Badges 6
Moments 80
8mth
Commented slight error (not a big deal) you kept referring to fish rolf and Hermione as the 3 boys when there's 2 boys and one girl .instead you could change it to the 3 kids. you don't need to change it if it's a hassle just thought I'd point it out :)
ch 419 Chapter 418: Portkey (Edited)
Master Druid in Hogwarts.
Movies · inferno303
9mth
Commented my advice don't follow the pull as it may lead to you losing motivation for the story. it's your story not the readers so do what you want most don't care for some small plot holes and as long as you still write what you want and it doesn't come out as gibberish people will still continue reading.
ch 0 7 Sorry, explanation and questions
Ban In DXD
Anime & Comics · IsekaiFan
Commented
So if I read right, something auto unlocks if he knows exactly how its made? Then can't he just use the internet and look up a ton of things searching how pretty much anything useful is made? Guns,food,explosives,bulletproof vest,fences,etc. Also if so since lightsaber is in the list can't he also look up how its made to?I'm pretty sure its explained somewhere on the internet. Along with tons of other useful fantasy or sci-fi weapons?
ch 0 2 First Steps: Basics
Z-Dayz : Crafting In An Apocalypse (HOTD AU)
Anime & Comics · ashes_
Replied to SoulOfALostUndead
Plus the reality marble part doesn't have too look like emiyas so you can choose a design for his reality marble for ubw. Ps the ability belongs to another character named shirou (spelt different but still the same) so it fits
ch 0 8 not a chapter, ideas for rewards.
Deleted. Erased from existence. #1
Anime & Comics · TheMotherLand
Commented
Maybe give him UBW from fate its a strong ability but only when it copies a lot a strong swords but the naruto world doesn't have that many strong swords except for the 7 swordsmen of the mist swords. So it won't be too strong but he will have infinite weapons for any fight provided he has the Chakra for it.
ch 0 8 not a chapter, ideas for rewards.
Deleted. Erased from existence. #1
Anime & Comics · TheMotherLand
Commented
What about the onion and his daughter you can't leave them behind
ch 36 A Year, and Brute Force is Key.
Dark Soul System(DxD)
Anime & Comics · BlackSwordman1234
Replied to SoulOfALostUndead
inches* i misspelled that
This chapter has been deleted.
In Marvel with template system
Anime & Comics · MynameJeff
Commented
Say you give him Edward elric, his clothes would mimic his his hair would turn blond his eyes gold his arm and leg metal and lastly he would get a couple inces shorter
This chapter has been deleted.
In Marvel with template system
Anime & Comics · MynameJeff
Commented
Honestly I'm fine with the way it is but if you do change it don't just change the clothes. Hair, eye, and skin color should also change to match the charicter
This chapter has been deleted.
In Marvel with template system
Anime & Comics · MynameJeff
Commented
Blood bending is my guess its skin is invincible but not its insides
ch 42 Chapter 42: Negotiation
Avatar: Awakened Gamer
Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
Replied to TheZeronet
I just said the first ones that popped in my head cus of the characters abilities. Escanor uses sunlight for his ability demon slayer use sunlight to kill demons / dian is big titans are big / ban well it was just the first anime/manga to pop in my head the world's I said aren't a solid thing they were just the first ones I thought of and I didn't give much thought to it.
ch 163 Savior
Fairy Tail: The Dragon's Sin
Anime & Comics · ShayZero
SoulOfALostUndead
Chaos Warlord: Reincarnated in Eldrich with the Devil System!
Fantasy · DurcalAka