Kotik_Kotik

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The hairy beast was called a Troll, which confused Seth a little, but he accepted that it was probably Urth's version of one. The soul's description called it a crude and violent beast, fitting most trolls he knew. The troll's geass was a 90% immunity to physical damage, but in exchange, it would turn into brittle stone under the direct sunlight.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik

3d

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go-->goo

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The Innkeeper

Fantasy · lifesketcher

Kotik_Kotik

11d

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It is time

The Innkeeper

Fantasy · lifesketcher

Kotik_Kotik

18d

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bro didn't notice the praying mantis nor the oriole

"You still don't get it. It's Householder's Rights," the bard whispered into his ear, before tightening his grip. When the cicada fell silent, he threw the unconscious cultivator covered in severe burns, into the middle of the room, for all the defiant watchers to see.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik

19d

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if you've read any of the dozens of transmigrator/regression stories you'll feel right at home, mc is the trash of a powerful family that is poisoning him, if he doesn't change the future he'll have a miserable end etc etc. Everyone behaves like it's a copy paste cultivation novel, in chapter 8 we even get the famous lets see who's better amongst us bet with a cartoonishly overdrawn young master with the punishment being barking like a dog in front of the whole assembly... personally i dont find the continuous repetition of these storyblocks entertaining and the rather glacial and infodumpy pacing doesn't charm me either. The book is very honest about what it is so you'll quickly know if it's something you'll enjoy but i for one won't be induligingany further.

I Became a Wizard with a Quest Book!

Fantasy · DurcalAka

Kotik_Kotik

22d

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a group -->by a group

He was not the only one who had his eyes on the funny group of friends, openly showing the prosperity of Minas Mar. As he was watching, there was a young man approaching the group. He was handsome, clad in expensive, high-quality robes, and surrounded a group of sycophants.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik

23d

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piece-->peace

The mortals of the land were not prepared for monsters, invaders, or divine beasts suddenly appearing outside of dangerous regions. The piece of the mainland that had been kept for millennia was broken as otherworldly beasts traveled through the land, marauding and looting.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik

1mth

Commented

hat-->had

Was this a peculiarity of their world? Seth had heard about it in Ora, oftentimes worlds hat their own system of magic or style of mana usage. The materials at the tower of Willis were a good example.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik

1mth

Commented

me-->myself

"Yeah, I keep telling me that, too," he said with a wry smile.

Blacksmith of the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Arkusar

Kotik_Kotik

1mth

Commented

Like like -->look like

"But that wasn't all, right? You don't like like it was just that," Sivri inquired perceptively. Seeing that she would let go of it, the blacksmith simply told her everything he found and suspected.