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stormfalcon13: So we have a group of guys that are bombing a nest for some reason. Okay... This is pretty cool. A pink bomb is not something I was expecting.

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WateryRein: So that's a nest. That is crazy cool. Dead monsters are used to make new monsters. I like that. Also a flying monster, and massive pink bombs.

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Tommy_Donald: Okay finally caught up. It did take me a while to, since your story is so long...

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WateryRein: I 100% agree with you. So far I have liked this story a lot, but hot damn does it need to speed up and shrink down sometimes. I feel like the pacing is this tales biggest flaw.

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Pieperson2001: See. Once again, it came full circle. We find out here how Hero works, and what his big parts are. The problem is that this was so slow. Don't get me wrong I don't want it to come out of nowhere, and I do like how it was seen the problem is we had Hero in a comma for like four chapters. Now don't get me wrong. I did like this, but I felt like if you could just shrink it down. Again these chapters are really big, and last long. If they were shrunken down it would just work so much better...

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stormfalcon13: Finally Hero is awake. Geez it took you like 5 chapters

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RainyLiquid2020: Thanks for the input. :)

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RainyLiquid2020: Thanks for the input :)

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stormfalcon13: You called this chapter finding the plot. Author Oh how I love you.

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WateryRein: Finding the plot. Lol.

Okay again, I do like this story but again, we've really slowed down. Thankfully you upload everyday so I don't have to worry about that...

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Pieperson2001: I feel like these last few chapters are some of your biggest strong suits, and flaws. You have this amazing world with all this plot, and it is built up really well, and funny... And then it begins to slow down at times... At the beginning of each arc it stats off so well, and then it begins to just slow down, than speed up, than slow down. You have a really good story, you just need a better pacing.

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WateryRein: Yeah... Like I am liking the lore and stuff that is being reveled but I wish it was done a little better

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stormfalcon13: I feel like you had a fever high while writing these last few chapters as they are bat**** crazy, and I love it.

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RainyLiquid2020: Thanks for the input ;) I know it did slow down to an extent. All of this is good input. I am taking everything I learned to improve each chapter from this point on.

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WateryRein: I do agree with the others. The comma subplot really slowed this down.

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Pieperson2001: Hero. Casually heals lava being splashed on him. Gets bit by a big boi, and is conked out in a comma...

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stormfalcon13: When will Hero wake up? It has been 2 chapters of him being in a comma, and I am already tired of it...

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Snidog752: Thank you for this chapter

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KnIvialDanial0002: What the **** was this chapter?

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stormfalcon13: Ohh... Spooky ghost dream world and a bit of jealousy... Hmm... In all seriousness, I am excited to see what happens next.

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WateryRein: Ominus!

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RainyLiquid2020: What makes it really great was that I didn't actually intend for it to come off as a jealous Ken... I just am really awful at trying to write platonic relationships... Seriously wait till Hero and Kitsune interact again. You'll think they're trying to secretly bone each other.

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WateryRein: But what about Hero X Ken X Irene???

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WateryRein: A creepy old preist huh? Weird. Any one else see that red flag?

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stormfalcon13: You're crazy-

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Pieperson2001: No! You won't get me to ship Hero with Irene. Only Ken.

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Snidog752: Thank you for this chapter

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stormfalcon13: A creepy priest who takes care of a town in the middle of nowhere, that is somehow growing food despite the freezing cold, and have changed their story for how things were working at least twice now, and are being attacked by monsters. Call me crazy... But I think he's the bad guy!

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Snidog752: Thank you for this chapter

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WateryRein: Well Hero's dead

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