 20:1 time ratio compared to real life....3>maybe double devil fruits and swordsmanship.

go to company's boss, eye contact with him, let him agree to a new contract of higher pay, absolutely eve's choice on producing songs, higher percentage of profit distribution, and everything that is advantageous to the group, sign it fast and then viola, everything solved. but something tells me, june definitely does not have the brain to think of it. ............

author, how about a chapter named "cliffhanger"?

second chapter?

since there are enemies, there must be problems waiting for june. this time I hope to see him actively facing it, without being bullied first and do something instead of just getting videos from hidden cameras and not taking insults etc lying down too .much.

well, i understand the situation. but bullying is not a homicide. the passage shows that there were bruises on minjun. if it was brought to authorities notice, even if there were no proof, it would have made others aware and with his and the group's popularity, it would definitely be a positive one instead of fighting later by remembering the bully's name. moreover since minjun was surrounded by bullies outside school campus, june as a former thug must have realized minjun would be taken as a hostage if he fought back. ...........the problem is he was already going out to find minjun, why didnt he take his manager jay's help atleast if it was inconvinient for the other members to roam around.

well the novel is excellent, but no presence of powerful thug. he was in the fight in the first place and still procrastinated, what was he expecting? the bullies would say "yes, ...lets do it another day. I am not feeling well inside and we, who were beating up minjun just now are actually very kind...we don't want the kid to be involved." he broke the enemys nose and still wanted to leave? man, he didn't even stop the bullies in school, he just hid. he had chances after that to inform the school teachers and even ask jay or other members to help escort minjun from school. mc is lacking in brain department, only thing he is useful for is video recording, call recording to solve issues.

finally he killed someone.