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All right with the novel except that I think going too slow would be good a time jump when you're already in the first team and not the under 12 but the novel is good anyway. 🤠👌

Simply great the novel all the support of me to the author with such an amazing novel although it reminds me of extraordinary Genius but the less racist and patriotic version. 🤠👌

Very good story Author continues with the good work and I wish you the best in this great novel 🤠👌por cierto saludos desde Bolivia 🇧🇴 😃

Excellent novel The One You Created Author. My only problem with the protagonist is that he's very focused on football and doesn't see what to do with his money other than send it to his grandmother. He believed that he should afford more in his life such as buying cell phones or clothes, etc. But for the rest great author novel and follow the path of light and do not drop such a work of art.