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Why is the mc acting like a child of he’s a grown adult inside ? “Scratching his head(sorry) (tch) (ahaha)” This ngl stopped me from reading further. The mc character is not looking good so far.

Nd u r?

All for now, Good job soldier!

So we are not gonna say anything about your trying to copy other ppl work?? Tho the difference is that you changed a few things. Already read the original novel and it way better than this. Hopefully you don’t get sued for copyrights.

Idk if it just my preference and it probably might be but I just don’t like how the character is like out of no way a girl comes up and talked to him then they became friends, then she says a bad word and he says “language” like is the mc supposed to be what exactly. someone can know where this story is going from just the girl talking to him in the first place. It either shes a girl that brags and uses her family power act on the weak or think of them as inferior or she’s one that is annoying little girl thats become so called “friends” with the mc which later on turns into something serious. I hate the mc character, he’s 2 nice and a mc that oh u hurt my friends then u must die or some shit like that. “You have shown your power, so it my turn to show mine” that is just weird and cringe. Like they just met and he considered her his friend?? Someone that was lonely in his past life should not trust ppl this easily. I rest my case here, it a good story but sadly I will be stopping at 26 I think and won’t be reading it again.

Nah this story is…. Why would you put the god ruins YOU brought up in chapter 4 or 5 and then do basically a timeskip to 30 sum chapters before talking about it like what kind of novels is this? If you were gonna make the Mc cold and ruthless then why make him have affection, stick to one story line or plot so this shit won’t be confusing.

Nah, I hate this type of novels. Made a promise and then Tim for awakening and he awakens nothing or sim f trash shit. Then he either dies or get betrayed or sum shit like that then he gets a system. Like why can’t he be strong from the beginning? What’s stopping him? Why is he different? Why can’t he be normal like everyone else? Just the same novels I see everyday.