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    JoJo's Bizarre Fidget Spinner

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    The world has been reduced to fidget spinners. This sentence alone should terrify you. I'm Johnny and I have to find my father's killer and take revenge...using a fidget spinner.

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I don't think you did though? You mentioned those things in response to one of my comments but I don't think that you explicitly stated them in the story? View More

Tomoyuki: I put it somewhere, I can't remember which chapter.

Summoner Sovereign · C37
2 months ago
Urm, if you look at JohnOkl's profile, this was what he said about steal the heavens: "Author, please tell me my phone is being stupid, and you didn't just delete this story". He also liked a review that told you not to delete your story.

Are you sure you don't have him confused for another user? View More

Tomoyuki: JohnOkl.

The Golden Gravekeeper
2 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Potion View More
Summoner Sovereign · C1
3 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Summoner Sovereign · C1
3 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Summoner Sovereign · C1
3 months ago
I try to type, but procrastination gets me every single time. View More

Dank_god: Don't im just too lazy too type

Summoner Sovereign · C156
3 months ago

JC192209Mun: Please don’t drop the story! I probably wouldn’t be able to find another book like this for a few years.

Summoner Sovereign · C156
3 months ago

Dank_god: Don't im just too lazy too type

Summoner Sovereign · C156
3 months ago
"yet I just looked at your writing and it’s worse quality than free love-novels on amazon"

See, this is where I disagree. Compared to every other webnovel on this site, Tomoyuki's writing quality is perfectly serviceable. I don't know about the quality of free love-novels on amazon, but one of Tomoyuki's strengths is that his writing quality is at least consistent. He varies his sentence structures, uses apt metaphors and has good diction. (He employs complicated words like bereft, resplendent, inexorable, etc. without making his sentences feel awkward) I feel like this aspect of Tomoyuki's writing goes underappreciated, even if he might not be a great writer, because he is a pretty consistent good one. Simply put, Tomoyuki's stories just feel more fluid than the vast majority of stories here.

Criticise Tomoyuki for his sometimes lackluster plot and his inappropriate 4th wall rants. I just think its unfair to fault Tomoyuki's writing style as bad when its anything but. View More

Xenamurai: You ***** about vandal everywhere and multiple times, yet I just looked at your writing and it’s worse quality than free love-novels on amazon. Don’t drop writing, just work on improving your own writing both style and content.

Summoner Sovereign · C156
3 months ago
From Vandal300 himself:
"what I meant when I said Drop+delete was that I dropped the novel and deleted it in my library as I said this was too boring for me."

"'m not an ass to tell someone to delete their hard work"

Vandal might had worded his "criticism" in a blunt manner, but he didn't want you to delete your story. He's not that toxic. Sure, he can definitely stand to be more civil minded and leave constructive comments, but you can't accuse him of something he didn't do. View More

Tomoyuki: Yeah, but Vandal300 told me to delete it. I guess I'll ignore him then.

Summoner Sovereign · C156
3 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Summoner Sovereign · C1
3 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Summoner Sovereign · C1
3 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Summoner Sovereign · C1
3 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Summoner Sovereign · C1
3 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Ring View More
Summoner Sovereign · C1
3 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Ring View More
Summoner Sovereign · C1
3 months ago
Yeah, V-tamer is gud. There is a surprising amount of strategy in V-tamer - battles are won through with tactics, even if V-tamer does lean into the standard shonen power up troupe at times. The strategy used in the penultimate battle against Arkadimon felt logical; it really felt that Taichi was only able to think of a counter based on the information that he was given. View More

Tomoyuki: Ha ha ha! But I've also read Digimon V-Tamers (the manga) where Taichi and his V-dramon are forced to fight and defeat Digimon that are of evolutionary stages higher than theirs!

Summoner Sovereign · C144
3 months ago
Just a fun little question, since I'm assuming that you at least watched a bit of digimon growing up in the 90s. (?) How favourably do you think of digimon's power system, where a higher stage digimon will always trump a lower stage digimon on a one V one fight regardless of strategy? Sounds a lot like cultivation stages when you put it into perspective. View More
Summoner Sovereign · C144
3 months ago
This isn't digimon tamers View More

DarkHunter1267: Can Richie do fusion with his summons ?.And thanks for the chapters

Summoner Sovereign · C137
3 months ago
Wait, why is the word a m a t e u r censored? Its not even a vulgar term. View More
Summoner Sovereign · C125
3 months ago
By adhering to the 88 constellations, I meant adhering to their myths and all they connect to one another - not the existence of them in the story themselves. I suppose you already mentioned the difficulties of being cognizant of the relationships between the constellations in an earlier reply. View More

Tomoyuki: I'm not sure what you're talking about here, but again, it's not so much about me alluding to future events (or my inability to) but honestly, I never think of future events. I don't plan my stories out, I just randomly write whenever and whatever comes to mind, and do one arc at a time (not chapter, but arcs). So the whole future allusion thing is impossible for me.
I'm sorry to have to disappoint you, but quite honestly I'm probably the most incompetent writer alive and my stories will be full of inconsistencies (it's inevitable because I don't plan or plot the story). The quality will remain poor because I simply don't have the talent or capability to write a good, consistent story. The only thing I'm capable of is quantity, not quality, and it's not about checking, it's just that these things don't even occur to me so I don't even know what to check for. I could be staring at a mistake in the face and not know it's a mistake or inconsistency.
But I mean, I have been adhering to 88 Constellations so far and didn't randomly create some new original Constellation, nor did I have Richard learn other stuff (that xianxia story was killing me because he had so many techniques people were asking why he never used this one or that one).

Summoner Sovereign · C125
3 months ago
I mean, you already have a bunch of different premises that could feasibly be reworked into something self consistent. Instead of tossing your finished - or incomplete - stories into the recycle bin, you could ponder over them a while more. Add some foreshadowing, review your work. Even if your attempts fail, at least you tried. Not everyone has the luxury of working with a first draft they can mercilessly tear into.

C'mon, Tomoyuki, you're a pretty competent writer. You got your writing essentials down pat, which already makes you leagues better than most ******* writers on RR and Webnovels. Your sentences might not have poetic flair, but they are serviceable. You vary your sentences, unlike how the two sentences I wrote. (which also begin with the word 'You') Your stories have pretty darn good writing; an impressive feat, considering that you claim you write spontaneously. By downplaying your abilities, you're leaving your neck open to readers who don't care about writing a fair review to pounce on you - and you inflate the egos of mediocre writers as well when you claim their stories have no fault and are pleasant to read. I have no qualms about sugarcoating a review for a mediocre writer who I think has potential, but I don't proclaim that their work is the best, because it's objectively not. Be fair to yourself and others.

Is the thought of being good but not good enough really that bad? Acknowledge your strengths (which you have plenty off) and your weaknesses. (which you are already aware off, overly so I might add) You have the capacity to write genuine scenes; the Tang Qi Hong rejection scene was surprisingly poignant for a romance that never took off for example. Maybe a weekly release might benefit you. Don't stockpile chapters. Take the time to rest and reflect on the current arc, indulge in your hobbies, write one chapter a week. That sounds nice.

Slightly irrelevant, but have you considered writing a litrpg or trapped in a game isekai? It's prime material for parody, even if others have tried to put their own humorous twist before. The existence of game mechanics provides a through line for consistent abilities down the road too. Maybe that could be one of your next ventures. View More

Tomoyuki: I'm not sure what you're talking about here, but again, it's not so much about me alluding to future events (or my inability to) but honestly, I never think of future events. I don't plan my stories out, I just randomly write whenever and whatever comes to mind, and do one arc at a time (not chapter, but arcs). So the whole future allusion thing is impossible for me.
I'm sorry to have to disappoint you, but quite honestly I'm probably the most incompetent writer alive and my stories will be full of inconsistencies (it's inevitable because I don't plan or plot the story). The quality will remain poor because I simply don't have the talent or capability to write a good, consistent story. The only thing I'm capable of is quantity, not quality, and it's not about checking, it's just that these things don't even occur to me so I don't even know what to check for. I could be staring at a mistake in the face and not know it's a mistake or inconsistency.
But I mean, I have been adhering to 88 Constellations so far and didn't randomly create some new original Constellation, nor did I have Richard learn other stuff (that xianxia story was killing me because he had so many techniques people were asking why he never used this one or that one).

Summoner Sovereign · C125
3 months ago
Vermillion Phoenix View More

Tomoyuki: Who is VP?

Summoner Sovereign · C125
3 months ago
'He has a perchant for blowing things up.' - but even then, they were vaguely related to their myths. VP's AOE effects were only strong because VP was strong. Sagittarius's flaming arrow was somewhat related to its arrow. Orion's Rigel was somewhat related because you Orion was a hunter, and Richard interpreted Orion as the hunter's bow.

I only mentioned that Antares was unusual because it having a nuke like ability was never alluded to in its myth - and the only reason that it might had been a nuke ability that was Richard's imagination warped it to become a nuke, even if I don't personally agree with that explanation.

As I said, you could just claim that you were using in-universe myths and not actual real life myths to handwave all of the issues I have. I don't think that this is an elegant solution, but it is a plausible solution. View More

Tomoyuki: Again, I am not an omnipotent god who knows every single bit of legends and myths. I forget things, I have a lot of stuff I need to study and I am not a walking encyclopedia. I make mistakes, things don't occur to me, or I have no reason to write what you are asking me to write. For God's sake, Richard nuked Hades with Orion's Rigel many chapters ago. Before that he blew up a bunch of monsters with Sagittarius's Alnasl. He already has a penchant for blowing stuff up. He is just simply increasing the scale of his area of effect spells in a gradual manner. Why would I need to go out of my way to make him fascinated with nukes? It's not a literal nuke to begin with anyway, I just use it to talk about the scale of the explosion, not the radiation and all that. His use and creation of mass destruction spells (and I'm using the term loosely, I mean area of effect spells) has been consistent since long ago.
And don't forget Vermillion Phoenix's massive area of effect spell right in the first 10 or 20 chapters. This isn't the first time he's doing a spell like this, he's been gradually upgrading their power and scale. It was never all of a sudden.

Summoner Sovereign · C125
3 months ago
Even so, its common practice for good writers to allude to future events, even if the reader might think that certain details are unimportant at the moment. Take nobody103, the author of Mother of learning. Unimportant details are abound in the story, yet they pay off when he gets Zorian to act on them. People on r/rational praise MOL for setting up all these seemingly unimportant one off details in the story. You might not think that they are important, but his readers do. Just go pop the question on r/rational and I'm sure that MOL fans will be happy to indulge in your queries. The same applies for any good piece of work really.

I believe that you are a competent writer who can keep his story self consistent, unlike many novels on webnovels. As such, I hold you to a higher standard. If you say that you're basing your system on all 88 constellations, I'm going to believe that you are. That's how much I respect you. You're not a god but neither is nobody103 or any other author, yet their stories are praised for their consistencies. Real life matters do hinder your ability to self evaluate your work, I concede, but when does anyone judge a story based on the life of the author first? Valid criticism (I'm not saying that mine is, just valid criticism) remains valid based on the quality of the work alone. One can emphasise with the plight of the author, but that doesn't absolve the work of its faults, which I'm sure every story has. Emphasise with the author. Critique the work if necessary - After all, you have left harsh (but valid) critiques on stories on FP before. Would your critiques be any less valid if it turns out that the author has spent an entire month for a single chapter you dislike? No.

Take a break if you need to check your stories once in a while. It's good practice in general. No one is asking you to be an omnipotent God, you're only human. Don't sacrifice your mental health for an online story and a reader base you'll never meet. View More

Tomoyuki: I didn't withhold it, I just didn't think to mention it. It's not an important detail.

I could, but we'll see.

Again, it never occurred to me, and there was no circumstances for me to have Leo hit by anything. I'm not omnipotent, I don't know all the legends and sometimes some bits of information slip by me. Nor can I squeeze everything into a chapter because I'm struggling with the pace, I don't want info dumps and quite truthfully sometimes it just slips my mind or I can't remember certain aspects of particular legends.

Summoner Sovereign · C125
3 months ago
"Antares is just the brightest star in Scorpio, and I did that whole mass destruction thing because Scorpio reminded me of the Death Stinger from Zoids." - This is still quite a liberal interpretation of Scorpio that deviates from the 'use their myths to interpret the abilities of the constellations approach'. Maybe if it was shown in the story that Richard was fascinated with nukes, and thus was able to create Antares based on his obsession alone, then its inclusion might seem natural, but its inclusion seems a little weird right now. I could be forgetting things, but Stargazer summoner at least had some allusion of Antares's ability even before the campfire, whereas it seems tacked on here. Oh, and in your previous reply two years back, you stated that "That came about from Scorpio being a monstrous creature capable of mass destruction (nuke = mass destruction)". Maybe you changed your mind. View More

Tomoyuki: Because Richard (and Tomoyuki) can't summon humans. So all the human-type Constellations are summoned as weapons instead of as humans.

I know Cephus is a constellation, but calling it chains of Cephus makes no sense whatsoever. I have another idea for Cephus, considering he's a king.

What makes you think Leo is not impervious to attack or resistant to damage? He has never gotten hit by any of the enemies so far.

No, I did not. Antares is just the brightest star in Scorpio, and I did that whole mass destruction thing because Scorpio reminded me of the Death Stinger from Zoids.

Summoner Sovereign · C125
3 months ago
"Because Richard (and Tomoyuki) can't summon humans. So all the human-type Constellations are summoned as weapons instead of as humans." - I feel like this cool tidbit could be addressed in the actual story. Don't just withhold trivia on a need to know for the plot basis - readers appreciate details sprinkled throughout the story like this.

"I know Cephus is a constellation, but calling it chains of Cephus makes no sense whatsoever. I have another idea for Cephus, considering he's a king." - You could just call it Order of Cephus. Simple. I don't get how being a king gives Cephus any special abilities but I guess I'll have to wait for your interpretation.

"What makes you think Leo is not impervious to attack or resistant to damage? He has never gotten hit by any of the enemies so far." - Because Richard has never stated that Leo was based on the nemean lion in-universe. Leo never got hit because Richard didn't want it to get hit by the Castrate's shockwaves/Franklin's special attack. If Leo was impervious, Richard won't had recalled Leo. If Leo was at least resistant, there should been a sentence or two stating that Leo was resistant but not resistant enough. I get that withholding critical information from the readers can lead to suspense in later fights but I don't like this approach. Explain the abilities of your characters and use them in creative ways. Don't shrug your shoulders and say 'oh, I just didn't explain this ability completely'. Its a common criticism of shonen manga. View More

Tomoyuki: Because Richard (and Tomoyuki) can't summon humans. So all the human-type Constellations are summoned as weapons instead of as humans.

I know Cephus is a constellation, but calling it chains of Cephus makes no sense whatsoever. I have another idea for Cephus, considering he's a king.

What makes you think Leo is not impervious to attack or resistant to damage? He has never gotten hit by any of the enemies so far.

No, I did not. Antares is just the brightest star in Scorpio, and I did that whole mass destruction thing because Scorpio reminded me of the Death Stinger from Zoids.

Summoner Sovereign · C125
3 months ago
Because of offscreen discord harassment that Tomoyuki was made aware of, probably. View More

Wildstara: Why did you delete your other story?

Summoner Sovereign · C125
3 months ago
So it's just imagination translates into magic? The power system is not hardset like Hunter x Hunter? Yeah, cool. I still feel its a little weird for Richard to base his summoning magic on specifically constellations though rather than any other mythology. At least in Stargazer Summoner, we get a scene of Tomoyuki lying in an observatory, so the association is somewhat made, but here the constellations feel like 'oh, this is just a thing that Richard does' if you catch my drift. View More

Tomoyuki: The reason why Richard has the constellations close to their origins because it's easier to manifest them in reality if he has something that he can image them with, rather than just pulling them out of nowhere. An imagination of something you're already familiar with is much stronger than you just randomly creating something from nothing. There is no reason why Richard can't change the myths, but there is no reason why he should change them either. Like why should he change Virgo from virgin to prostitute? It's easier for him to image the virgin Virgo as something related to Iron Maiden than to just completely rewrite her myth from scratch. There are 88 different constellations, why would he go and rewrite and create each mythology from scratch? It'll be a complete waste of time and a pointless exercise.

Summoner Sovereign · C125
3 months ago
Of course, this is just fun theorycrafting. Feel free to ignore every bit of it. (Or have a rival character use it, to present Richard with an even challenge on both the strategic and physical fronts) I prefer abilities to be a little more unique other than 'this is a different elemental attack', 'this is a stronger attack', 'this is a stronger attack that needs time to charge up', 'this is just a sturdier summon with different elemental attacks' or 'this summon is just one fast boi'. I like me restrictions, (Hunter x Hunter *wink wink) but I can also appreciate a good o' slugfest. Just don't expect me to comment much about the intricacies of the fights.

Ultimately, I think there is still a lot more room to develop your power system, considering the interconnectness of your different myths. It might be worth it to dedicate some time into studying and analysing all the different myths - but that time could be used to write anyways, so whatever. Just do what you like best.

Man, why does webnovel even have a wordcount limit? View More
Summoner Sovereign · C125
3 months ago
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