P_Young_4470

1mth

Commented

OH MY GOD BRO THIS IS SO BAD WITH THE COLORS so far he doesn't even sound human but demonic

Moreover, Alex's penis was fierce, not only long and strong, but the veins seemed to be entwined like a green dragon.

Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System

Sci-fi · AllenWorker

P_Young_4470

1mth

Commented

bro color period seems a little unnecessary 🙄 😑

A thick black penis instantly popped out from the crotch, fiercely striking Li Wan Ning's delicate cheek.

Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System

Sci-fi · AllenWorker

P_Young_4470

1mth

Commented

true fact : you can breathe survival ,you can eat,sleep,and even screw survival in a apocalypse but you can't do any of those things with dignity (not alone at least it will always require survival first)

But today, she was forced to choose between survival and dignity.

Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System

Sci-fi · AllenWorker

Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System

Sci-fi · AllenWorker

P_Young_4470

1mth

Commented

if it's only twice as much it's not really worth it

Hopefully, this means more attribute points and Apocalypse Coins when the burial is complete.

Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System

Sci-fi · AllenWorker

P_Young_4470

1mth

Commented

man this is getting super boring and repetitive

A sudden noise startled the elderly person, freezing them in their tracks. The door had unexpectedly closed again?

Apocalypse - Zombie Evolution System

Sci-fi · AllenWorker

P_Young_4470

1mth

Commented

dudes way of writing and references are weird it's hard to read

His convulsions grew more violent, as if he was performing a full spin on a Thomas the Tank Engine, knocking over the surrounding chairs.

Apocalypse - Zombie Evolution System

Sci-fi · AllenWorker

P_Young_4470

2mth

Commented

why is he speaking of the goddess like that it's stupid

ch 81 Chapter 81 Lies boys tell to get laid(Bonus chapter)

Lust System: Monster girl Harem

Fantasy · Crimson_Blue

P_Young_4470

2mth

Commented

ch 78 Chapter 78 Community Service (+18)

Lust System: Monster girl Harem

Fantasy · Crimson_Blue

She saw how Selena was when Ethan was ass fucking her and knew it was better, she had never heard of it but it just happened in front of her and she wouldn't be able to get it out of her head till she was also fucked in the ass.

Lust System: Monster girl Harem

Fantasy · Crimson_Blue

P_Young_4470

2mth

Commented

at this point I'd like to say I'd love to read a story where the author doesn't shy away from getting girls pregnant maybe even addicted to getting girls pregnant I was just thinking that as I was thinking that I'd be nice if when one of these Mc that keep getting the ability to control whether they impregnate someone or not always seems to use that ability to NOT get girls pregnant 99% of the time but what if they just hit that switch to on and just went around screwing and loading up everybody then he later he runs around visiting the kids and when they get a little older he comes by and sets them up for development and training then later he takes the best most promising ones to his side maybe even makes an elite blood guard where you have to be of his blood to even enter (just spit balling)

Her mouth was open and her tongue was out, she moaned loudly as she convulsed and her pussy began leaking love juices but Ethan didn't stop as he was also close, he continued for some seconds before shooting his seeds inside her pussy.

Lust System: Monster girl Harem

Fantasy · Crimson_Blue

P_Young_4470

2mth

Commented

I got the perfect line to use in this book :Because I am a Man not just a male. P E R F E C T for this novel

ch 66 Chapter 66 Princess

Lust System: Monster girl Harem

Fantasy · Crimson_Blue

P_Young_4470

2mth

Commented

sounds like she just got trumped lol

Ethan removed the finger and his finger was already wet so he knew Lara was extremely horny, he thrust in again this time with two fingers making her moan even louder than the first time and the door to Cynthia's room opened.

Lust System: Monster girl Harem

Fantasy · Crimson_Blue

P_Young_4470

2mth

Commented

"Mmhmm..." Ethan grunted as her meat wall squeezed his dick restricting any movement while the girl was on the bed, her hands spread apart and her face on the bed, she was neither moaning nor screaming, but she could feel something up her ass.