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Who is the protagonist? Didn’t we read a story about tang?! Goodness Everything when it’s important is tang this here tang that. Poor girl… your author doesn’t like you.

Arigato !!!!!😋🙂😌😉🤣

Done

Wow umm is this the way the story will continue for women. Baby makers, emotional unstable, lazy, weak, motherly, and from this chapter I think you said basically one is sassy and audacious. What’s she gonna do? Yell at a shinobi to death? I can tell you put a ton of effort and thought into this novel. I’m just disappointed at the way the female characters are being portrayed. You writing is high level talent, just so you remember... half the population are women and they read much more the men do. And pay more also. Just a thought.

Tigers with wings. 😉

My name is Jay, that last bit hit far to close to home. 😣

Nice

You are the writer. You make them as amazing or trashy as you want. Right now the chapter I’m on where he had to beg for his inheritance, felt wrong. Nara has theirs, Yamanaka, Uchiaha, even the Sarutobi. You made the Kage wicked. Unless it was a trick. He would never do a thing like that if his parents were alive. It bothered me but hey you’re the author I’m the reader. To get a ride out of your audience is a good thing. I’m still sticking around... oh one more thing are you sticking with most of the original ideas? Stupid weak Hinata, Loud Crass Cherry blossom, weak Ino? Jut wondering. Women get such a bad.... ugh! Never mind keep it up looking forward!!!😊

😍😘🥰😂🤣😁 😣😣😣😣😣🥺😣😣😣nmggg mnggg gaigg 😮😮😮🤯🤯HAAAH!!!! YESSSSS OOOOOH HAAAAA!!! Take your time I almost choke on air tryna get the excitement out. Oh I’m gonna start from the beginning. It’s painted so visibly the pain and despair. Tho I’m eager take your time. I really do understand. No pressure no rush! Love, Your Internet Friends. P. S. I’m pretty sick so if I answer sporadically that’s why.

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Goodness Socrates...🤯!

Even better!!😁

Wow impressive! Laying the groundwork!

Hope all is well!

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Know your place!!!